Jahan bhar ki mhbt...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 31, 2011, 05:27:54 PM
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Dosto adaab,

Ho sake tou merri is peshkash ko sache dil se mehsus kijiyega yakinan bepnah mhbt ka ehsas zarur hoga apko..hamesha ki tarah is geet ko apke sath ki umeed hai...Usual Smile



Kitni sachai se tu izhar kar jata hai,
merri khamoshio per bhi aetbar kar jata hai,

main sochti rehti hu tujhe pehero tak,
jane kaise tu khaali raho per intezar kar jata hai,

terri baato per muskura deti hu main aksar,
per terra har lafz mujhe bekrar kar jata hai,

main lafzo se puchti rehti hu terra haal,
aur tu khuabo mein aake istifsaar kar jata hai,

kabhi jo darne lagti hu apni judai se main,
tu haule se aake us khayal se inkar kar jata hai,

bechainiya doori mein mehsus hoti hai,
jab hoti hu terre kareeb tu mujhe iztiraar kar jata hai,

jahan bhar mein simti mhbt mehsus karne lagti hu main,
har mulaqat mein tu mujhe itna pyar kar jata hai.........

iztirar-helpless,bekabu...
istifsaar-inform,batana...
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 06:19:15 PM »
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Ji shukriya ji...
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2011, 06:22:54 PM »
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sorry mujhe laga tha ki maine kuch galat kaha tha.
aapke iss kalaam ko hazaroon daad.
god bless u
thanx
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2011, 06:23:52 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 31, 2011, 06:21:26 PM
Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai Brokenbyluv Ji
Kya Khoobsurati Aur Sadgi Se Lazon Ko Piroya Hai
Bahut Khub Ji Mujhe Aapki Peshkash Bahut Achhi Lagi.
Aur Yeh Pic Bhi Bahut Achhi Hai Ji....

Khuda Aapko Shad o Aabad Rakhe...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Tahe dil se apka shukriya shihab ji..Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2011, 06:25:25 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 31, 2011, 06:22:54 PM
sorry mujhe laga tha ki maine kuch galat kaha tha.
aapke iss kalaam ko hazaroon daad.
god bless u
thanx

Arre koi baat nhi nirala ji apne genuine opinion diya mujhe bura bilkul nhi laga..zaruri nhi ki aap sab ko merri har kavita pasand aaye...shukriya apke comments ka...
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2011, 06:31:11 PM »
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kavita to aapki mujhe bahut pasand ai ji---achhi kavita hamesha achhe hi lagte hain.
aur haan ehsaas aapke lafzon se feel hota hai hamesha.
maine bas yun hi kah dia tha. bura na maniyega par aapki ye racha bahut khubsurat hai ji Kasam se.
wese bhi mai aapka fan hun.
ek do baar sad hua hu aapki kalaamo se. aise aapke ehsaas hote hain lafzon me.
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2011, 06:35:46 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 31, 2011, 06:31:11 PM
kavita to aapki mujhe bahut pasand ai ji---achhi kavita hamesha achhe hi lagte hain.
aur haan ehsaas aapke lafzon se feel hota hai hamesha.
maine bas yun hi kah dia tha. bura na maniyega par aapki ye racha bahut khubsurat hai ji Kasam se.
wese bhi mai aapka fan hun.
ek do baar sad hua hu aapki kalaamo se. aise aapke ehsaas hote hain lafzon me.

Nirala ji its ok aap pareshan naa ho..thnx ki aap merri posts ko itna pasand karte hai...bus yu hi comments k zariye merre lafzo ka sath dete rahiye...take care...
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2011, 07:14:24 PM »
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Bahut Khooooooooob .......... !!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2011, 07:40:56 PM »
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Khoob..
Dil se daad..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2011, 05:29:13 AM »
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uff geeta ji--ek aur khubsurat dastaan.
mohabbat ke sachhe ehsaas bilkul dil me lagte hain.
heart touching ji.
dil se bahut saari daad
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2011, 11:05:53 AM »
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bahut khoob geet ji gehrai mein jaker bahut achhe se express kiya hai.
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2011, 11:12:24 AM »
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bht khoob geet ji....
luvely feelings.....
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2011, 11:16:18 AM »
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Geet ..its amazin, umdaa nazam!!
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2011, 12:36:13 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji,rahim,suresh ji,killbill ji,priya ji n annu ji...
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2011, 12:42:58 PM »
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wah re wah bahut sundar likha hai ji
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