Jab teri man main pyaas jagi

by Brijinder on December 10, 2006, 07:21:23 PM
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Jab teri man main pyaas jagi
ZiNdgi tab hi kuch khaas lagi

Tum ur kar samNdat paar gayi
Par mujhko phir bhi paas lagi

Bin teray mujhay yeh rut basanti
Bus nitdin ik chaumaas lagi

Sach boli to aitbaar nahi
Par khooti baat vishwaas lagi

Jo jag ko hansaati phirti thi
Woh larki kal kyuN udaas lagi

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hi
«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2006, 07:21:55 PM »
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The introduction to my work by Mr Khuswant Singh,eminet writer and historian ofindia,can be read at ebazm.com/sagar
Brijinder"Sagar"
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2006, 03:46:27 PM »
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Jab teri man main pyaas jagi
ZiNdgi tab hi kuch khaas lagi

Tum ur kar samNdat paar gayi
Par mujhko phir bhi paas lagi

Bin teray mujhay yeh rut basanti
Bus nitdin ik chaumaas lagi

Sach boli to aitbaar nahi
Par khooti baat vishwaas lagi

Jo jag ko hansaati phirti thi
Woh larki kal kyuN udaas lagi

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Superb brijender ji.

You need no introduction "Sagar" ji..I am proud that
i read you and i am prasing you. I am really happy
and proud that you are with us.
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hi
«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2006, 07:24:00 PM »
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I am moved n honoured by such beautiful expressions of appreciation from you.Thanx a lot for that.

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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2006, 02:28:53 AM »
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Jab teri man main pyaas jagi
ZiNdgi tab hi kuch khaas lagi

Tum ur kar samNdat paar gayi
Par mujhko phir bhi paas lagi

Bin teray mujhay yeh rut basanti
Bus nitdin ik chaumaas lagi

Sach boli to aitbaar nahi
Par khooti baat vishwaas lagi

Jo jag ko hansaati phirti thi
Woh larki kal kyuN udaas lagi

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Nice Poem.
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2006, 07:17:42 PM »
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I am thankful for ur kind words.
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2006, 11:55:52 PM »
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I am moved n honoured by such beautiful expressions of appreciation from you.Thanx a lot for that.

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Thanks sir, kindly check your Pm box
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