<>*Jab Labon se chhu jaye lub*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 11:18:38 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 02, 2010, 08:25:02 PM »
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waahhhhhh jii wahhhhh yahan aapki shayri k bina rangat nahin ayegi is thread pe.....kuch likhiye parwaz ji..... ab aapka turn hai maine aur kapil ne likh diya hai ji....
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«Reply #16 on: September 02, 2010, 08:30:45 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 11:18:38 AM

Labon se labon k chhune ka asar
Na pucho hota hai kya wo gazab
Thartharahut si hoti hai tan me
Jab lab se chhu jate hain lab

Chhukar jab dur hote hain lub
jagti hai kaisi pyaas ajab
taraste hain wahi jam pine ko
kab mile the lab se unke lab

 Aise me ho jaye barsaat agar
Uffff fir to na ruka jaye ab
Na dur reh paye fir sanam se
Agar aise me lab se mil jayen lab

Simat jayen aakar fir hum unme
Kho jayen unme kuch iss kadar
Na hosh rahe rasmo riwaz ka
Jab unke labon se mil jayen lab

Ho jaye har muraad unki puri
Bikhar jaun main unke kadmon par
Na reh jaye fir koi rasm bhi baki
Jab lab se mil jayen  unke lab...!!!


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Anu Ji..Ek Suroor Sa Hai Iss Kalaam mein,Insaan Padhte-Padhte nashe Mein Kho jaaye..Dil Ko Lubha Jaati hai Yeh Kavita Aapki..

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kapil Ji Aapne Bhi bahut Acha Saath diya Hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: September 02, 2010, 08:32:46 PM »
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to chalo kuch surrur aapki taraf se bhi ho jaye khwaish ji.......

maine aapki bht poems padhi hain zindagi pe...lekin koi iss tarah ki rumani kavita nahin padhi...likhihai to link dijiye aur nahin to iska reply dijiye
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«Reply #18 on: September 02, 2010, 09:13:25 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 02, 2010, 08:25:02 PM
waahhhhhh jii wahhhhh yahan aapki shayri k bina rangat nahin ayegi is thread pe.....kuch likhiye parwaz ji..... ab aapka turn hai maine aur kapil ne likh diya hai ji....
Kasak Jee, Aisi rumaani kalaam kahna humare bus ki baat nahi hai.... Hum thahare dard aur tanz per likhane wale.... Kuch likh deNge to yahaaN is khusbsurat kalaam aur khushnumaa mahol meiN dard ki lakeer aa jayeNgi....
Aapki farmaish hum per udhaar rahi... Kabhi achche mood meiN huye aur ahsaas O lafz ne saath diyaa to aapki farmaish puri kar deNge aur humari kalaam aapki is thread ko samarpit kar deNge....

Aap log continue kariye...
Khush rahiye....
khuda Hafez.....           
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«Reply #19 on: September 03, 2010, 02:22:02 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji... tahe dil se main aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!

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Waah Jee Waah..........

Kia romaniyaat ka dour cher rakha hai aap dono ne mazaa aa gaya padh kar...... Daad janaab.... Feeling's bahut hi khoob rahe Kasak jee aapke kalaamoN ke.... Daad....

And klaskar jee ... aapne bhi bahut impressive jawaab diye hai.... Bahut khoob daad janaab.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye......
Mehfil jamaate rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez.......           

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«Reply #20 on: September 03, 2010, 02:22:37 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

Quote from: khwaish on September 02, 2010, 08:30:45 PM
Anu Ji..Ek Suroor Sa Hai Iss Kalaam mein,Insaan Padhte-Padhte nashe Mein Kho jaaye..Dil Ko Lubha Jaati hai Yeh Kavita Aapki..

Bahut Ache ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

kapil Ji Aapne Bhi bahut Acha Saath diya Hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: September 03, 2010, 02:26:41 AM »
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Ji to aapka bhi bahut kuch chaaha raha hai... aur kya khoobsurat andaaz me chah raha hai.. wah ji wah,.. bahut khoob...ek ek sher mohabbat me dooba hua hai... maan gaye ji aapka jawaab nahi... ab to hamaari bolti hi band hai ji.... too good hai ji.... ek dum  MASTAMMMMMMMMMMM.......

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ab hamaari baari hai kuch kehne ki apne dil ki baat... dekhe aapke dil ko pasand aata hai ya nahi... aakhir dil ki baatein hain...


doori hamaare darmiyaan bahut jyada nahi hai,
tum pukaaro mujhe aur dauda chala aun main,

tumhaare saanson ki mehek se madhosh hoon main itna,
ki us mehek me doobne ko khincha chala aaun main,

julfon ke ghane baadal chaayen hain aasmaan pe,
baras jaane do pyaar unse aur unme bheeg jaun main,

meri to har baat shuru hoti hai tumhaare naam se,
tum kaho to tumhaare liye kahaani hi ban jaun main,

wo beete huye pal jo raaton ko yaad aate hain,
un haseen ehsaason ko bhi apne sang le aaun main,

sharbati jo honth hain wo geet gungunaate hain,
pyaar ki ghazal ban un hothon pe bas jaun main,

tum kaho to aaj hi main bandhan saare tod dun,
dil se agar tum pukaaro paas chala aaun main.

na karo marne ki baat tum is tarha mohabbat me,
tumhaare marne se pehle kyun na mit jaun main...


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 02, 2010, 07:48:13 PM
lijiye kapil ji hamara jawab.....

Aaj tere pas aane ko jii chahta hai
Tujhme hi bas jane ko jii chhta hai…

Teri khushbu se mahek jaye rom rom mera…
Tujhe khud me yun basane ko jii chahta hai…

Teri aagosh k saaye me khud ko kho dun
Teri panahon me ab jine marne ko jii chahta hai…

Main to jazbaaton ko piroti hun lafzon ki dori me
Lekin aaj sirf teri hi baat kahne sunne ko jii chahta hai…

Tere sath beete jo pal wo kitne haseen the sabhi
Aaj unko fir se jee lene ko jii chahta hai…

Tune sajaye mere khyal se geet kai
Aaj teri har gazal gungunane ko jii chahta hai…

Nahin jee paungi main ik pal bhi tujhse juda hoke
Aaj maut ko gale lagane ko. Jii chahta hai

Jii chahta hai………..
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«Reply #22 on: September 03, 2010, 06:53:53 AM »
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ufffffffff kapil ab iske liye kya kahun main.......

itne pyare replies likhoge to mujhe aage likhte jana padega na.......

ab ye suno..dil kya chahta hai......

Aaj pukaro aise k bas tujhko hi sun paun main
Teri madhosh nigahon me fir aaj kho jaun main

Chhu lo mujhe kuch iss andaaz me k nikhar jaun main
Mehak jayen saansein teri yun tujhme sama jaun main

Aake khol do meri julfein k mahek jaye ye hawa bhi
Tumko sataun kuch iss kadar k khud bhi machal jaun main

Aajao meri narm baahon me ab chain se so jao sanam
Rakh tumhare seene pe sir iss dard se mukti pa jaun main…
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«Reply #23 on: September 03, 2010, 07:36:50 AM »
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main to chahta hi hoon ki aap isi tarha jawaab likhte rahen aur ye pyaar ka silsila chalta rahe... kuch apne dil ki baat main kahun aur kuch apne dil ki aap kahen...

aapka dil madhosh hai.. wo sirf pyaar chaahta hai.. usme koi shaq nahi... aur chaahne ka andaaz bhi bahut khoobsurat hai... bahut bahut pyaara hai...

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suniye aapke in chahton ke jawaaab me hamaara dil kya kehta hai....


samaa jaun is tarha tujhme main ki tujhe poori kar dun,
apne mohabbat ki mehek se main tujhe kasturi kar dun,

teri surmayi aankhon ko chhoo ke main unme kaajal bhar dun,
teri julfon se main is tarha khelu ki tujhe paagal kar dun,

bhar ke tujhe baahon me apne main tujhe jal jal kar dun,
apne mohabbat ke liye tujhe main deewani har pal kar dun,

hamaari mohabbat ki lau se aaj roshan har chiraag kar dun,
is tarha rang jaun tere rang me ki laal har gulaab kar dun,

main chhoo ke gulaabi hothon ko tujhko ghazal kar dun,
tujhe seene se lagaake teri har hasrat muqammal kar dun...
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Kai baar sochha par nahi post kar paaya....
Jab bhi Radha ki kalpana ki....Yashodaji he nazar aayee.....
Shayad pehchaan baadha ban gayee...rukaavat ban gayee....
Aaj ek poem Bachchanji ki padh k usse share karne ka mann ho aaya....
Jab koi geet mere mann k bhaav itne achhe dhang se vyakt kare tou mein kyu likhu...... Winking

Kshan Bhar Ko Kyu Pyaar kiya tha ?

Ardh ratri me sahsa uth kar
Palak sampaton me madira bhar
Tumne kyon mere charnno me
Apna tan-man vaar diya tha ?
Kshan bhar ko kyu pyaar kiya tha ?

“Yah adhikaar khan se laya !”
Auur n kuchh mein kehne paaya
Mere Adhron par Nij Adhron ka-
Tumne rakh bhaar diya tha !!!
Kshan bhar ko kyu pyaar kiya tha ?

Wah kshan amar huaa jeevan me
Aaj raag jo uthta mann me-
Yah pratidhvani usski jo
Urr me tumne bhaar udaar diya tha
Kshan bhar ko kyu pyaar kiya tha ?



Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 11:18:38 AM

Labon se labon k chhune ka asar
Na pucho hota hai kya wo gazab
Thartharahut si hoti hai tan me
Jab lab se chhu jate hain lab

Chhukar jab dur hote hain lub
jagti hai kaisi pyaas ajab
taraste hain wahi jam pine ko
kab mile the lab se unke lab

 Aise me ho jaye barsaat agar
Uffff fir to na ruka jaye ab
Na dur reh paye fir sanam se
Agar aise me lab se mil jayen lab

Simat jayen aakar fir hum unme
Kho jayen unme kuch iss kadar
Na hosh rahe rasmo riwaz ka
Jab unke labon se mil jayen lab

Ho jaye har muraad unki puri
Bikhar jaun main unke kadmon par
Na reh jaye fir koi rasm bhi baki
Jab lab se mil jayen  unke lab...!!!


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There are some you love, I know;
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Waiting to be warmly met.
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«Reply #26 on: September 03, 2010, 04:59:01 PM »
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ufffffffffff.........not to say more anaam ...........
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kyu Anamika ji....
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itna achcha likha hai ab iske saamne main kuch bhi kahun kum hi hoga ere.....isily,,bas bar bar padh rahi hun and enjoying
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«Reply #29 on: September 03, 2010, 06:08:15 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 11:18:38 AM

Labon se labon k chhune ka asar
Na pucho hota hai kya wo gazab
Thartharahut si hoti hai tan me
Jab lab se chhu jate hain lab

Chhukar jab dur hote hain lub
jagti hai kaisi pyaas ajab
taraste hain wahi jam pine ko
kab mile the lab se unke lab

 Aise me ho jaye barsaat agar
Uffff fir to na ruka jaye ab
Na dur reh paye fir sanam se
Agar aise me lab se mil jayen lab

Simat jayen aakar fir hum unme
Kho jayen unme kuch iss kadar
Na hosh rahe rasmo riwaz ka
Jab unke labon se mil jayen lab

Ho jaye har muraad unki puri
Bikhar jaun main unke kadmon par
Na reh jaye fir koi rasm bhi baki
Jab lab se mil jayen  unke lab...!!!


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VERY ROMANTIC AND SENSETIONAL.NICE ONE KASAK DIL KI JI
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