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Aisa mujhe lagta hai..
ki ek ajnabi ladka mujhse..
pyar bahot karta hai..
mujhe bahot chahta hai..
chup chup ke dekhta rehta hai..
par nazar milane se darta hai..
nazar se dur jab hoti hun
mujhe talashta rehta hai..
shayad woh mujhe bohat chahta hai..
paas aana chahta hai..
kuch kehna chahta hai..
par kuch ghabra sa jata hai..
usse dekh mujhe aisa lagta hai
pyar woh mujhse karta hai
par kehne se darta hai..
Dil bhi kitna pagal hai
kya kya sochta rehta hai..
par baat ek mujhe kehna hai..
woh mujhe jaan se pyara hai..
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2008, 01:11:09 PM » |
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Wah Wah Punam.. bahut Hi Khubsoorat Ehasaas Likhe Hain.. !! Waise yeh Khushkismat Hai Kaun.. pata chalte Hi Mujhe zaroor Bataana..!!!  |
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2008, 01:19:52 PM » |
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Really Nice Punam... Waise woh hai kaun  Hume bhi bataana... |
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2008, 02:45:21 PM » |
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kya baat hai, kon hai wo ladka Baadal |
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2008, 03:10:54 PM » |
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nice lines Punam!!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 27, 2008, 03:48:50 PM » |
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aha nicely expressed lines Punam. Keep up
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2008, 09:44:07 PM » |
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wah punam ji kya baat hai
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YE PYAR KA BANDHAN AEISA HAI
KAB HO JAYE NA JANE DIL
NA HO GAR TO TADPE DIL
GAR HO JAYE NA MANE DIL
BACHAIN SA MAN HO JATA HAI
NEEND DOOR KAHI KHO JATI HAI
PAR DOOR NA IS SE REH PAYE
HAI CHEEJ YE KYA NA JANE DIL
JISNE KIYA WO TO TADPA
NA JISNE KIYA WO B TADPA
HAI IS TADPAN ME KAISA MAJA
YE KHOOB MERA PEHCHANE DIL.
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2008, 09:45:50 PM » |
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Aisa mujhe lagta hai..
ki ek ajnabi ladka mujhse..
pyar bahot karta hai..
mujhe bahot chahta hai..
chup chup ke dekhta rehta hai..
par nazar milane se darta hai..
nazar se dur jab hoti hun
mujhe talashta rehta hai..
shayad woh mujhe bohat chahta hai..
paas aana chahta hai..
kuch kehna chahta hai..
par kuch ghabra sa jata hai..
usse dekh mujhe aisa lagta hai
pyar woh mujhse karta hai
par kehne se darta hai..
Dil bhi kitna pagal hai
kya kya sochta rehta hai..
par baat ek mujhe kehna hai..
woh mujhe jaan se pyara hai..
BAHUT HI KHOOOB PUNAM...BAHUT HI KHOOBSURATI SE LIKHA HAI AAPNE... |
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2008, 02:14:32 AM » |
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wah punam ji kya baat hai
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YE PYAR KA BANDHAN AEISA HAI
KAB HO JAYE NA JANE DIL
NA HO GAR TO TADPE DIL
GAR HO JAYE NA MANE DIL
BACHAIN SA MAN HO JATA HAI
NEEND DOOR KAHI KHO JATI HAI
PAR DOOR NA IS SE REH PAYE
HAI CHEEJ YE KYA NA JANE DIL
JISNE KIYA WO TO TADPA
NA JISNE KIYA WO B TADPA
HAI IS TADPAN ME KAISA MAJA
YE KHOOB MERA PEHCHANE DIL.
Nice lines Sagar ji... |
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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2008, 06:02:29 AM » |
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naam abhi tak nahi bataya tune punam naye jodiyan ban rahe hai wahi bata de ya phone ker ke bata de mai kisi ko nahi bataunga Baadal |
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2008, 06:48:37 AM » |
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Jaan sey pyara Anjaan ho gaya
Dilpe koyi Tere meiharbaan ho gaya
Suna tha dil dhadkata hai sirf apni he khatir
Par Tera Dil toh Tere he ghar ka meihmaan ho gaya...
[ meihmaan hona = matlab host ke hisaab sey chalna ]
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2008, 07:42:54 AM » |
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kya baat hai punam...wah wah..!! Aisa mujhe lagta hai..
ki ek ajnabi ladka mujhse..
pyar bahot karta hai..
mujhe bahot chahta hai..
chup chup ke dekhta rehta hai..
par nazar milane se darta hai..
nazar se dur jab hoti hun
mujhe talashta rehta hai..
shayad woh mujhe bohat chahta hai..
paas aana chahta hai..
kuch kehna chahta hai..
par kuch ghabra sa jata hai..
usse dekh mujhe aisa lagta hai
pyar woh mujhse karta hai
par kehne se darta hai..
Dil bhi kitna pagal hai
kya kya sochta rehta hai..
par baat ek mujhe kehna hai..
woh mujhe jaan se pyara hai..
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«Reply #13 on: March 07, 2008, 05:11:37 PM » |
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Thanx..vicky ji..
Thanx..shikha di..
Thanx..Honey di..
Thanx..Baadal ji..
Thanx..pooja di..
Thanx.. Roja di..
Thanx..sagar ji..bahot khoob likha aap ne..
Thanx..khwaish ji..
Thanx..zakhmola ji..Acha likhe aap..
Thanx..jassworld ji..
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punam
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«Reply #14 on: March 07, 2008, 05:12:37 PM » |
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Aisa mujhe lagta hai
ek ajnabi ladka mujhse
pyar bahot karta hai..
mujhe dekh chehra khil uthta hai
ankhon se eshara karta hai
haal jaise mera puchta hai
mere aankhon se dil padhna chahta hai
woh mujhse pyar bahot karta hai..
par mujhse kehne se darta hai..
kaise kahun main usse..
mere dil me woh rehta hai
khwabon me woh aata ha
kuch anjane jazbaat jagata hai
lafzon ki soorat mein mere
nazmon mein dhalta hai
mujhe usse yeh kehena hai..
woh mujhe jaan se pyara hai...
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