Jaana(n)..Mujhe Tumse Mohabbat Hai....!!!!

by Talat on July 28, 2006, 10:29:37 AM
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Kabhi ban ke saaya, kabhi ban ke khushbu
Sadiyon se tum mere humraah jo Jaana(n) !

Chanchal hawa dheere se jo chu ke mujhe jaati hai
Aksar laga, tumne chua mujhe chupke se Jaana(n) !

Kehti nahin tumse, par sab tumko khabar hai
Meri soch ko tum kaise parh lete ho Jaana(n) !

Lagta hai kabhi chupe ho sataane ke liye mujhko
Aur ek pal main mere saamne aa jaaoge Jaana(n) !

Kabhi dar jaati hoon main ek choti bachchi ki maanind
Apni baahon main mujhe mehfooz tum kar lo Jaana(n)

Itna sa karam kar do, ab aa jaao mere paas
Apne ishq ki lau se mujhe pighla do Jaana(n) !
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2006, 10:33:09 AM »
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Kabhi ban ke saaya, kabhi ban ke khushbu
Sadiyon se tum mere humraah jo Jaana(n) !

Chanchal hawa dheere se jo chu ke mujhe jaati hai
Aksar laga, tumne chua mujhe chupke se Jaana(n) !

Kehti nahin tumse, par sab tumko khabar hai
Meri soch ko tum kaise parh lete ho Jaana(n) !

Lagta hai kabhi chupe ho sataane ke liye mujhko
Aur ek pal main mere saamne aa jaaoge Jaana(n) !

Kabhi dar jaati hoon main ek choti bachchi ki maanind
Apni baahon main mujhe mehfooz tum kar lo Jaana(n)

Itna sa karam kar do, ab aa jaao mere paas
Apne ishq ki lau se mujhe pighla do Jaana(n) !


wahhhhhhhhh talat ji kya kehne aapke wonderfulllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2006, 10:37:56 AM »
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very good Talat.

bahut hai khoob......
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2006, 04:18:16 PM »
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Thanks a lot Gesu and Vikas, pasand karne ke liye !! Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2006, 04:34:04 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Talat ..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2006, 08:00:02 PM »
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Good one Talat [:d]
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2006, 01:17:25 PM »
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Thanks a lot Ranjana and Garfield !!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2006, 07:23:01 PM »
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It's Beautiful Talat, as usual.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2006, 08:04:56 PM »
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booootifulll talattt sis!! bohot hi achha likha hai!
sachmein..ekdum feeling se bhari hui..
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2006, 04:58:47 PM »
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Thanks a lot Aryaan and Saani Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2006, 11:58:08 AM »
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Jaana mujhe tumse mohabbat hai,
Palkein gira ke izhaar-e-mohabbat kiya hai,
In khamosh pankhurion ki zubaa tumhe samjhani hai,
Kaampte haathon se jo na likh paaye khutt hum tumhe,
Us korey khutt ki khushboo mein teri meri kahaani hai,
Ishaara kiya tha jab tumne sar-e-mehfil mein
Usi tarah se aaj fir tumse nazrey churani hai,
Andherein mein jo thama tha haath tumne
Us ehsaas ki mehak badhi suhani hai,
Aao pankh laga kar kahin udd jaayein humtum
Ab harr ehsaas ke lamhe hamein dohraani hai...

gesu's koshish!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2006, 12:28:03 PM »
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jo bhulai na jan sake ....
wo wafa ho tum jana(N)....
mai dil se jo na kabhi jaye....
mera dil ka wo mehmaan ho tum jana(N)....

her waqt jo rahe pass .....
wo saya tumhi ho .....
jo band ho ankho me ....
wo sapna tumhi ho....

jis per mai jhuku sajda kerne k liye....
wo dargah wo mandir wo mazjid tumhi ho....
jo gunjta hai wadiyo me ....
wo nagma tumhi ho......

tumhi ho tum mere bus mere tumhi ho....
tum ho jab jeewan me na koi kami ho .....
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2006, 03:14:44 PM »
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Very Nice Gesu and Tushar !!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 02, 2006, 12:14:09 PM »
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Kabhi ban ke saaya, kabhi ban ke khushbu
Sadiyon se tum mere humraah jo Jaana(n) !

Chanchal hawa dheere se jo chu ke mujhe jaati hai
Aksar laga, tumne chua mujhe chupke se Jaana(n) !

Kehti nahin tumse, par sab tumko khabar hai
Meri soch ko tum kaise parh lete ho Jaana(n) !

Lagta hai kabhi chupe ho sataane ke liye mujhko
Aur ek pal main mere saamne aa jaaoge Jaana(n) !

Kabhi dar jaati hoon main ek choti bachchi ki maanind
Apni baahon main mujhe mehfooz tum kar lo Jaana(n)

Itna sa karam kar do, ab aa jaao mere paas
Apne ishq ki lau se mujhe pighla do Jaana(n) !


Wah Superb Talat ji

Jab Chali ek Yaad ki aandhi......
Toh paas tum mere Chali aana.....

Dhoondli hogi Tasveermeri Shayad.......
Par tab bhi use Roz apne Seene se lagana......

Kehta Ghazal toh ungliaan uthata yeh bedard zamana......
ISliye kehta hu chaar lafz Mahobbat ke Bas tum hee ab meri Jaan-e-Jaana........!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 02, 2006, 04:02:59 PM »
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Good Effort every one..
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