"jeny ki surat"

by fayaz deshi on December 09, 2009, 06:21:17 PM
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Ab or jeny ki surat nazar nahe aati
Kisi taraf sy bhe achi khabar nahe aati

Usi ky aas mein hai dil ka hujra tareek
Wo roshni jo kabhe mery ghar nahe aati

Wo meherban hai to mehrab-e-bam tak
Wo dhoop kyun wapis deewar-o-darr nahe aati

Rah-e-hayat mein ab koi aysa moud nahe
Ky jis ky baad teri rehguzar nahe aati

Qabooliat ki hai saat to usko mang he ley
Ky ye ghadi kabhe bar bar nahe aati

Saray-e-khana duniya mein sham hoti hai
Musafiron ko naveed safar nahe aati

Duniya ko to hallat sy umeed badi thi
Per chahny walo ko judai ki padi thi

Kis jaan-e-gulsitan sy ye milny ki ghadi thi
Kushboo mein nahai hoi aik sham khadi thi

Main us sy mili thi k apny aap sy mili thi
Wo jesy meri zaat ki gumshuda kadi thi

Yun dekhna us ko ky koi or na dekhy
Inam to acha tha magar shart kadi th
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2009, 08:39:51 PM »
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Good one Fayaz Ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2009, 03:40:35 AM »
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Bahut khoob Faiyaz ji n Shihab ji,wonderful gazal,faiyaz ji last 2 lines mujhe bahut achi lagi.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2009, 07:54:04 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2009, 09:52:29 AM »
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Bahut khoob Faiyaz Bhai bahut hi umda likha hai  And Shihab Bhai Aapka Response bhi bahut hi sundar hai 
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