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«Reply #30 on: September 04, 2010, 04:26:32 AM »
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Very entertaining presentation Anamika
N with a nice creation

Waah bhayi waah bahut khoob madhoshi ka daur chal raha hai bahut khoob kasak ji mhbt k dayre mein rehkar har hadh ko todne ka alag hi mazaa hai aur bahut khubsurati se kapil ji aapne bhi likha hai...keep writing...

Waah Jee Waah..........

Kia romaniyaat ka dour cher rakha hai aap dono ne mazaa aa gaya padh kar...... Daad janaab.... Feeling's bahut hi khoob rahe Kasak jee aapke kalaamoN ke.... Daad....

And klaskar jee ... aapne bhi bahut impressive jawaab diye hai.... Bahut khoob daad janaab.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye......
Mehfil jamaate rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez.......           



sir ji...Geet ji andParwaaz ji..bht bht shukriya aap sabka jinhone ise padha aur saraha...tnx alot ji... notworthy
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«Reply #31 on: September 04, 2010, 04:28:08 AM »
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Anu Ji..Ek Suroor Sa Hai Iss Kalaam mein,Insaan Padhte-Padhte nashe Mein Kho jaaye..Dil Ko Lubha Jaati hai Yeh Kavita Aapki..

Bahut Ache ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

kapil Ji Aapne Bhi bahut Acha Saath diya Hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


shukriya khwaish ji...for clapping and encouraging...thnx alot ji
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«Reply #32 on: September 04, 2010, 04:29:23 AM »
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VERY ROMANTIC AND SENSETIONAL.NICE ONE KASAK DIL KI JI

thnx sheba....thnx alot for apreciation
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«Reply #33 on: September 04, 2010, 04:36:01 AM »
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main to chahta hi hoon ki aap isi tarha jawaab likhte rahen aur ye pyaar ka silsila chalta rahe... kuch apne dil ki baat main kahun aur kuch apne dil ki aap kahen...

aapka dil madhosh hai.. wo sirf pyaar chaahta hai.. usme koi shaq nahi... aur chaahne ka andaaz bhi bahut khoobsurat hai... bahut bahut pyaara hai...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

suniye aapke in chahton ke jawaaab me hamaara dil kya kehta hai....



samaa jaun is tarha tujhme main ki tujhe poori kar dun,
apne mohabbat ki mehek se main tujhe kasturi kar dun,

teri surmayi aankhon ko chhoo ke main unme kaajal bhar dun,
teri julfon se main is tarha khelu ki tujhe paagal kar dun,

bhar ke tujhe baahon me apne main tujhe jal jal kar dun,
apne mohabbat ke liye tujhe main deewani har pal kar dun,

hamaari mohabbat ki lau se aaj roshan har chiraag kar dun,
is tarha rang jaun tere rang me ki laal har gulaab kar dun,

main chhoo ke gulaabi hothon ko tujhko ghazal kar dun,
tujhe seene se lagaake teri har hasrat muqammal kar dun...


bht bht pyara likha hai aapne kapil..no words for its appreciation..1 of ur best poem i must say...
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aap chahen aur hum jawab na den ye kaise ho sakta hai ji..lijiye..apka jawab
..chaahton k iss silsile ko age badhate hain hum..aap pura kar dijiye ga

Aaja ab apni har baat tu puri kar de
Ban ja mera aur mujhe bechain kar de

Iss tarah daal nazar apne pyaar ki
Mujhe mujhse hi tu bekhud kar de

Pighal jaun main shama ban teri baahon me
Mujhe iss kadar nasheela jam kar de

Hun main ek pathar ka tukda barson se
Chhu k mujhe tu aaj Kohinoor kar de…

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«Reply #34 on: September 04, 2010, 08:20:32 PM »
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wah ji wah... ekdum mastamm...

nasha hai tujhme sharaab ke band botal jaisa,
peelun tujhe aaj aur nashe me main jhoom lun,

kanpkapaate honth tere hain nashe ke pyaale,
aaj main besudh hoke un hontho ko chum lun,

chaandi raat me chaand sa chamakta rang dekh,
tujhe baahon me bharke thoda pyaar kar lun,

tere badan ki khushboo hai in hawaon me bhi,
apnaake tujhe main apna ye sansaar kar lun...
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«Reply #35 on: September 05, 2010, 04:06:40 PM »
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kyu jaga rahi ho armaan......itne pyaar se bulaake....nazaron ke paimaane se nasheele jaam peela ke  Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking


EK tere aalingan se
An chhuye chumban se
Adhro ki pyaas nahi bujhti
Ji hi nahi bhartaa kya karu

Koyal ki madhur boli se
Teri Aankh-micholi se
Priya sang kheli holi se
Ji hi nahi bhartaa kya karu

Thartharate tere hontho se
Kamkampate tere badanse
Milan ki ye raat ho rahi khatm
Ji hi nahi bhartaa kya karu


aajaa mere pyaar mere aagosh me tu
Chhukar tujhe aaj mein mehtaab kar du
Tera shubhra chandni se abhisaar kar du
Jee karta aaj mein khud me tujhe samaa lu




Aaja ab apni har baat tu puri kar de
Ban ja mera aur mujhe bechain kar de

Iss tarah daal nazar apne pyaar ki
Mujhe mujhse hi tu bekhud kar de

Pighal jaun main shama ban teri baahon me
Mujhe iss kadar nasheela jam kar de

Hun main ek pathar ka tukda barson se
Chhu k mujhe tu aaj Kohinoor kar de…

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