!!!-Jeevan Saathi-!!!

by ranjana on May 21, 2006, 04:45:40 PM
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jo tum hote jeevan saathi hamare
kitne sundar hote woh din rein hamhare
ek dusare ki bahon mein khoye rehte
jeevan ka andhiyara.........
aankho se aankhe mil jati
prem ki bahsaha sab pad jaati
saanso mein saanse kho jaati
jeevan ki bagiyaa mein mahekte phool saare
jo tum hote jeevan saathi hamare

dharkan se dharkan mil jaati
rom-rom mein bijali si daud jaati
main shabnam se shola ho jaati
madhoshi ke alam mein beetate
jo tum hote jeevan saathi hamare

kabhi ruthate kabhi mannate
kabhi yun hi  sote se tujhe jaagate
tere adharaon ki madakata apne adharo se pee jate
teri bahon ke ghere mein ........
bas thak kar hum so  jaate
aankho mein khilte sukhad swapan hamare
jo tum hote jeevan saathi hamare

main ban jaati vishwas tumahra
tum ban jaate aas hamaari
apnepan ki muskurahat se beette jaate din hamaare
jo tum hote jeenvan saathi hamaare
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2006, 04:52:49 PM »
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Marvalous Ranju..........
 Usual Smile
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Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2006, 05:23:58 PM »
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Ranju

Superb !  =D> =D> =D>

Kya rachna hai "jo tum hote jeevan saathi humare" :D

Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2006, 02:38:23 AM »
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Marvalous Ranju..........
 Usual Smile


shukriya Gaurav.........
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2006, 02:40:34 AM »
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Ranju

Superb !  =D> =D> =D>

Kya rachna hai "jo tum hote jeevan saathi humare" :D

Rajbir


shukriya Rajbir ji..............aap yahan aaye ,isko pasand kiya, dhanyewad

 :D
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2006, 05:31:17 AM »
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realy wonderful ranjana... subah rangeen kar diya aapne..

maanti hoon priya gar hum hote jeevan saathi tere,
sundar itna hota jaisa bhagwan ka prasanna vadan...
woh aalingan aisa hota jahan
hawa ki ek jhonke bhi gus na jaata...
woh nazaren aise hoti har premiyon
ki prem ki pehle nazar hote...
khoya hua un saanso mein
hamari prem ka suvasan hota...
us bagiya mein khila har phool
tera sundar chehra hota...

woh dhadkan ka milan aisa hota
jaisa megh ka gharjan hota...
us romanchan aisa hota
jaisa pehli sparsh ka hota..
woh shola aisa hota jaise
arjun ka khaandav dahan hota...
us madhoshi ka alam narnaadiyon mein vyaapit hota..

ruthna manana hi toh hain
so'na aur jaagna hi toh hain
par unme shararate hote...

woh maadakta aisa hota
jaise apsaravon ki nayan mein hota...
tu phool ban jata aur main thithli...

un bahen itna vishal hota shayad
tumhe sara jahan hi chota ho jata...
woh thakavat aisa hota jaisa
abhi abhi rukha hua yuddh hota...

un sapne aise hoti jaise kamaldal hota...
vishwas hi kyon aatmvishvas hota...
aas hi bhale aashaon ka dariya behta...
aur teri muskurat ke baare mein kya kahe...
itna sunda hota jaise teri har kavitha hota...

jo hum hote jeenvan saathi tere
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2006, 05:53:11 AM »
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Ranju Ji

i always bow down my head to ur creations and this one is not an exception.
beautifully expressed love feelings and thepower of attraction is great.
hats off to u again mam
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2006, 06:18:22 AM »
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bahoot hi khoob Ranju and good one MK ji!!

Sathi ka roop, tumne muje samjhaya hai
kaya hai jeevan, iska arth bataya hai
sath na hokar bhi tuji ko sathi mana hai
jab tak hai jeevan, bas aise hi sath nibhana hai

kis ko kahty hai jeevan sathi, iska arth badal jaata hai
diya jo sath tune, wo hi in sabdo ko sarthak kar jaata hai!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2006, 06:28:45 AM »
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Excellent Pankhuri......maza a gaya padke.......Keep Writing
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mrkotians
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2006, 04:33:26 PM »
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shukriya pankhuri... prativandan...


Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
bahoot hi khoob Ranju and good one MK ji!!

Sathi ka roop, tumne muje samjhaya hai
kaya hai jeevan, iska arth bataya hai
sath na hokar bhi tuji ko sathi mana hai
jab tak hai jeevan, bas aise hi sath nibhana hai

kis ko kahty hai jeevan sathi, iska arth badal jaata hai
diya jo sath tune, wo hi in sabdo ko sarthak kar jaata hai!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2006, 04:51:57 PM »
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realy wonderful ranjana... subah rangeen kar diya aapne..

maanti hoon priya gar hum hote jeevan saathi tere,
sundar itna hota jaisa bhagwan ka prasanna vadan...
woh aalingan aisa hota jahan
hawa ki ek jhonke bhi gus na jaata...
woh nazaren aise hoti har premiyon
ki prem ki pehle nazar hote...
khoya hua un saanso mein
hamari prem ka suvasan hota...
us bagiya mein khila har phool
tera sundar chehra hota...

woh dhadkan ka milan aisa hota
jaisa megh ka gharjan hota...
us romanchan aisa hota
jaisa pehli sparsh ka hota..
woh shola aisa hota jaise
arjun ka khaandav dahan hota...
us madhoshi ka alam narnaadiyon mein vyaapit hota..

ruthna manana hi toh hain
so'na aur jaagna hi toh hain
par unme shararate hote...

woh maadakta aisa hota
jaise apsaravon ki nayan mein hota...
tu phool ban jata aur main thithli...

un bahen itna vishal hota shayad
tumhe sara jahan hi chota ho jata...
woh thakavat aisa hota jaisa
abhi abhi rukha hua yuddh hota...

un sapne aise hoti jaise kamaldal hota...
vishwas hi kyon aatmvishvas hota...
aas hi bhale aashaon ka dariya behta...
aur teri muskurat ke baare mein kya kahe...
itna sunda hota jaise teri har kavitha hota...

jo hum hote jeenvan saathi tere



shukriya MK ji...........bahut sundar likha hai aapne........
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2006, 04:53:47 PM »
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Ranju Ji

i always bow down my head to ur creations and this one is not an exception.
beautifully expressed love feelings and thepower of attraction is great.
hats off to you again mam


bahut bahut shukriya Kamyani ji..........aap yun hi mera hosala badti rahe
thanks again............ Usual Smile
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ranjana
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«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2006, 05:01:48 PM »
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bahoot hi khoob Ranju and good one MK ji!!

Sathi ka roop, tumne muje samjhaya hai
kaya hai jeevan, iska arth bataya hai
sath na hokar bhi tuji ko sathi mana hai
jab tak hai jeevan, bas aise hi sath nibhana hai

kis ko kahty hai jeevan sathi, iska arth badal jaata hai
diya jo sath tune, wo hi in sabdo ko sarthak kar jaata hai!!


wow its wonderful...........................amazing...... ............
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phoenix
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2006, 06:37:56 PM »
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jeevan bhar sath chalunga tere
mein koi saaya nahi hun,
jeevan ko rang doonga tere
mein khwab koi pyaara nahi hun

saaya raat mein sath chod dega
mein tera woh sahara nahi hun
khwaab subah tut jaenge tere
mein subah ki oos ka pyaasa nahi hun
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ranjana
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«Reply #14 on: May 23, 2006, 01:42:50 AM »
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sun ke khayal tere mere jajabaat  bahak gaye
aaj ki alsaayi si subah ko khayal tumhare chum gaye
mann ke akaash per inderdhanushi se rang bikharne lage
naach uthi meri kalpana pagalayi si........
mehaka gaye meri  jindagi ko  rajanigandha se
jab khawab mere tere hamsafar ban gaye
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