<>*Jab Labon se chhu jaye lub*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 11:18:38 AM
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Labon se labon k chhune ka asar
Na pucho hota hai kya wo gazab
Thartharahut si hoti hai tan me
Jab lab se chhu jate hain lab

Chhukar jab dur hote hain lub
jagti hai kaisi pyaas ajab
taraste hain wahi jam pine ko
kab mile the lab se unke lab

 Aise me ho jaye barsaat agar
Uffff fir to na ruka jaye ab
Na dur reh paye fir sanam se
Agar aise me lab se mil jayen lab

Simat jayen aakar fir hum unme
Kho jayen unme kuch iss kadar
Na hosh rahe rasmo riwaz ka
Jab unke labon se mil jayen lab

Ho jaye har muraad unki puri
Bikhar jaun main unke kadmon par
Na reh jaye fir koi rasm bhi baki
Jab lab se mil jayen  unke lab...!!!


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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2010, 01:01:34 PM »
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madhoshi bharaa aapka ye post humein achcha laga ... thanks a lot....maine bhi do haasya kavitayen post ki hain... padh lijiye...main page pe hain.... !!!


jaane kitne deewaane hain tere gulaabi hothon ke,
thoda ras humein pilaade apne shabnami hothon se,

aaj ki is baarish me hum kuch is tarha se kho jaayenge,
tod ke saare bandhan ko hum do se ek aaj ho jaayenge,

barson se hum pyaase hain, pyaas hai tere aankhon ki,
pyaas meri tu bujha de aaj, mujhko pila de aankhon se,

baarish me bheega badan tera tan man me aag lagaata hai,
bharle humein tu baahon me, saanson ko mila meri saanson se,

kuch na kehna, kuch na sunna, bas itni si meri chaahat hai,
kho jaun main teri julfon me, pi lun main ras tere hothon se...
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2010, 01:10:00 PM »
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KASAK JEE ,KAPIL JE AAP DONO KO MEHFIL KO ROOMAANI RANGON SE SAJANE KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT BADHAI....YUN HEE LIKHTE RAHIYE....
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2010, 08:38:23 PM »
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bht  pyaara likha hai kapil tumne...kuch hum kahen apne andaaz me....

ye barasta mausam ye cham cham bajti boondein
naach raha hai man mera sath inke har pal me

simat jana chahta hai ye teri aagosh me
kho jana chahta hai ye teri khushbu me

machal raha hai dil mera tujhko pane k liye
mahek raha hai tan mera tere paas aane se

ake chhu lo aaj mujhe tum apni aankhon se
k ye duri nahin sahi jati ab iss dil deewane se.......
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2010, 08:39:13 PM »
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KASAK JEE ,KAPIL JE AAP DONO KO MEHFIL KO ROOMAANI RANGON SE SAJANE KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT BADHAI....YUN HEE LIKHTE RAHIYE....

shukriya ji..k aapne meri koshish ko pasand kiya.......thnx alot
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 09:50:38 PM »
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Labon se labon k chhune ka asar
Na pucho hota hai kya wo gazab
Thartharahut si hoti hai tan me
Jab lab se chhu jate hain lab

Chhukar jab dur hote hain lub
jagti hai kaisi pyaas ajab
taraste hain wahi jam pine ko
kab mile the lab se unke lab

 Aise me ho jaye barsaat agar
Uffff fir to na ruka jaye ab
Na dur reh paye fir sanam se
Agar aise me lab se mil jayen lab

Simat jayen aakar fir hum unme
Kho jayen unme kuch iss kadar
Na hosh rahe rasmo riwaz ka
Jab unke labon se mil jayen lab

Ho jaye har muraad unki puri
Bikhar jaun main unke kadmon par
Na reh jaye fir koi rasm bhi baki
Jab lab se mil jayen  unke lab...!!!


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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2010, 02:25:50 AM »
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aapne hamaari mehfil ko waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya jiske liye main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon... bahut bahut shukriya Mamta ji...!!!

KASAK JEE ,KAPIL JE AAP DONO KO MEHFIL KO ROOMAANI RANGON SE SAJANE KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT BADHAI....YUN HEE LIKHTE RAHIYE....
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2010, 02:28:54 AM »
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No thanks.... waise aapne bhi bahut hi pyaar bharaa jawaab diya hai...is pyaar bhare jawaab ke jawaab me kuch likha hai maine... shayad aapko pasand aaye.... kuch khaas nahi ban paaya bas ek chhoti si koshish hi rahi... padh ke batayiye ki kaisa lagaa aur ek khoobsurat ja jawaab tayyar rakhiye.... main jab neend se jagunga tab padhunga....thanks in advance for your next post...!!!



bht  pyaara likha hai kapil tumne...kuch hum kahen apne andaaz me....

ye barasta mausam ye cham cham bajti boondein
naach raha hai man mera sath inke har pal me

simat jana chahta hai ye teri aagosh me
kho jana chahta hai ye teri khushbu me

machal raha hai dil mera tujhko pane k liye
mahek raha hai tan mera tere paas aane se

ake chhu lo aaj mujhe tum apni aankhon se
k ye duri nahin sahi jati ab iss dil deewane se.......
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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2010, 02:29:35 AM »
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intzaar me aapke khoobsurat se jawaab ke ye post kar raha hoon...



tumhaare kareeb aa jaane ka ji karta hai,
tumhe apna banaa jaane ka ji karta hai,
kab se banjar hai pyaar ki ye dharti meri,
tumhare pyaar me bheeg jaane ka ji karta hai,

tumhaare hothon ko chhoo jaane ka ji karta hai,
tumhaari julfon me gum ho jaane ka ji karta hai,
gehri tumhaari aankhen kisi samundar se kam to nahi,
un aankhon ki gehraayi me doob jaane ka ji karta hai,

tumhaare sang humein behek jaane ka ji karta hai,
tumhaari khushboo se mehek jaane ka ji karta hai,
na koi roke ab humein, na koi toke ab humein,
mohabbat me hadd se guzar jaane ka ji karta hai,

haan ek baar fir mohabbat aazmaane ka ji karta hai,
khoke sab kuch apna tumhe paane ka ji karta hai,
kuch to asar hai tumhaare chahat ka ki kya kahen,
humein do jism se ek jaan ho jaane ka ji karta hai...
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2010, 03:54:27 AM »
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Waah bhayi waah bahut khoob madhoshi ka daur chal raha hai bahut khoob kasak ji mhbt k dayre mein rehkar har hadh ko todne ka alag hi mazaa hai aur bahut khubsurati se kapil ji aapne bhi likha hai...keep writing...
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2010, 05:58:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Waah bhayi waah bahut khoob madhoshi ka daur chal raha hai bahut khoob kasak ji mhbt k dayre mein rehkar har hadh ko todne ka alag hi mazaa hai aur bahut khubsurati se kapil ji aapne bhi likha hai...keep writing...
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2010, 06:01:30 PM »
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intzaar me aapke khoobsurat se jawaab ke ye post kar raha hoon...



tumhaare kareeb aa jaane ka ji karta hai,
tumhe apna banaa jaane ka ji karta hai,
kab se banjar hai pyaar ki ye dharti meri,
tumhare pyaar me bheeg jaane ka ji karta hai,

tumhaare hothon ko chhoo jaane ka ji karta hai,
tumhaari julfon me gum ho jaane ka ji karta hai,
gehri tumhaari aankhen kisi samundar se kam to nahi,
un aankhon ki gehraayi me doob jaane ka ji karta hai,

tumhaare sang humein behek jaane ka ji karta hai,
tumhaari khushboo se mehek jaane ka ji karta hai,
na koi roke ab humein, na koi toke ab humein,
mohabbat me hadd se guzar jaane ka ji karta hai,

haan ek baar fir mohabbat aazmaane ka ji karta hai,
khoke sab kuch apna tumhe paane ka ji karta hai,
kuch to asar hai tumhaare chahat ka ki kya kahen,
humein do jism se ek jaan ho jaane ka ji karta hai...

wahhhhhhh.....kya bat hai..aapka jii to bht kuch karne ko karne laga jii... icon_geek Applause Applause Applause Applause

rukiye ji ...ab hamari bari hai..kuch kehne ki....

wait wait wait
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2010, 06:07:40 PM »
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shukriya ... ji hum raah dekh rahe hain ki aap aaayen aur kuch kahen... !!!

wahhhhhhh.....kya bat hai..aapka jii to bht kuch karne ko karne laga jii... icon_geek Applause Applause Applause Applause

rukiye ji ...ab hamari bari hai..kuch kehne ki....

wait wait wait

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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2010, 07:48:13 PM »
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lijiye kapil ji hamara jawab.....

Aaj tere pas aane ko jii chahta hai
Tujhme hi bas jane ko jii chhta hai…

Teri khushbu se mahek jaye rom rom mera…
Tujhe khud me yun basane ko jii chahta hai…

Teri aagosh k saaye me khud ko kho dun
Teri panahon me ab jine marne ko jii chahta hai…

Main to jazbaaton ko piroti hun lafzon ki dori me
Lekin aaj sirf teri hi baat kahne sunne ko jii chahta hai…

Tere sath beete jo pal wo kitne haseen the sabhi
Aaj unko fir se jee lene ko jii chahta hai…

Tune sajaye mere khyal se geet kai
Aaj teri har gazal gungunane ko jii chahta hai…

Nahin jee paungi main ik pal bhi tujhse juda hoke
Aaj maut ko gale lagane ko. Jii chahta hai

Jii chahta hai………..
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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2010, 08:22:08 PM »
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Waah Jee Waah..........

Kia romaniyaat ka dour cher rakha hai aap dono ne mazaa aa gaya padh kar...... Daad janaab.... Feeling's bahut hi khoob rahe Kasak jee aapke kalaamoN ke.... Daad....

And klaskar jee ... aapne bhi bahut impressive jawaab diye hai.... Bahut khoob daad janaab.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye......
Mehfil jamaate rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez.......           

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