Jheel Ho, Aankhein Hon ya Gahara Samandar.......!

by sharmaarunkumar on November 08, 2004, 08:10:41 PM
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Yoon to Haseenon se Daaman ko bachaana Chahiye!
Thodi si agar Baarish ho To Bheeg jaana Chahiye!

Jheel Ho, Aankhein Hon ya Gahara Samandar Jo Mile,
Doobne mein hi faydaa hai, Doob Jaana Chahiye!


(NM)
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2004, 08:22:26 PM »
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WAH!!!!! Kaya baat hai AKS JI!!! Bahoot Khoob!!!!
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immi
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2004, 08:27:05 PM »
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Very nice !!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2004, 08:27:09 PM »
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Shukriya ji Pooja ji!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2004, 08:27:39 PM »
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Thanx Immi ji!
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2004, 10:49:24 AM »
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Quote from: "sharmaarunkumar"
Yoon to Haseenon se Daaman ko bachaana Chahiye!
Thodi si agar Baarish ho To Bheeg jaana Chahiye!

Jheel Ho, Aankhein Hon ya Gahara Samandar Jo Mile,
Doobne mein hi faydaa hai, Doob Jaana Chahiye!


(NM)


dear friend how are u bouhat qoob ap ne mere dil ko jit liya
nice shayr
 m:ail **fardeen**
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: November 09, 2004, 03:55:25 PM »
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Wah! wah! Arunji...

Throri si baarish main bheegto ho theek hai
par ek chingaari hi badi aag lagati hai,
ye yaad rakhna chahiye !!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: November 09, 2004, 04:20:49 PM »
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bahoot sahi likha Talat ji!!!


Rimjhim si boondo se bach kar rahna
yah chingari na kahi jala de
ishaq ki chinagari se bach kar rahna
yah kahi agg na laga de!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: November 09, 2004, 06:06:01 PM »
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wah wah Pooja..

Ishq ki chingari ko mamooli na jaano
Bade bade aashiqon ko isne jalaya hai
Rimjhim phuharon main bheegna na tum
In phuharon ne aksar sailab laaya hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: November 09, 2004, 06:53:04 PM »
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wah Talat bahoot khoob!!!!
Rimjhim boonde kab salab ban jai kise khabar
yah chingari bharak kar, kab aag ban jai, kise khabar!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: November 09, 2004, 07:14:26 PM »
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Thanks Pooja happy9 and very nice!!!
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nishita
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«Reply #11 on: November 10, 2004, 09:47:50 AM »
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wah talat n pooja...

Aye shama itna mat sata iss parwane ko,
aisa na ho ki parwana tujhe jala dale. (NM)
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«Reply #12 on: November 10, 2004, 10:07:59 AM »
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tongue3  :lol: Very Nice Talat ji N Pooja ji N Nishita ji!!!!! Bahut Khoob!!
Very Nice!!! Excellent!!!Waah!!! :lol:  tongue3
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«Reply #13 on: November 10, 2004, 10:12:10 AM »
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wah talat n pooja...

Aye shama itna mat sata iss parwane ko,
aisa na ho ki parwana tujhe jala dale. (NM)



Very Nice Nishita ji!!

Raat Idhar se Jaati Hai Sooraj Udhar se aata hai!
Shamma aur parwane mein Fark itna rah jaata hai!
Ek Jal Kar Bhujh Jaati Hai, Ek Boojh Kar Jal Jaata hai!



(Boojh kar : Jaan boojh kar}
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«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2004, 10:15:03 AM »
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wah talat n pooja...

Aye shama itna mat sata iss parwane ko,
aisa na ho ki parwana tujhe jala dale. (NM)



Very Nice Nishita ji!!

Raat Idhar se Jaati Hai Sooraj Udhar se aata hai!
Shamma aur parwane mein Fark itna rah jaata hai!
Ek Jal Kar Bhujh Jaati Hai, Ek Boojh Kar Jal Jaata hai!



(Boojh kar : Jaan boojh kar}


wah bohat khoob

hum ne ki arz aye bandaparver  
kyo sitam dhaa rahey ho Parwane par
baat sun ker hamaari woh boley
Keh do parwano se
Shamma se takraar karna mana hai  :wink:
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