----- /// Jeewan Ho tum /// -----

by klaskar on August 17, 2010, 02:07:19 PM
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main hawaa banke tum sang aaj beh jaunga,
lahu banke tumhaare dil me main reh jaunga,
mehek me tumhaari main yun khoya hoon aaj,
tumhaari khushboo se khud ko mehka jaunga,

dil me hai dhadkan aur dhadkan me tum,
saanso me khushboo hai, khushboo ho tum,
jaane ye kaisa hai rishta hamaara,
tum se hi main hoon aur mujhse ho tum,

paake tumhe paaya maine saara jahaan,
tumse haseen ab kuch main paaun kahaan,
jaane na dunga tumhe mujhse main dur,
chhodke tumhe main ab jaaun kahaan,

saagar hai dil mera, lehren ho tum,
phool hoon main agar to titli ho tum,
tumse si rishta hai, tumse se hi sab kuch,
zinda hoon main agar to jeewan ho tum,

saanse bhi tum ho, meri dhadkan bhi tum,
aansoo bhi tum ho, meri muskaan bhi tum,
syaahi hoon main agar to kalam ho tum,
ghazal hoon main agar to ehsaas ho tum...


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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 04:00:20 PM »
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waah waah....bahut i khoooooooobbbbbbbbb........jinke liye bhi likha hai bahut khoob likha hai klaskr ji........ Usual Smile......
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2010, 02:04:19 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Pooja ji.... ye bas meri imagination hai... kisi ke liye bhi nahi likha...aapne apna keemti waqt me se thoda waqt nikaalke is kavita ko diya, padha aur pasand kiya jiske liye main tahe dil se aapka shukriyaa adaa karta hoon...!!!

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waah waah....bahut i khoooooooobbbbbbbbb........jinke liye bhi likha hai bahut khoob likha hai klaskr ji........ Usual Smile......
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2010, 10:35:16 AM »
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bht hi khubsurat poem hai klaskar ji aapki aur ise dekh kar padh kar likhe bina raha nahin gaya....aapko kaha tha mushkil hai par......

Lehron me uthti hulchal hun main
Use sametne wale saahil ho tum

Geeton me sajte sur hun main
Unhe gungunate gaayak ho tum

Bikhri hui thandi sheetal chandni hun main
Par mujhe failane wale chaand ho tum

Phoolon ki khushbu haan  hum main
Par ise sab  failane wali hawa ka jhonka ho tum

Maana k sabse yahan haseen hun main
Par mujhe haseen banana wale ho tum

Yahan main sabke dil me rehne lagi hun
Par mujhe iss pariwaar me lane wale ho tum…

Kuch pal ko kho diya tha maine apna wajud
Mujhe aaj khudse milane wale ho tum

Mujhe fir se *ANU* banane wale ho tum……!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 11:19:01 AM »
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Kya tariff karein aapki jadugar ho.. Applause Clapping Smiley
kya kya nahi ban sakte ho tum.... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Hawa...lahu..leher..syaahi..... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
Kisi k liye shayadf jeevan ho tum....
Hamaare liye tou mast kavi ho tum.... read2 read2 read2
Hum aapke shrota hai...sarota nahi.. Giggle Giggle Giggle

Quote from: klaskar on August 17, 2010, 02:07:19 PM

main hawaa banke tum sang aaj beh jaunga,
lahu banke tumhaare dil me main reh jaunga,
mehek me tumhaari main yun khoya hoon aaj,
tumhaari khushboo se khud ko mehka jaunga,

dil me hai dhadkan aur dhadkan me tum,
saanso me khushboo hai, khushboo ho tum,
jaane ye kaisa hai rishta hamaara,
tum se hi main hoon aur mujhse ho tum,

paake tumhe paaya maine saara jahaan,
tumse haseen ab kuch main paaun kahaan,
jaane na dunga tumhe mujhse main dur,
chhodke tumhe main ab jaaun kahaan,

saagar hai dil mera, lehren ho tum,
phool hoon main agar to titli ho tum,
tumse si rishta hai, tumse se hi sab kuch,
zinda hoon main agar to jeewan ho tum,

saanse bhi tum ho, meri dhadkan bhi tum,
aansoo bhi tum ho, meri muskaan bhi tum,
syaahi hoon main agar to kalam ho tum,
ghazal hoon main agar to ehsaas ho tum...


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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2010, 11:27:09 AM »
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kapil ji sabse pehle to daad kubool kijiye....bahut achha likha he~
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2010, 01:04:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji... aapke to taarif karne ka andaaz hi niraala hai... mazaa aa jaata hai aapke comments padhke... bas padh ke yhaan hum muskuraa dete hain... thanx a lot  hai ji...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 18, 2010, 11:19:01 AM
Kya tariff karein aapki jadugar ho.. Applause Clapping Smiley
kya kya nahi ban sakte ho tum.... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Hawa...lahu..leher..syaahi..... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
Kisi k liye shayadf jeevan ho tum....
Hamaare liye tou mast kavi ho tum.... read2 read2 read2
Hum aapke shrota hai...sarota nahi.. Giggle Giggle Giggle

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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 01:04:51 PM »
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aapki daad humne dil se qubool ki... shukriya Abhi ji...!!!

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 18, 2010, 11:27:09 AM
kapil ji sabse pehle to daad kubool kijiye....bahut achha likha he~
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 01:15:40 PM »
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shukriya Kasak ji... bahut bahut shukriya....jawaab bhi kya khoob likha hai apne... waah ... maaan gaye apko.... bahut pyara jawaab likha hai aapne.... ek ek shabd me pyaar bharaa hai.... bahut hi pyaari kavita hai... mujhe dher saara taarif karne ka mann kar rahaa hai par kya likhu samajh nahi aa raha hai isiliye shayad repeat hi kar raha hoon... bahut bahut khoob likha hai... sach me dil ko chhoo gayi apki ye kavita... yunhi mera saath dete rahiye... aapka likha padh padh ke hi kuch kuch likhne ki koshish karta hoon... thanx a lot...!!!

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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 18, 2010, 10:35:16 AM
bht hi khubsurat poem hai klaskar ji aapki aur ise dekh kar padh kar likhe bina raha nahin gaya....aapko kaha tha mushkil hai par......

Lehron me uthti hulchal hun main
Use sametne wale saahil ho tum

Geeton me sajte sur hun main
Unhe gungunate gaayak ho tum

Bikhri hui thandi sheetal chandni hun main
Par mujhe failane wale chaand ho tum

Phoolon ki khushbu haan  hum main
Par ise sab  failane wali hawa ka jhonka ho tum

Maana k sabse yahan haseen hun main
Par mujhe haseen banana wale ho tum

Yahan main sabke dil me rehne lagi hun
Par mujhe iss pariwaar me lane wale ho tum…

Kuch pal ko kho diya tha maine apna wajud
Mujhe aaj khudse milane wale ho tum

Mujhe fir se *ANU* banane wale ho tum……!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 01:19:15 PM »
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Kasak ji is naacheez ki ek koshish aapke kavita ke jawaab me... maloom hai achchi nahi hai par likha hai aapke liye post to karna hi padega... padhke batana jarur aap ki kaisi lagi...!!!


apni maasoomiyat se keh jaati ho,
ki sab kuch hoon main tumhaare liye,
tum kya jaano kya ho tum,
kya hai tumhaari ehmiyat mere liye,

baarish ki pehli boond se poochho,
kya hai uski pyaas zameen ke liye,
suraj ki pehli kiran se poochho,
kya hai uski chaah roshni ke liye,

lehren ho tum, to saahil se poochho,
kya hai uski tadap lehron ke liye,
phoolon se mehekti khoosboo se poochho,
kya hai chaahat uski hawaa ke liye,

kudrat ka koi karishma ho tum,
usne sajaaya hoga tumhe apne liye,
kisi gaayak ki koi ghazal ho tum,
usne gaaya hoga tumhe apne liye,

aake ek baar zaraa mujhse poochho,
kya ho tum is nacheez ke liye,
kahunga tumse dil pe haath rakh ke,
jaan ho tum, jarurat hai tumhaari jeene ke liye...
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 01:37:21 PM »
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klaskar ji....... icon_salut

ab tareef se upar ki baat hai ye to
no words for this one.....  notworthy

its just awesome...... icon_thumleft

kuch bhi likhun kum hoga ab tareef me......one of ur best poem......

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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 01:44:18 PM »
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Thank you so much Kasak ji... aapne bina kahe hi bahut kuch keh diya... main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon... thanx a lot...!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2010, 08:23:01 AM »
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Aik jazbaat se bhari purkaif poetry se nawaaza hai Janab klaskar ji aapne. Achchha hi nahiN bahut achchha laga paRhkar. Daad qubul kijiye.

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Quote from: klaskar on August 17, 2010, 02:07:19 PM

main hawaa banke tum sang aaj beh jaunga,
lahu banke tumhaare dil me main reh jaunga,
mehek me tumhaari main yun khoya hoon aaj,
tumhaari khushboo se khud ko mehka jaunga,

dil me hai dhadkan aur dhadkan me tum,
saanso me khushboo hai, khushboo ho tum,
jaane ye kaisa hai rishta hamaara,
tum se hi main hoon aur mujhse ho tum,

paake tumhe paaya maine saara jahaan,
tumse haseen ab kuch main paaun kahaan,
jaane na dunga tumhe mujhse main dur,
chhodke tumhe main ab jaaun kahaan,

saagar hai dil mera, lehren ho tum,
phool hoon main agar to titli ho tum,
tumse si rishta hai, tumse se hi sab kuch,
zinda hoon main agar to jeewan ho tum,

saanse bhi tum ho, meri dhadkan bhi tum,
aansoo bhi tum ho, meri muskaan bhi tum,
syaahi hoon main agar to kalam ho tum,
ghazal hoon main agar to ehsaas ho tum...


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«Reply #13 on: August 19, 2010, 11:48:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Waquif ji...maine aapki daad dil se qubool ki...!!!

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Aik jazbaat se bhari purkaif poetry se nawaaza hai Janab klaskar ji aapne. Achchha hi nahiN bahut achchha laga paRhkar. Daad qubul kijiye.

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