Jara aahista se

by chitra on June 01, 2016, 08:27:32 AM
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Kuchh bechain si saanse , kuchh dhundhli si yaade hai,
kuchh ajeeb se wo jazbaat , aur bahut si baate hai,

Kuchh dhadkano ke shor mein,  khamoush tere mere afsaane hai,
aur milne ki wo tadap, kaise kaise wo bahaane hai,

Ho jaaye guftgu aaj wahi, bahut bolti si teri nigahe hai,
bahak jaaye bekhudi mein wanhi, bahut rangeen si wo rahe hai,

uff kya haseen khyaal ye hai, zara ahista se ye farmaane hai,
ahat si bhi na ho koi, bahut bedard se ye zamaane hai.



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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2016, 08:34:17 AM »
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Kuchh bechain si saanse , kuchh dhundhli si yaade hai,
kuchh ajeeb se wo jazbaat , aur bahut si baate hai,

Kuchh dhadkano ke shor mein,  khamoush tere mere afsaane hai,
aur milne ki wo tadap, kaise kaise wo bahaane hai,

Ho jaaye guftgu aaj wahi, bahut bolti si teri nigahe hai,
bahak jaaye bekhudi mein wanhi, bahut rangeen si wo rahe hai,

uff kya haseen khyaal ye hai, zara ahista se ye farmaane hai,
ahat si bhi na ho koi, bahut bedard se ye zamaane hai.





Bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

But i confused with the title "Jara artists se"  DOH
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2016, 09:23:51 AM »
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Title was
Jara aahista se

Par mobile ne garbad kar di. ...
bejaan cheeze bhi dhoka deti hai
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2016, 09:30:18 AM »
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Title was
Jara aahista se

Par mobile ne garbad kar di. ...
bejaan cheeze bhi dhoka deti hai

Ji andaza tha ke "Zara Aahista Se" hi hoga Usual Smile

Bejaan cheezen bhi dhoka deena seekh gai hain,,, kyonke ziyada waqt jandaron ke saath jo raheti hain  Laughing hard
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2016, 09:52:56 AM »
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Abhi sahi ho gya. ....title.....thank God
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2016, 07:35:38 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kyaa kehne Chitra ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aagayaa padhke, aajkal aise poems kam hi dikhte hain Yoindia mein, mohabbat mein doobi hui, ek ek shabd mohabbat barsaataa huwaa...kyaa kehne... kuch likhe binaa rahaa nahi gayaa jawaab mein... ummeed hai aap buraa nahi maanenge...


aksar  kitaab  ke    panno   ko   palat_taa  jaataa hoon main
fir  tere  diye  ghulaab  ko  dekh   muskuraataa  hoon   main

kehnaa  chaahtaa  hoon  bahut  si baatein sabhi  se  magar
zaalim  zamaane  se  bhi to  bahut  ghabraataa  hoon  main

kabhi  zameen  pe  pare  dhool   ko seene se lagaataa hoon
kabhi aasmaan  ko  chhune  ko pankh  failaataa  hoon main

kaisi  hai   bechaini   is   dil   ki  main  samajh   paataa  nahi
inhi uljhano  mein   aur   ulajhtaa  chalaa jaataa hoon main

yun  to  aadat   thi  hi  nahi  kisi  nashe  ki  mujhe  aaj  tak
mohabbat ke nashe mein hi ab jhoomtaa jaataa hoon main


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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2016, 09:13:09 PM »
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kyaa baat hai waah waah waah dheron daad w/ Rau.
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2016, 06:20:08 AM »
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wowwww!! aapke fans me hame bhi add kar lijye...bahot hi sunder .... love4 notworthy icon_salut love4
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2016, 08:07:33 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2016, 01:44:10 PM »
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Sukriya rustam ji. ...hriday ji. .....surindarn ji. ....aur mast kalandar ji. ......bahut bahut Sukriya


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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2016, 02:10:27 PM »
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Hriday jee
Aapne bahut khubsurat likha hai. ...
aur mujhe iska bura lage. ....ye to koi baat ho hi nahi sakti .....
hum kuchh likhe. ...aur use pad kar zazbaat na umde ....to fir maza hi kya hai. ....aap bindaz likhye.....hume yakin maaniye bahut achchha laga. ...


Kuchh humne bhi koshish ki hai

Aksar kitaab ke panno mein, wo baate dafan hoti hai
khaali Rakhi panktiya bhi, raz E dil kholti hai

Huaa tha ek nasha hume bhi, kisi ki muhbbat ka
Zindgi ki har uljhan , usi ke nashe mein suljhati hai
   
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2016, 08:42:48 PM »
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Quote from: chitra on June 01, 2016, 08:27:32 AM


Kuchh bechain si saanse , kuchh dhundhli si yaade hai,
kuchh ajeeb se wo jazbaat , aur bahut si baate hai,

Kuchh dhadkano ke shor mein,  khamoush tere mere afsaane hai,
aur milne ki wo tadap, kaise kaise wo bahaane hai,

Ho jaaye guftgu aaj wahi, bahut bolti si teri nigahe hai,
bahak jaaye bekhudi mein wanhi, bahut rangeen si wo rahe hai,

uff kya haseen khyaal ye hai, zara ahista se ye farmaane hai,
ahat si bhi na ho koi, bahut bedard se ye zamaane hai.





acha hai ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2016, 05:58:08 AM »
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Hriday jee
Aapne bahut khubsurat likha hai. ...
aur mujhe iska bura lage. ....ye to koi baat ho hi nahi sakti .....
hum kuchh likhe. ...aur use pad kar zazbaat na umde ....to fir maza hi kya hai. ....aap bindaz likhye.....hume yakin maaniye bahut achchha laga. ...


Kuchh humne bhi koshish ki hai

Aksar kitaab ke panno mein, wo baate dafan hoti hai
khaali Rakhi panktiya bhi, raz E dil kholti hai

Huaa tha ek nasha hume bhi, kisi ki muhbbat ka
Zindgi ki har uljhan , usi ke nashe mein suljhati hai
    



bahut bahut shukriyaa hamaari kavita pasand karne ke liye aur khoobsoorat saa jawaab likhne ke liye...!!! bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne... kuch saal pehle YO mein alag hi mausam huwaa kartaa thaa jugalbandi kaa, hum bhi likh lete the... aajkal log apne mein hi busy rehte hain...!!!

kuch lines aur likh letaa hoon..!!!

kyaa  bataaun  tumse  main ki haalat apni kaisi hai
bin  jal  ke ho  machhli koi,  haalat   apni  waisi hai

saanson kaa naataa unse, unse hi har bandhan hai
haal  unse judaa  hokar hamaari deewaano jaisi hai
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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2016, 02:07:29 PM »
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Sahi kaha aapne hriday ji
mahoul bahut badal gya. ...mahfil itni sooni to kabhi nahi thi. .....aajkal waqt ko bhi fursat nahi. ...ki kisi ko mil jaaye. .....


Hum ronak le aate hai wapas
ek aur koshish ki hai..

Kuchh aise hi ishq mein, mere haalat huye jaate hai
kya gazab ke machlate se, mere zazbaat huye jaate hai
aur nashe mein jhumate se   , mere har alfaz  huye jate hai
koi roke to bhi shouk se , hum barbaad huye jaate hai


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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2016, 05:02:32 PM »
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Bohut khub waaah waah waah
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