Jeene ki wajah hi tum ho.......

by ANKUR_CRAZY on January 06, 2007, 10:53:05 AM
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Dil me tum ho, dhadkun me tum ho,
neendo me tum ho, khawabo me tum ho,
aankhon me tum ho, neero(aansu) me tum ho,
dil me chubhe hue teero me tum ho.

Phulon me tum ho, kaliyon me tum ho,
meri dil ki in suni galiyon me tum ho.
din me tum ho, raat me tum ho,
meri liye to dharti aakash bhi tum ho.

Vaadon me tum ho, vafaon me tum ho,
zindagi ki hur ek adauon me tum ho.
samundur bhi tum ho, saahil bhi tum ho,
meri hur rah ki manjil bhi tum ho.

Tanhayee bhi tum ho, mehfil bhi tum ho,
mujhe apni adaon se marne wali qatil bhi tum ho.
ab aur iske aage mai kya kahu,
mere jene ki wajah hi tum ho.  
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2007, 06:50:38 AM »
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areeeee frnds
kuch to reply karo sirf dekh ke chale jate ho....
acchi kharab kuch to kaho
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2007, 08:32:43 PM »
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Bahut achcha likha hai ankur ji..
Khrab kyun kahenge hum..
he he he :lol:

Humne to aaj hi padha hai..
Baaki bhi reply zarur denge aapko..!!
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«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2007, 08:36:52 PM »
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Mere Adhure khwabon mein tum ho,
Jo poori na ho sakin,Un har khwahishon mein tum ho,
Dil ke bikhre tukdon mein tum ho..
Mere har dard,har aansu mein tum ho..
Likha jo kabhi maine gham ko kalam se,
Uss gham ke har ek katre mein Sirf Tum ho..
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2007, 08:29:42 AM »
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Mere Adhure khwabon mein tum ho,
Jo poori na ho sakin,Un har khwahishon mein tum ho,
Dil ke bikhre tukdon mein tum ho..
Mere har dard,har aansu mein tum ho..
Likha jo kabhi maine gham ko kalam se,
Uss gham ke har ek katre mein Sirf Tum ho..



thanx a lot pinky ji aapne bhi bahut accha likha hai dil ko chu gaye ye lines
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2007, 08:31:32 AM »
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bohat khoob Ankur miyan And Pinky ji

humaari taraf se bhi kuch aapse achha to nahi fir bhi kabul kare


zameen ban jaaye kaagaz ki aur aashman sheehayi ka.
fir bhi kalam likh nahi sakti Qissa Dard..e..judaai ka



bahut shukriya majid bhai
apne bhi accah bahut accha likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2007, 06:56:56 PM »
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bohat khoob Ankur miyan And Pinky ji

humaari taraf se bhi kuch aapse achha to nahi fir bhi 2 line


zameen ban jaaye kaagaz ki aur aashman sheehayi ka.
fir bhi kalam likh nahi sakti Qissa Dard..e..judaai ka


Bahut khoob Majid Ji..

Judai ka dard ek baar seh bhi leta dil..
Par mere Muqadar mein to uski Bewafai likhi thi..
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2007, 06:58:13 PM »
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Mere Adhure khwabon mein tum ho,
Jo poori na ho sakin,Un har khwahishon mein tum ho,
Dil ke bikhre tukdon mein tum ho..
Mere har dard,har aansu mein tum ho..
Likha jo kabhi maine gham ko kalam se,
Uss gham ke har ek katre mein Sirf Tum ho..



thanx a lot pinky ji aapne bhi bahut accha likha hai dil ko chu gaye ye lines


Thanx ankur..
Aap ne itna achcha likha ki reply bhi achcha to hone tha na!!
Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2007, 09:04:30 AM »
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thanx again
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«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2009, 04:31:58 PM »
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very Good ankurji and Pinky ji.Keep posting
Y.M.Mittal
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«Reply #10 on: November 26, 2009, 06:01:12 PM »
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Wah-wah Ankurji aur Pinky ji...bahoot khoob lika hai dono ne...... Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause dono k liye....

Jidhar dekhti hu tum he tum ho
Meri hansi meri muskaan tum ho
Mere rom-rom mai base he tum ho
Meri har saans mai tum he tum ho
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2010, 07:33:56 AM »
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GOOD POEM. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
BUT TELL ME ONE THING WHERE DO YOU LIVE.?
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2010, 09:39:09 AM »
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Bahut confusion ho raha hai.....
Guhar k avtaar mai Suresh Sangwan kahan se aa gaye....are U both same person?Huh??


Aur kis se puchha "BUT TELL ME ONE THING WHERE DO YOU LIVE.?"

Ankur se Pinkey se  koyal se ya  Guhar se.......kis se  ?

GOOD POEM. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
BUT TELL ME ONE THING WHERE DO YOU LIVE.?
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