Jigar ki gahraiyon mein !

by abdbundeli on May 19, 2008, 02:13:47 PM
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Jigar ki gahraiyon mein, YOON UTAR AATEY HAIN LOG :
Moond lo aankheyn, magar, fir bhi nazar aatey hain log!
Jagtey hain, magar fir bhi deykhtey hain khwaab ham;
Zindgee bhar, ba'ad is ke, bahut tarhpaatey hain log!!

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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2008, 01:11:26 PM »
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VERY NICE VERY GOOD "ABDBUNELI"

WAHI LOG JIGAR KI GAHERAIYON MEIN JATE HAI
JO HUMARE KAREEB HOTE HAI
JO HUMARE NASEEB HOTE HAI
WAHI HUMARE JIGAR KI GAHERAIYON MEIN SAMA JATE HAI
JINHE HUM BHULA NA PATE HAI
HAR JAGHA UNHE HI PATE HAI
JO HUMARE JIGAR KI GAHERAIYON MEIN HOTE HAI ..........

******************************MUSKAN*****************************
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2009, 06:48:51 AM »
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Quote from: muskan_bye on May 20, 2008, 01:11:26 PM
VERY NICE VERY GOOD "ABDBUNELI"

WAHI LOG JIGAR KI GAHERAIYON MEIN JATE HAI
JO HUMARE KAREEB HOTE HAI
JO HUMARE NASEEB HOTE HAI
WAHI HUMARE JIGAR KI GAHERAIYON MEIN SAMA JATE HAI
JINHE HUM BHULA NA PATE HAI
HAR JAGHA UNHE HI PATE HAI
JO HUMARE JIGAR KI GAHERAIYON MEIN HOTE HAI ..........

******************************MUSKAN*****************************

Thanks a lot MUSKAN ji!

Hamain patah na chalaa, ki, kab,
Miley nain sey nain!
Kaisey yeh kyaa ho gayaa;
Ham hain yuun bey-chain?

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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2009, 06:50:49 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 19, 2008, 02:13:47 PM
Jigar ki gahraiyon mein, YOON UTAR AATEY HAIN LOG :
Moond lo aankheyn, magar, fir bhi nazar aatey hain log!
Jagtey hain, magar fir bhi deykhtey hain khwaab ham;
Zindgee bhar, ba'ad is ke, bahut tarhpaatey hain log!!

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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sahebji..Bahut ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2009, 06:53:23 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 24, 2009, 06:50:49 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Sahebji..Bahut ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, khwaish ji!
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2009, 08:05:32 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Abdbundeli Sahab... Aapki Qalam Ka Jawab Nahi.. bahut Hi Umda Likha hai.. Applause Applause

And Muskaan Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Bhi...!! Applause


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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2009, 12:31:10 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on April 24, 2009, 08:05:32 AM
Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Abdbundeli Sahab... Aapki Qalam Ka Jawab Nahi.. bahut Hi Umda Likha hai.. Applause Applause

And Muskaan Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Bhi...!! Applause

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Thanks Maan ji!
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2009, 03:43:02 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 19, 2008, 02:13:47 PM
Jigar ki gahraiyon mein, YOON UTAR AATEY HAIN LOG :
Moond lo aankheyn, magar, fir bhi nazar aatey hain log!
Jagtey hain, magar fir bhi deykhtey hain khwaab ham;
Zindgee bhar, ba'ad is ke, bahut tarhpaatey hain log!!

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Wah wah uncleji bahut umda likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2009, 05:32:32 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 27, 2009, 03:43:02 PM
Wah wah uncleji bahut umda likha hai aapne..
Thanks Roja! I'm happy it pleased you!
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2009, 05:38:39 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 19, 2008, 02:13:47 PM
Jigar ki gahraiyon mein, YOON UTAR AATEY HAIN LOG :
Moond lo aankheyn, magar, fir bhi nazar aatey hain log!
Jagtey hain, magar fir bhi deykhtey hain khwaab ham;
Zindgee bhar, ba'ad is ke, bahut tarhpaatey hain log!!

                                      - abd bundeli

wah wah wah kaya baat hai ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hui hai Abd ji!! bahoot khoob
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2009, 05:42:08 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 05:38:39 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hui hai Abd ji!! bahoot khoob

Pooja ji! Mujhey khushee hai aapko yeh qatah pasand aayaa! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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