Jane kya baat hai??

by Kohinoor on January 31, 2012, 08:00:59 AM
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Jane kya baat hai?
Bahut bechaini si mehsoos ho rhi hai...
Sara bdan ek ajeeb si srsrahat ki jd me hai..
Ye tumhari yaad hai ya kuch aur?
Pta nhi!
Lekin....
Kuch to mehsoos kr rhi hun mai...
Kya tumhare saanson ki grmahat?
Ya tumhari koi sararat?
..Tumhara mere paas hona
baten karna..
Tumhara hsna..muskurana..
Ya fir naraaz ho jana..
Wjah kya hai..?
Kya ye sb kuch..?
Ya fir kuch aur..
Jb tum mujhse rooth jate ho to mai khud se rooth jati hun
Apne ko mnati hun..tum b maan jate ho.
Tumhari aankhen hr lmhe me mujhse
hzaron baten krti hai'n
ishara deti hain
Tumhare rooth jane ka..
Kaha'n gai wo khushi jo in aankhon me rehti thi
kahi'n chali gai..??
Nhi..ye khushi sirf aankhon ki nhi
dil ki bhi hai.
Pr tumhara dil kahaa'n hai?
Kisi aur k paas
mere paas..!
To fir aankhen laal kyo?
Kya khfa ho apne dil se?
Mujhse..!?
Ye dil b na..ajab cheej hai..
Tumhe de diya fir bhi ghabra rha hai..
Agar ek pl k liye b tumse door ho jaun to ajeeb si halat hoti hai
tumhari aur meri
hmari..!!
Mai aur tum..aur koi nhi..
Mera hath tumhare hath me
chalte jayen door tk...rukungi nhi!
Hum dono..door kahi'n
sawan ka mahina aur mera sar tumhare kaandhe pe..
Ye aarju hai,
ye dua hai meri
jo mai apne sajdon me maangti rehti hun..
Pta hai..
Mujhe nind nhi aati...
Kyun??
Aapka aagosh kahaa'n jo nind aaye..
Aapki bahen mujhe bulati hain
aa jao..aa jao na..
Pr dr lgta hai
kahi'n kho na jau'n...
Mai tumse pyar krti hun...bs..?
Nhi..mujhe lgta hai kam hai...
Par...isse jada kya hai??
Ye Kya ho gya hai mujhe..?
Kuch to kaho...
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2012, 08:05:23 AM »
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acha likha hai apne thoda space dalte to aur behtar lagta
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2012, 08:11:22 AM »
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Shukriya saahil ji
mai kosis karungi ki accha likh saku'n...
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2012, 09:09:53 AM »
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Bahut hee behtreen peshkash kohinoor ji daad deta hoon.
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2012, 09:55:43 AM »
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Shukriya sksaini ji
kohinoor khush hui!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2012, 10:56:55 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2012, 04:40:53 PM »
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Bahut khoob Noor
ye tumhari sabse behatrin peshkash hai...
padhna shuru kiya..khud ko bhool sa gaya..ek suspense...aage kya hoga? 
vaaah..kya andaaj tha...
very interesting....kya kaha hoga?? Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2012, 09:01:56 PM »
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Behtareen. Meri taraf se daad qubool kijiye.
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2012, 12:46:15 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 31, 2012, 09:01:56 PM
Behtareen. Meri taraf se daad qubool kijiye.
bahut shukriya,bahut meharbani Aatish ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2012, 01:30:05 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on January 31, 2012, 04:40:53 PM
Bahut khoob Noor
ye tumhari sabse behatrin peshkash hai...
padhna shuru kiya..khud ko bhool sa gaya..ek suspense...aage kya hoga? 
vaaah..kya andaaj tha...
very interesting....kya kaha hoga?? Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
shukriya mkv ji
aapne poocha kya kaha hoga
to btati hun ki aur kya kaha..
"jaan smajh pa rhe ho ye sb kuch
jo tumse keh rhi hun?
Agar smajh jana to
mujhe b smjha dena ki
ye bechaini
ye srsrahat kyo mehsoos kr rhi hun...
Jbki tum mere ho
sirf mere...!
To fir,
juda kyo ho mujhse?
Suno..
Mere sath rha karo...
Mere paas!
Itne paas ki bs tumse tumhi tk ka faashla rhe..
Aur mai tumhe dekhti rahu'n...
Plken jhapkaungi nhi..
Dil ko qaraar aane tk..!
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2012, 05:29:48 PM »
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Quote from: Kohinoor on February 01, 2012, 01:30:05 PM
shukriya mkv ji
aapne poocha kya kaha hoga
to btati hun ki aur kya kaha..
"jaan smajh pa rhe ho ye sb kuch
jo tumse keh rhi hun?
Agar smajh jana to
mujhe b smjha dena ki
ye bechaini
ye srsrahat kyo mehsoos kr rhi hun...
Jbki tum mere ho
sirf mere...!
To fir,
juda kyo ho mujhse?
Suno..
Mere sath rha karo...
Mere paas!
Itne paas ki bs tumse tumhi tk ka faashla rhe..
Aur mai tumhe dekhti rahu'n...
Plken jhapkaungi nhi..
Dil ko qaraar aane tk..!
Very impressive.
i'm speechless.  Is it SO!
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2012, 05:49:42 PM »
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behtrin....bahut bahut bahutttttttttt behtrin....parrte parrte labon par ek ajab si muskaan aur aankhon mein nami chha gayi....kaabil-e-taarif hai aapka ye andaaz-e-byaan kohinoor..jitna mujhe yaad hai maine aaj pehli baar aapko parra hai aur bas parrti hi reh gayi...dil jeet liya aapne...aur taarif mein kya kahu samajh nahi aa raha...yu hi likhti rahiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2012, 07:03:58 PM »
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ehsaason se bhari touching lines hai   Hats off to you!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut umda daad kabool kijeye
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2012, 07:09:16 PM »
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Ek masumiyat bhari magar saaf dil ki peshkash .

MKV ko diya gaya jawaab bhi behtereen ban pada hai.

Good work!
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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2012, 08:42:08 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on February 01, 2012, 05:49:42 PM
behtrin....bahut bahut bahutttttttttt behtrin....parrte parrte labon par ek ajab si muskaan aur aankhon mein nami chha gayi....kaabil-e-taarif hai aapka ye andaaz-e-byaan kohinoor..jitna mujhe yaad hai maine aaj pehli baar aapko parra hai aur bas parrti hi reh gayi...dil jeet liya aapne...aur taarif mein kya kahu samajh nahi aa raha...yu hi likhti rahiyega.. icon_flower
aapne pdha aur comment dia...
hme accha lga Nikhaar ji
thanks
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