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jhaunka hawa ka jab bhi teri gali se hoke guzarta hoga,
dekh ke tere husn ke jalwe wo bhi aahen bharta hoga,

chhooke tere nashile badan ko nashe me wo jhoomta hoga,
paagal ho jaata hoga jab hothon ke pyaale chumta hoga,

dekh ke tere reshmi baalon ko kuch pal wahaan theherta hoga,
madmast nashe me jhoomta tere baalon se ho ke guzarta hoga,

chaand bhi tere husn ke aage har pal paani bharta hoga,
tere rang me rang jaane ko tere aangan me wo theherta hoga,

suraj bhi teri lau ke aage jalan ki jwaala me dehekta hoga,
phool gulaab ka tujhko chhuke teri khushboo se mehekta hoga,

dekh ke tujhke koi paagal aashiq kabhi sajta aur sanwarta hoga,
ghazal banke uska paagalpan uski kalam se ho ke guzarta hoga...



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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2010, 08:54:53 AM »
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wah klaskar jee wah bahoot badiya
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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2010, 01:07:32 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Maddy ji....!!!

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wah klaskar jee wah bahoot badiya
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2010, 01:45:13 PM »
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     Bas sir ji ab to confirm hi hogaya, Kya baat hai aakhir. Giggle Waise ek baat kahu aap humesha se hi achha likhte aaye hai par aapki shayari me pichhle kuch waqt bahut improvement mehsoos ki hai maine,jo ki bahut achhi baat hai,aise hi achha achha likhte rahein. Usual Smile
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Oye hoyee ufff kya baat hai Dost..badi rangeen, mehekti khubsoorat kavita..kya lavzon ko sajaya hai..Lavz nahin hai tariff kay!
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2010, 04:21:23 AM »
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mastam post....yaad aagaya song...jhonka hawa ka aaj bhi..zulfein udata hoga na...jab iseuss tune pe gungunaya kuch iss tarah ka ho gaya...

try kijiye ji....


jhaunka hawa ka jab bhi ,,teri gali se,,, guzara hoga na,
dekh ke tere… husn ke jalwe.. aahein bharta hoga naaaa,
chhooke tere… hothon ko.. nashe me wo jhooma hoga naaa,

paagal hota.. hoga jab.. hothon ko tere. ,,chhua hoga na
dekh ke teri… reshmi julfein.. kuch pal thehera hoga naa,
fir uss nashe me.. baalon se tere.. hoke guzara hoga naa,
suraj bhi teri lau ke.. aage khud ko.. kum samjha hoga na
phool gulaab ka.. tujhko chhuke.. hi to mehekta hoga naa,

jhonka hawa…

chaand bhi tere.. husn ke aage.. paani.. bharta hoga naa,
rang jaane ko ..rang me tere.. aangan me utarta hoga naa,
dekh ke tujhko.. koi aashiq.. sajta sanwarta hoga naa,
ghazal banke. uska paagalpan… uski kalam se.. nikalta hoga naa
wo chahta hai… kis kadar tumko… ye samjhata hoga naa...

jhonka……
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2010, 04:40:42 AM »
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Wah kalaakaarji....bade sunder romaantic geet ko shabdo me sajaaya hai......aapne
mann ko ek ajeeb rang me rang gaya aapka ye geet....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Quote from: klaskar on September 07, 2010, 08:33:52 AM



jhaunka hawa ka jab bhi teri gali se hoke guzarta hoga,
dekh ke tere husn ke jalwe wo bhi aahen bharta hoga,

chhooke tere nashile badan ko nashe me wo jhoomta hoga,
paagal ho jaata hoga jab hothon ke pyaale chumta hoga,

dekh ke tere reshmi baalon ko kuch pal wahaan theherta hoga,
madmast nashe me jhoomta tere baalon se ho ke guzarta hoga,

chaand bhi tere husn ke aage har pal paani bharta hoga,
tere rang me rang jaane ko tere aangan me wo theherta hoga,

suraj bhi teri lau ke aage jalan ki jwaala me dehekta hoga,
phool gulaab ka tujhko chhuke teri khushboo se mehekta hoga,

dekh ke tujhke koi paagal aashiq kabhi sajta aur sanwarta hoga,
ghazal banke uska paagalpan uski kalam se ho ke guzarta hoga...



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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2010, 06:11:28 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KAPIL JI......

JAB TERI GALI SE HOKAR GUZARTA HOGA
TUJHE MILNE KI HAR BAR TAMANA KARTA HOGA

TUJHE CHUKAR HAWA KA JHAUNKA JAB GUZARTA HOGA
JAROOR USKA KA DIL BHI MACHALTA HOGA

GAR TERI NASHILI AANKHON KA WO DEEWANA HOGA
TERE HONTHON KO CHUMNE KI BHI TAMANNA KARTA HOGA

TERI MAST MAST ADAAON PAR JO WO MARTA HOGA
TERE KADMON MEIN APNI JANNAT SAMAJHTA HOGA

JAB BHI TERI GALI SE HO KE GUZARTA HOGA
US GALI SE BAHAR NA JAANE KO USKA JEE KARTA HOGA.....
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«Reply #8 on: September 08, 2010, 12:23:53 PM »
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heheheheh.... bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji.. achcha lagta hai ap aake padhte ho aur pyaare pyaare comment likhte ho... koshish yahi rahegi hamaari ki achcha achcha likh sakun.. aur aap jaise doston ka saath raha to kaafi kuch sikhne ko bhi milta rahega ... shukriya hamesha saath nibhaane ke liye....!!!

Quote from: tamanna.pt on September 07, 2010, 01:45:13 PM

     Bas sir ji ab to confirm hi hogaya, Kya baat hai aakhir. Giggle Waise ek baat kahu aap humesha se hi achha likhte aaye hai par aapki shayari me pichhle kuch waqt bahut improvement mehsoos ki hai maine,jo ki bahut achhi baat hai,aise hi achha achha likhte rahein. Usual Smile
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya ada karta hoon...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 08, 2010, 04:04:55 AM
Oye hoyee ufff kya baat hai Dost..badi rangeen, mehekti khubsoorat kavita..kya lavzon ko sajaya hai..Lavz nahin hai tariff kay!
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... mere poem ki khoobsurti badha di aaapne... kaash min ise apki awaaz me sun paata to mazaa hi kuch aur hota...!!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 08, 2010, 04:21:23 AM
mastam post....yaad aagaya song...jhonka hawa ka aaj bhi..zulfein udata hoga na...jab iseuss tune pe gungunaya kuch iss tarah ka ho gaya...

try kijiye ji....


jhaunka hawa ka jab bhi ,,teri gali se,,, guzara hoga na,
dekh ke tere… husn ke jalwe.. aahein bharta hoga naaaa,
chhooke tere… hothon ko.. nashe me wo jhooma hoga naaa,

paagal hota.. hoga jab.. hothon ko tere. ,,chhua hoga na
dekh ke teri… reshmi julfein.. kuch pal thehera hoga naa,
fir uss nashe me.. baalon se tere.. hoke guzara hoga naa,
suraj bhi teri lau ke.. aage khud ko.. kum samjha hoga na
phool gulaab ka.. tujhko chhuke.. hi to mehekta hoga naa,

jhonka hawa…

chaand bhi tere.. husn ke aage.. paani.. bharta hoga naa,
rang jaane ko ..rang me tere.. aangan me utarta hoga naa,
dekh ke tujhko.. koi aashiq.. sajta sanwarta hoga naa,
ghazal banke. uska paagalpan… uski kalam se.. nikalta hoga naa
wo chahta hai… kis kadar tumko… ye samjhata hoga naa...

jhonka……
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 08, 2010, 04:40:42 AM
Wah kalaakaarji....bade sunder romaantic geet ko shabdo me sajaaya hai......aapne
mann ko ek ajeeb rang me rang gaya aapka ye geet....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bahut bahut shukriya Cara ji... aapne bhi bahut achcha likha hai...!!!!

Quote from: cara on September 08, 2010, 06:11:28 AM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KAPIL JI......

JAB TERI GALI SE HOKAR GUZARTA HOGA
TUJHE MILNE KI HAR BAR TAMANA KARTA HOGA

TUJHE CHUKAR HAWA KA JHAUNKA JAB GUZARTA HOGA
JAROOR USKA KA DIL BHI MACHALTA HOGA

GAR TERI NASHILI AANKHON KA WO DEEWANA HOGA
TERE HONTHON KO CHUMNE KI BHI TAMANNA KARTA HOGA

TERI MAST MAST ADAAON PAR JO WO MARTA HOGA
TERE KADMON MEIN APNI JANNAT SAMAJHTA HOGA

JAB BHI TERI GALI SE HO KE GUZARTA HOGA
US GALI SE BAHAR NA JAANE KO USKA JEE KARTA HOGA.....
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KapIl,  OMG wat a romantic poem ..... kya baa thai janab......

Ab lagta hai Masum vakiye main hi chnge ho reha hai ......

Be Happy alwyz & keep smiling ...........

ENjoy !!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: September 08, 2010, 09:05:52 PM »
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Thank u so much Neel... aapke comments padh ke dil aise hi khush ho jata hai.... haan mausam kuch badla badla sa to hai.. par sahi hai ya galat ye humein bhi nahi pata ... par badal jarur raha hai ye mausam aajkal... kuch achcha achcha sa hi hai... Usual Smile

Quote from: neelgold on September 08, 2010, 08:29:12 PM
KapIl,  OMG wat a romantic poem ..... kya baa thai janab......

Ab lagta hai Masum vakiye main hi chnge ho reha hai ......

Be Happy alwyz & keep smiling ...........

ENjoy !!!!!!!!
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