----- /// Jab teri gali se ho ke guzarta hoga /// -----

by klaskar on September 07, 2010, 08:33:52 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 08, 2010, 09:25:18 PM »
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klaskar Jee Aadaab!

Excellent work....... thought's and expression aur too good....... Daad janab bahut pyaare aur umdaa ahsaas bayaaN kiye hai aapne........ bahut khoob

Aise hi likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye......
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Mere mehboob ne Gulaab se muskuraa ke kaha
Usne mera naam liya hai hawaa ne aake kaha

Siyaa zulfoN meiN uske yeh kaisi mahek hai
Suhani raat ne ghataaoN ko barsaa ke kaha
     


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«Reply #16 on: September 08, 2010, 09:30:53 PM »
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Ache ke liye hi hoga aisa socho ...........

All iz well !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #17 on: September 08, 2010, 09:40:49 PM »
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Adaab Parwaaz ji...!!!

main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon jo aapne meri is kavita ko padha aur pasand kiya... bahut bahut shukriya janaab... aur aapne bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

klaskar Jee Aadaab!

Excellent work....... thought's and expression aur too good....... Daad janab bahut pyaare aur umdaa ahsaas bayaaN kiye hai aapne........ bahut khoob

Aise hi likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye......
Khada Hafez...... Usual Smile         


Mere mehboob ne Gulaab se muskuraa ke kaha
Usne mera naam liya hai hawaa ne aake kaha

Siyaa zulfoN meiN uske yeh kaisi mahek hai
Suhani raat ne ghataaoN ko barsaa ke kaha
     



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«Reply #18 on: September 11, 2010, 02:47:51 PM »
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aal iz well....!!!

Ache ke liye hi hoga aisa socho ...........

All iz well !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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