Jab Tum Mere Paas Nahi Hote...

by Aryaan on December 10, 2005, 01:51:00 AM
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2005, 06:40:36 AM »
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Good style but Mr. Aryaan.. I am unable to read atleast 1/4th of the poem due to the color merging.
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2005, 07:30:25 AM »
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ASALAM ALIKUM ARYAAN
you are great as always nice wordings nicely expressed feelings
excellent

                 AIK RISHTA

aik rishta he tujh se mera

piyaar ka, chah ka, talab ka, zarorat ka

aik rishta he tujh se mera

dil ka, dunya ka,meherbani ka, nadani ka

aik rishta he tujh se mera

maah ka, saal ka, lamhoun ka, lafzoun ka

aik rishta he tujh se mera

an kahe razoun ka,

qurbatoun ka, fasloun ka,

mere dil mere aaine ka,

tere chehre main mere aks ka

bas yehi aik rishta he

tere mere aetbaar ka

sach aur yaqeen ka

piyaar ka, chah
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2005, 09:03:45 AM »
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bahut hi khoob aryan ji and abeera

Woh is tarah  har lamha hain mujh mein...
Raaz ki tarah se chipey behtey hain mujh mein..
Raaz khulne ka darr jis tarah se hota hai...
Khul na jaaye yeh bandhan darr anjaana sa yeh rehta hai....
Baandh ke unko rakha hai hamne...
lahoo ke sahare se  nason se kuss kar...
Dhadkan nazar rakti hai har pal unper.....
Saansein aate jaate khabar deti hai unko...
Chale na jana tum yahi kehti hai unse....
Band ho jaayega saanson ka yeh safar...
Tum jo chale gaye yahaan se hum safar...
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2005, 04:27:31 PM »
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Bohat shukriya Abeera, Ricky & Gesu...& Nice Replys Abeera & Gesu...
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2005, 04:37:33 PM »
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Good style but Mr. Aryaan.. I am unable to read atleast 1/4th of the poem due to the color merging.

Well Mr. Ricky..here you go...


Jab tum mere paas nahi hote
Tau yun lagta hai keh kuch namukammal hai
Sab kuch hote huwe bhi, kuch kami si hai
Yeh parinde cheh-chaha nahi rahe
Balkeh kisi ke na hone ki itallah de rahe hain
Khushi ke mauqe par bhi
Udaasi chaayi rehti hai
Jahan jaaun aisa lagta hai
Keh kuch kami si hai
Harr dar, harr deewaar, harr gali
harr makaan mein
Mujhe tumhari shabeeh dikhayi deti hai
Raat ki tareeki mein tum dikhayi dete ho
jab din mein, harr kiran mein
tumhara hi chehra hota hai
Lekin tumhein meri haalat ka ka ilm
Tum tau mujhse koson door ho
Aur isi tassawur ne mere wajood ke
do tukre kar diye hain...
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2005, 12:54:01 PM »
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Yeh Dil Mera..
Hasraton pe rivaajo ka sakht pehraa hai,
Na jaane kaun si ummeed pe jaake, yeh dil theharaa hai,
Meri aankhon mein se chhalakte hue yeh ashk aur gum ki kasam;
Mera yeh pyaar.... Bahot gehraa hai...
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2005, 04:01:43 PM »
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Good One Abeera....
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2005, 12:54:44 PM »
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asaalam  alikum aryaan

YAAD KARTA HAIN AAPKO TANHAI MEIN
DIL DOOBA HAIN GAMO KI GEHRAI MEIN,
HAMEIN MAT DHOONDHO DUNIYA KI BHID MEIN,
HUM TO MILLENGE AAPKO AAPKI PARCHHAI MEIN

ALLAH HAFIZ
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2005, 12:41:06 PM »
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Very Nice Abeera...

Aankhon mein aansoo aa jate hain
Phir bhi labon pe hansi rakhni parti hai
Yeh mohabbat bhi kya cheez hai yaaro
Jis se karte hain usi se chupani parti hai
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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2005, 01:44:11 PM »
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thanks ARYAAN

Wada to ker lete hain
Nibhana bhool jate hain
Lagaaa kar aaag seene main
Bujhana bhool jate hain
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«Reply #11 on: December 16, 2005, 02:00:09 AM »
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Good One Abeera....
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«Reply #12 on: December 16, 2005, 02:02:20 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 18, 2005, 03:18:31 PM »
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bohat khoob aryaan!!! really touching!!
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«Reply #14 on: December 18, 2005, 03:46:19 PM »
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kabhi lagta hai sab kuch hai par jaane kyun ek kami si lagti hai..
apne hote hain paas har waqt phir bhi duniya kyun ajnabi si lagti hai..
jaane kiski talaash hai jaane kaise yeh armaan hai..
ankahi anjaani har khwahish dil ki ek paheli si lagti hai..
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