JAB KABHI MILTE HAI UNSE...........

by khwaish on October 24, 2007, 04:44:07 PM
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JAB KABHI MILTE HAI UNSE,TO LAGTA HAI
HUM APNI KAHI KOI HUI KHUSHI SE MILTE HAI

SAR KO RAKH LETE HAI UNKE DAR PAR "KHWAISH"
HUM UNSE ITNI DEEWANGI SE MILTE HAI

JAB KABHI JUDA HOTE HAI HUM UNSE
KOI HOSH NA HI KOI SUKOON MILTA HAI
SAMAJLO JAISE HUM APNI AWAARGI SE MILTE HAI

HUMEIN NAHI KOI SHUAK MEHFILO MEIN REHNE KA
HUM TO UNKE SAATH MILE PAL,BHEED SE DOOR,
JAHAN SIRF WOH AUR HUM RAHE,
YUH SAMAJLO BADI  SAADGI SE MILTE HAI

WOH JAB SAATH HOTE HAI APNE,
RAUNAKE DHOONDTE HAI CHEHRO PAR,
JIS KISI AADMI SE MILTE HAI

ISHQ KI KHUMAARI,ISHQ KARNE WALE SAMJHE
HUMEIN TO YUH LAGTA HAI,RAAT KI TANHAI MEIN
AASMAN KE TAARE BI APNE ZAMEEN SE MILTE HAI

GUMSUM SA HO JAATA HOON TANHA MAIN
JO WOH MILTE HAI TO LAGTA HAI
 HUM APNI KHOI HUI HASTI SE MILTE HAI

JAB BHI MILTE HAI UNSE TO APNI,
 HAR SAANS,HAR LAFZ,HAR KHWAISH,
HAR KHADAM,HAR DHADKAN,HAR AARZOO,HAR DUA
LAGTA HAI HUMEIN,KUBOOL HO GAYI HO JAISE,
UNHE MILKE HOTA HAI YEH EHSAAS JAISE
HUM APNI ZINDAGI SE MILTE HAI :heart:  :heart:  :heart:
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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2007, 02:06:17 AM »
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So sweet... Nice 1 Khwaish ji  :D

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JAB BHI MILTE HAI UNSE TO APNI,
HAR SAANS,HAR LAFZ,HAR KHWAISH,
HAR KHADAM,HAR DHADKAN,HAR AARZOO,HAR DUA
LAGTA HAI HUMEIN,KUBOOL HO GAYI HO JAISE,
UNHE MILKE HOTA HAI YEH EHSAAS JAISE
HUM APNI ZINDAGI SE MILTE HAI  


especially the above lines... i liked it.. :D
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2007, 03:38:36 PM »
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Really nice one Khwaish..The last stanza is really romantic. =D>  =D>
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2007, 06:01:57 PM »
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THANX A LOT ROJA FOR YOUR SWEET WORDS....

THANX  A LOT SHONA FOR APPRECIATING...

JAB KOI PAIGAAM DIYE NAHI JAATE...
JAB KOI NAGME PADHE NAHI JAATE...
JAB KOI GHAZAL LIKHE NAHI JAATE..

YUH KABHI NA SAMAJHNA...
HUM BHOOL GAYE AAPKO
KHAYAL TO AATE HAI PAR
LAFZ JUUD NAHI PAATE
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2007, 08:08:36 PM »
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Simply Beautiful Khwaish...Har Ek Sher Bohat Accha Likha Hain!
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2007, 06:47:25 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA RAVI...
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2007, 06:13:36 AM »
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Good one Khwaish... ..
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2007, 04:33:37 PM »
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Khwaish..each line has a different meaning to it.really very nice
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2007, 06:34:29 PM »
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THANX A LOT SAPNA FOR APPRECIATING
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thanx a lot divya gor appreciating!!! Usual Smile
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