jab se mile hum unse...

by punam on May 29, 2008, 06:45:27 PM
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jabse mile hum unse
sabse begaane huye tab se..
kya hua hai tujhe bata
puchh rahe aaj dost mujhse...

khud pareshan hun khud hairaan hun
yeh asar kiska hai mujh pe...
yeh kaisi betaabi hai
isse main kya naam dun..
kya main jawab dun
jab dil sawal karta hai mujhse...

main khud anjaan hun
kya main khoyi hun
jab se mili unse
dil na raha hamare bas men...
dil na raha hoke humara tab se...
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syednaami
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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2008, 06:51:08 PM »
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Very heart touching and excellent work, Punam Saahiba, aapne starting hi kamaal ki di hai

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jabse mile hum unse
sabse begaane huye tab se..
kya hua hai tujhe bata
puchh rahe aaj dost mujhse...

Jald jawab likhne ki koshish karenge.... Zabardast
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somu_cool
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«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2008, 04:07:21 AM »
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Wow Punam what heart touching poem great,superb
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punam
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«Reply #3 on: May 30, 2008, 04:39:50 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 29, 2008, 06:51:08 PM
Very heart touching and excellent work, Punam Saahiba, aapne starting hi kamaal ki di hai

Jald jawab likhne ki koshish karenge.... Zabardast

sukriya syed ji....hum jawab ka intezar kar rahe hain...waise aap jaisa urdu aur hindi me pravinya to hume nahi hai bas kosish karte rehte hain...
aur aap hume encourage karte rehte hain...thanx a lot...

Quote from: somu_cool on May 30, 2008, 04:07:21 AM
Wow Punam what heart touching poem great,superb

thanx somu cool ji....
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«Reply #4 on: May 30, 2008, 01:04:30 PM »
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Punam bohat khoob likha hai aapne..Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: May 30, 2008, 08:07:14 PM »
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nice lines Punam
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syednaami
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«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2008, 10:36:28 PM »
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Punam Saahiba, Jee zaroor jawab arz karunga, aapki khidmat men.... jald hi...
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«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2008, 02:37:05 AM »
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Quote from: punam on May 29, 2008, 06:45:27 PM
jabse mile hum unse
sabse begaane huye tab se..
kya hua hai tujhe bata
puchh rahe aaj dost mujhse...

khud pareshan hun khud hairaan hun
yeh asar kiska hai mujh pe...
yeh kaisi betaabi hai
isse main kya naam dun..
kya main jawab dun
jab dil sawal karta hai mujhse...

main khud anjaan hun
kya main khoyi hun
jab se mili unse
dil na raha hamare bas men...
dil na raha hoke humara tab se...

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Punam
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Sonia01
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«Reply #8 on: May 31, 2008, 02:37:53 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 30, 2008, 10:36:28 PM
Punam Saahiba, Jee zaroor jawab arz karunga, aapki khidmat men.... jald hi...



Intezar kab tak karna hoga yeh b batlao jald hi
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«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2008, 02:41:56 AM »
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Jab se mile hum tumse

Ajnabi they magar rishta ye jaane kaisa hai
Jubaan per bas tumhara hi naam rehta hai
Raat-din mujhko yaad tumari satati hai
Her gadi, her pal tera hi kayal rehta hai
Jab se milkar gaye ho,sapna bahut aata hai
Dil ki baathein dil se kare hum dono
Chalo aaj fir se mile hum tum....  tongue3
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«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2008, 04:56:09 AM »
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 love9 kuch bikhre sapno se ankho me nami hai
ek chota sa arman aur umeedon ki zamin hai.
yun to bahut kuch hai zindgi main bas ek
sachche dost ki kami hai.
                     raj bhargava
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punam
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«Reply #11 on: May 31, 2008, 06:05:33 AM »
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Thax pooja di...

Thanx sonu...and nice lines from u...aise hi likhte raho....

Quote from: Sonia01 on May 31, 2008, 02:37:53 AM
Intezar kab tak karna hoga yeh b batlao jald hi

sonu lagta hai kuch jyada hi busy hain...time nahi mil raha...bade bade logon ke paas bas yehi kami hoti hai...time nahi hota unke paas..


Rajbhargava ji nice sharing..
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syednaami
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«Reply #12 on: June 01, 2008, 05:31:15 PM »
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Hum tumse mile Tum humse mile, -
Aur shuroo ek kahani ho gayi, -

Ladte ladte kuchh raaz khule, -
Aur raazi humpe qismat ho gayi, -

Hum Pahle pahil to dost bane, -
Phir dosti bhi be-intaha ho gayi, -

Kuchh hua hamen par samajh na sake, -
Man men dil ki lagan si ho gayi, -

Baaton baaton men kah na sake, -
Kaisi yeh mushkil ho gayi, -

Dosti ke rang bhi aise ghule, -
Har aadat ek jaisi ho gayi, -

Woh roothh-te aur hum manaate, -
Kali chaahat ki phool ho gayi, -

Ek baar nahin sao baar bole, -
Hamse konsi khata sarzad ho gayi, -

Itna kaha usko phir bhi na kahe, -
Ki usko bhi muhabbat ho gayi, -

Hum chahe bhi par kah na sake, -
Aisi hum dono ki haalat ho gayi, -

Phir humne kaha ab bol bhi de, -
Ki tumko humse muhabbat ho gayi, -

Roti rahi aur chup na kare, -
Aisi meri haalat bhi ho gayi, -

Iqrar hua izhaar hua Rote rote, -
Aur pyar ki dastaan shuroo ho gayi, -


(Syed Naami)

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Lijiye, ab khush ho jao tum sab,,, sonu puno monu tonu jo bhi ho...
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«Reply #13 on: June 01, 2008, 05:37:37 PM »
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Dosti ke rang bhi aise ghule, -
Har aadat ek jaisi ho gayi, -

Woh roothh-te aur hum manaate, -
Kali chaahat ki phool ho gayi, -

Ek baar nahin sao baar bole, -
Hamse konsi khata sarzad ho gayi, -

Itna kaha usko phir bhi na kahe, -
Ki usko bhi muhabbat ho gayi, -

Bahut hi accha likha hai....Mujhe yehlines bahut accha laga... Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: June 01, 2008, 05:44:02 PM »
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Bohot Punam, S.Naami..Nice lines Sonia...and nice sharing Raj !
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