Jaaney kyaa kah diyaa hai

by abdbundeli on June 16, 2009, 12:02:21 PM
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Jaaney kyaa kah diyaa hai,
Tum ney mujh sey aaj?
Meyree rag-rag mein kaheen,
Rahee baansuree baaj!

       - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2009, 12:48:19 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 16, 2009, 12:02:21 PM

Jaaney kyaa kah diyaa hai,
Tum ney mujh sey aaj?
Meyree rag-rag mein kaheen,
Rahee baansuree baaj!

       - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'



BAHUT ACHCHA ABD
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2009, 01:19:36 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 16, 2009, 12:48:19 PM
BAHUT ACHCHA ABD

Thanks a lot, khamosh_aawaaz ji!
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«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2009, 01:33:26 PM »
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            achcha likha hai
keep it up
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«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2009, 01:37:51 PM »
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Quote from: shab on June 16, 2009, 01:33:26 PM
            achcha likha hai
keep it up
Thanks a lot, Shabana ji!
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2009, 08:34:52 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 16, 2009, 12:02:21 PM

Jaaney kyaa kah diyaa hai,
Tum ney mujh sey aaj?
Meyree rag-rag mein kaheen,
Rahee baansuree baaj!

       - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'


Behad sundar alfaaz hain, Abd Ji! Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2009, 12:49:00 AM »
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Nice 1.
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2009, 04:31:00 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on June 16, 2009, 08:34:52 PM
Behad sundar alfaaz hain, Abd Ji! Applause
Shukriyah Deepati ji!
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2009, 04:32:36 AM »
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Quote from: sanjaytiwari on June 17, 2009, 12:49:00 AM

Nice 1.
Thanks sanjaytiwari ji!
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