jaise ehasaan utaarataa hai ko_ii

by DJ Goher on May 02, 2005, 05:04:51 PM
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din kuchh aise guzaarataa hai ko_ii
jaise ehasaan utaarataa hai ko_ii

aa_iinaa dekh ke tasallii hu_ii
ham ko is ghar me.n jaanataa hai ko_ii

pak gayaa hai shazar pe phal shayaad
phir se patthar uchhalataa hai ko_ii

phir nazar me.n lahuu ke chhii.nTe hai.n
tum ko shaayad mughaalataa hai ko_ii

der se guu.Njate.n hai.n sannaaTe
jaise ham ko pukaarataa hai ko_ii
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2009, 03:17:47 PM »
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Nice One Gohar Ji,.

Bohat Behtareen Sharing Ki hai Aapne,.

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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2009, 04:37:07 PM »
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gohar sahab aapki ghazal achchi hai ,par agar bura na manein to kuch baat kahoon, pehli to 3rd sheir mein SHAZAR ki jagha SHAJAR hota to zyada behtar tha,4th sher mein cheintein parhney mey aasani hoti.
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2009, 07:09:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob

Mudasser Sb
main bhi wohi likne wala tha , shaliye shukria aap ne masla hal ker diya

shukria

gohar saheb kavish achchi hai


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