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tumse milkar tumhe kuchh batana hai
jitne bhi pal guzaroo tumahare sath
jane kyu bahut hi kam lagte hai
sabhi janmo ki duriyo ko us ek pal me mitana hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2005, 12:53:07 PM » |
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waah tinda ji !!!
dil mein tere pyaar ka ehsaas liye huye
chal rhey hai khushi se muhhobat ki raah par
kaseey byaaN kru ke kitna pyaar hai tumse
mein khud ko fanaah kar du teri ik aaah par !!
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2005, 01:11:02 PM » |
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dear HumTum,
you don't know something about yrself
that u always hit the dart right to the bulz' eye
Gr8 reply!
kyaa cheez hai pyar tumse humne jana hai
tumse duur hoke jina
kya khaak marna hai
kya khaak jeena hai!
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2005, 01:17:28 PM » |
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Thanx a lot buddy ... for liking my work !!
n yes of course you too write very good !!
muhhobat ko teri humney khuda mana hai
tujhey dekh ke jite hai tujh pe maregey sanam
chaha hai tujh ko apni jaan se zayda
sab kehte hai lekin hum yeh karegey sanam !!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2005, 01:40:57 PM » |
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jaan kehte ho to kyun nahi itna jaan lete,
dene ko apni jaan kehke, kyu ho hamari jaan lete. . .
thanx again HumTum
I am not a great shayar like you
but believe me you've taught me how to reply!
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2005, 01:53:22 PM » |
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Thanks a Million dear !!! n i am not a good shayaar !!
but if you believe wht you say then it's a great honour for me ... thanks a lot :D n nice reply !!
yeh zindgi bhi to tumhari hi hai
tujhey dekh ke hi to jeetey hai hum
ik lamha bhi jab nazaroon si hoti ho duur
ruk si jati hai hamari saansein sanam !!
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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2005, 03:40:15 PM » |
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great going tinda and humtum..........
waqt guzarta nahi tha tere sahahre ke bina
aaj guzar rahi hai zindagi tere yaad ke saath
guzarta hai jeevan muskurakar mera
iss janam mein kaafi tha tere kuch dino ka saath..
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2005, 03:46:36 PM » |
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waah amrita ji ...
dasta hai har ik lamha teri judai ka
chalta hai dil pe kanjar teri yaad ke sath
kha hai tu tujhey dund rhi hai nazarin
mar rha hoon pal pal tanhai ke sath !!
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2005, 04:24:36 PM » |
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Jub tak chalti rahaygee saas
tub tak milnay ke rahayge aas
Kabhee meloge to hoga iska Ahsaas
kee tumharee mohabba kay bena dil tha kinta udas
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2005, 09:47:35 AM » |
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thanx alot HumTum, Amrita and Safat, very nice posts by all
logo ko poochte suna hai
pyaar, ishq kaunsi khas hai isme baat
par kya jane woh bechare
ek baar tham kar to dekho sachche yaar ka haath
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«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2005, 11:02:32 AM » |
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ek baar pyaar kiya tha,ab dobaara nahi karenge..
haath thamne ki galti,ab dobaara nahi karenge..
pyaar ishq mohobbat woh aatish hai janab
ismein haath jalane ki galti,ab dobara nahi karenge..
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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2005, 02:50:22 PM » |
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Aag se khelna to diljalo ki nishaani hai
hontoN pe tabsum ankhoon mein pani hai
ishq mein jeena ishq mein marna "HumTum"
teri to faqt rhi bas yhi zindgani hai !!!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2005, 05:06:45 PM » |
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Hamri Ana ko Gawara na tha ke mohabat mang kar lete
Aur un main itna zarf na tha ke bin mange luta detey.
Aik muddat tak as dil ki Beqarariyan na gaein
Har Roz tuje khat lekhte aur har Roz jala detey
Khud ko teri mohabat ke qabil hi na samjha warna
Tot ke tuje aisa chahte ke khud ko bhula detey
kabhi Azma kar dekha hota ke teri khawshon ki khatir
Tere kadmon main bekhar jate teri Rahon ko saja detey
Mojza dekh meri mohabat ka ke tuje to Asman kar dia
Aur khud Reh gaye teri galiyon main mohabat ki sada detey
Becharna hi tha to Hijar ke Taqaze to nebhaye hote
main tum ko bhola deta tum mujko bhula detey
Apne Dard ki Tashaheir Hamein gawara na thi
warna Dohai aesi detey ke Zamane ko Rula detey.....nm
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«Reply #13 on: July 30, 2005, 12:16:58 PM » |
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thanx amrita and HumTum, great going. . . trying to add some of mine you also taste this wine. . .
na jane kaisa nasha hai teri bato mein
subah ka hosh nahi shaam ka pata
itna doob jaun tere haseen khyaalo mein
chal jaye to chal jaye sari duniya ko pata
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