jaise bhi ho mere ho...

by punam on June 07, 2007, 08:40:24 AM
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punam
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«Reply #15 on: June 14, 2007, 10:15:52 AM »
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thanx paani ji...
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«Reply #16 on: June 15, 2007, 04:49:49 AM »
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bahoot khoob Punam...


Baato baato main baat banate ho
Kyun mujhko itna app state ho
Kab samjhoge preet meri
Kis andaz se khud ko anjaan banate ho

Hu main ab teri is per kar le yakin
Janati hu man hi man tum bhi muskurate ho
Jaise bhi ho tum, bas ab ho mere
Phir kyun mere sabar ka imtihaan liye jaate ho
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punam
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«Reply #17 on: June 15, 2007, 06:17:10 AM »
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thanx pooja di...kya khoob likha aap ne..really nice ...
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punam
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«Reply #18 on: June 15, 2007, 06:24:35 AM »
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wada karke tum mukar jaate ho
hame intezaar karwate rehte ho

bin bataye aake mujhe chounka dete ho
meri ankhon me khushi ka mazaa lete ho

aankhon se hi dil pe teer chala dete ho
khuch na kehete huye sab kehe dete ho

sharam se jhuke nazar toh bahein faila dete ho
mujhe baahon me leke duniya bhula dete ho..

bara nat khat ho.. bare pyaare ho...
jaise bhi ho tum mere ho...
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«Reply #19 on: June 16, 2007, 11:31:29 AM »
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well done poonam ji bhoot acha likha hai aapne

netra...
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punam
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«Reply #20 on: June 16, 2007, 12:08:38 PM »
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Thanx Netra ji...
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«Reply #21 on: June 16, 2007, 01:45:21 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai PUNAM Aur POOJA ji.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Mazaa gaya Padh kar.. Usual Smile Usual Smile.

Mohabbat Bhari aur Mohabbat ke Lafzon se Saji Tahreed Hai yeh.. Usual Smile Usual Smile Bahut khoooooob.. !!
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«Reply #22 on: June 18, 2007, 09:44:34 AM »
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bahoot khoob Punam...


Baato baato main baat banate ho
Kyun mujhko itna app state ho
Kab samjhoge preet meri
Kis andaz se khud ko anjaan banate ho

Hu main ab teri is per kar le yakin
Janati hu man hi man tum bhi muskurate ho
Jaise bhi ho tum, bas ab ho mere
Phir kyun mere sabar ka imtihaan liye jaate ho


kya bat hai pooja ji you are realy a great poet
thoda buzy hoo nahi to kuch likhta..........par aap likhte rahiye

netra...
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«Reply #23 on: June 18, 2007, 09:45:10 AM »
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bahoot khoob Punam...


Baato baato main baat banate ho
Kyun mujhko itna app state ho
Kab samjhoge preet meri
Kis andaz se khud ko anjaan banate ho

Hu main ab teri is per kar le yakin
Janati hu man hi man tum bhi muskurate ho
Jaise bhi ho tum, bas ab ho mere
Phir kyun mere sabar ka imtihaan liye jaate ho


kya bat hai pooja ji you are realy a great poet
thoda buzy hoo nahi to kuch likhta..........par aap likhte rahiye

netra...
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«Reply #24 on: June 18, 2007, 10:59:49 AM »
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roothe roothe se baithe hai aaj wo
kis anjaan se kyo khafa  hooe baithe hai wo

kya khta hooyee kisee ke ye to bata dete hame
or nahi to jara see muskaan uphaar me de te hame

aahik tere har ada pe kurbaan rahate hai ham to
kyo palat kab bhee nahi dekhta hame jar bata to

teri hasi ko tarsatee hai ye atma hee nahi ye wadiya bhee
sanaata sa kyo hai sab taraf jara bata de sathee hame bhee

gar khta hamaree hai to sar kata denge tere kadmo me
gar khta hai terei to bata wo zahar bhee bharlenge apne daman me

netra....
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punam
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«Reply #25 on: June 19, 2007, 05:18:31 AM »
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Dil me aaj yeh kaisa ehsaas mujhe kehene do
dil kyun hai bekarar mujhe aaj kehene do

dil me ye chahat kaisi mujhe kehene do
tum paas ho dil ki baat aaj kehene do

tum toh keh gaye apne dil ka haal
chahe the jo sun ne mujhse aaj kehene do

tum pesh kiye the apna dil tohfe me mujhe
mujhe kitna pyara laga ye tohfa aaj kehene do

Dil me aaj jo khushi ke phool khil rahe hai
tumhare charan me aaj arpan karne do...
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paani
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«Reply #26 on: June 19, 2007, 07:14:30 AM »
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kyun tum mujhe aisa dard dete ho
kyun mujhe yun rulate rehete ho

kaun hai dil me bata do mujhe
poochoon to muskura dete ho

main jab rooth ke na bolun toh
tum hi meri jaan yeh kehete ho

dekh nahi sakte mujhe rote huye
aise kehete huye dil behela dete ho..

tum bade hi natkhat ho
jo bhi ho jaise bhi ho mere ho....


So sweet .. Punam
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«Reply #27 on: June 19, 2007, 08:44:41 PM »
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Thanks Punamm Vicky ji and Netra ji!!

Netra ji app khud bahoot kamal ka likhte hai...

Punam bahoot bahoot acha likha hai... wah bahoot acha laga pad kar...

apki poem pad kar jo man mai ayya.. bas ek hi saans mai yah likh diya Usual Smile

Dil ko ajmaane chale ho
Khud ko uljhane chale ho

Dekhiye apko bata de abhi
Kyun humko ajmaane chale ho

Hai payar sirf tumse mujhe
Kaya khud per itraane chale ho

Palat ker dekho to ek baar sanam
Hum bhi dekhain, kaya humse chupane chale ho

Mere ho sirf mere, jaise bhi ho app
Zindagi bhar ka sath, ab nibhane chale ho Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: June 20, 2007, 05:10:39 AM »
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Thanx pooja di..chalo aap ko acha laga...

Aaj apni mohabbat ke aagosh me kho jaane do
yeh lamha aaj jee bhar ke jee lene do

mere sanso mein teri khushbu rehe jaane do
mujhe yun madhoshi me khone do...

teri chahat teri tamanna dil me sanam
mujhe aaj is mohabbat ki aag me jalne do

tum mere ho sirf mere ho jaise bhi ho mere ho
bas yeh kehete huye mujhe ...
apne baho me aakhri sans tak rehene do...  
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«Reply #29 on: June 20, 2007, 12:51:04 PM »
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khole the lab tune kyo,  kaha tujse kuch bhee n gaya
tum to sharmye the tab, us haya ko teri hamse bhee dekha n gaya

chale aye the mahafil se ahasaas liye dil me ijhare-mohabbat ka
par uska ijhaar kisi or ke liye , hamse ye saha bhee n gaya

ham to aye the mahfil me raja uskee  hee samaj kar
sahate ab darde-dil ko ijhare-mohabbat ki saja samaj kar

nahi kahata hai koi bhee bewafa us aashik haseena ko
kahati duniya saree n jane kyo harjayee  shirf mujhhee ko

nahi dekha kisi ne bhee lafje-khanjar se ghayaal dil aashik ka
ham to mshroof the tookdo ko batore ne apne toote hue dil ke
unko dekho....... dil ka sawarna  bhee dekha n gaya unse aashik ka....

Netra....
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