jab se mile hum unse...

by punam on May 29, 2008, 06:45:27 PM
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honeyrose
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«Reply #15 on: June 01, 2008, 05:58:23 PM »
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Bohat acha likhe ho Syed..Usual Smile


Kaise kah hum aapni muhabbat unse
Kaise bhool jaaye unhe hum dilse

Humhe unse muhabbat hai dilse
Kaise kah hum aapni muhabbat unse

Kareeb jaate hum chhup hogaye
Haale dil na sunna paaye unse
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Talat
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«Reply #16 on: June 01, 2008, 05:59:20 PM »
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Nice lines Honey !
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honeyrose
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«Reply #17 on: June 01, 2008, 06:00:31 PM »
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Thanks Celmira sis..Usual Smile
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syednaami
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«Reply #18 on: June 02, 2008, 02:18:11 PM »
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Bahut hi accha likha hai....Mujhe yehlines bahut accha laga... Applause

Aap ne jo lines chunni hain woh asal men nazam ka Dil hain...
Buhat mahaarat se dekha hai aapne... Shukriya


Bohot Punam, S.Naami..Nice lines Sonia...and nice sharing Raj !

Aap ki haosla afzai ka mamnoon hun... Shukriya

Bohat acha likhe ho Syed..Usual Smile


Kaise kah hum aapni muhabbat unse
Kaise bhool jaaye unhe hum dilse
...............


HoneyRose jee, aapki rachna bhi buhat jach rahi yahan, kamaal ki paishkash...
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punam
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«Reply #19 on: June 02, 2008, 02:32:18 PM »
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Hum tumse mile Tum humse mile, -
Aur shuroo ek kahani ho gayi, -

Ladte ladte kuchh raaz khule, -
Aur raazi humpe qismat ho gayi, -

Hum Pahle pahil to dost bane, -
Phir dosti bhi be-intaha ho gayi, -

Kuchh hua hamen par samajh na sake, -
Man men dil ki lagan si ho gayi, -

Baaton baaton men kah na sake, -
Kaisi yeh mushkil ho gayi, -

Dosti ke rang bhi aise ghule, -
Har aadat ek jaisi ho gayi, -

Woh roothh-te aur hum manaate, -
Kali chaahat ki phool ho gayi, -

Ek baar nahin sao baar bole, -
Hamse konsi khata sarzad ho gayi, -

Itna kaha usko phir bhi na kahe, -
Ki usko bhi muhabbat ho gayi, -

Hum chahe bhi par kah na sake, -
Aisi hum dono ki haalat ho gayi, -

Phir humne kaha ab bol bhi de, -
Ki tumko humse muhabbat ho gayi, -

Roti rahi aur chup na kare, -
Aisi meri haalat bhi ho gayi, -

Iqrar hua izhaar hua Rote rote, -
Aur pyar ki dastaan shuroo ho gayi, -


(Syed Naami)

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Lijiye, ab khush ho jao tum sab,,, sonu puno monu tonu jo bhi ho...

wah ji sach me jaise bole the waise zabardast hi likhe...bahot acha...padh ke bahot acha laga...
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