<>*JII chahta hai*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 19, 2010, 07:42:57 AM
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<>*JII chahta hai*<>

Aaj karna chaho to kar lo hame ji bhar ke pyar,
Tumhare hunar ko azmane ko ji chahta hai.

Kas sako to kas lo hame bazuon me apne,
Tumhari bahon mein sama jane ko ji chahta hai.

Maangna chaho to maanglo hamari jaan aaj,
Tum par mar mitne ko ji chahta hai.

Kar sako to karlo kaid hame apni ankho mein,
Gahre sagar mein dub jane ko ji chahta hai,

Ruthna chaho to ruth jao aaj hamse,
Baar baar tumhe manane ko ji chahta hai.

Tamanna karna hi chahte ho to hamari karo,
Tumhari duaon mein samane ko ji chahta hai.

Ye sham jab bhi aye hamare jivan mein,
Use jivan ki aakhiri shaam banane ko ji chahta hai.
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2010, 07:48:39 AM »
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<>*JII chahta hai*<>

Aaj karna chaho to kar lo hame ji bhar ke pyar,
Tumhare hunar ko azmane ko ji chahta hai.

Kas sako to kas lo hame bazuon me apne,
Tumhari bahon mein sama jane ko ji chahta hai.

Maangna chaho to maanglo hamari jaan aaj,
Tum par mar mitne ko ji chahta hai.

Kar sako to karlo kaid hame apni ankho mein,
Gahre sagar mein dub jane ko ji chahta hai,

Ruthna chaho to ruth jao aaj hamse,
Baar baar tumhe manane ko ji chahta hai.

Tamanna karna hi chahte ho to hamari karo,
Tumhari duaon mein samane ko ji chahta hai.

Ye sham jab bhi aye hamare jivan mein,
Use jivan ki aakhiri shaam banane ko ji chahta hai.
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Anamika Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2010, 10:08:40 AM »
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Wah wah wah Kasak Ji. Bahut achchhi tehreer. Aapki tehreer se mutaaccir ho kar ye sher kah raha hooN:

Tire paas aane ko ji chaahta hai
Muhabbat jataane ko ji chaahta hai

(Waquif Ansari)

<>*JII chahta hai*<>

Aaj karna chaho to kar lo hame ji bhar ke pyar,
Tumhare hunar ko azmane ko ji chahta hai.

Kas sako to kas lo hame bazuon me apne,
Tumhari bahon mein sama jane ko ji chahta hai.

Maangna chaho to maanglo hamari jaan aaj,
Tum par mar mitne ko ji chahta hai.

Kar sako to karlo kaid hame apni ankho mein,
Gahre sagar mein dub jane ko ji chahta hai,

Ruthna chaho to ruth jao aaj hamse,
Baar baar tumhe manane ko ji chahta hai.

Tamanna karna hi chahte ho to hamari karo,
Tumhari duaon mein samane ko ji chahta hai.

Ye sham jab bhi aye hamare jivan mein,
Use jivan ki aakhiri shaam banane ko ji chahta hai.
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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2010, 10:27:05 AM »
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shukriya waquif ji and khwaish ji aapne ise pasand kiya
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«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2010, 12:33:02 PM »
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Wah kya kahne Kasak ji. Bebaki se likhi hui ye rachna achhi lagi.
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«Reply #5 on: July 19, 2010, 09:20:10 PM »
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Bahut hi behetareen kavita hai kasak ji bahut khoob...khaas kar k ye do lines bahut badhiya hai...

Ruthna chaho to ruth jao aaj hamse,
Baar baar tumhe manane ko ji chahta hai.
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«Reply #6 on: July 20, 2010, 02:36:56 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Waah Kasak ji waah... kya khoob likha hai... jaadu hai aapke in shabdon me... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 20, 2010, 06:04:32 AM »
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<>*JII chahta hai*<>

Aaj karna chaho to kar lo hame ji bhar ke pyar,
Tumhare hunar ko azmane ko ji chahta hai.

Kas sako to kas lo hame bazuon me apne,
Tumhari bahon mein sama jane ko ji chahta hai.

Maangna chaho to maanglo hamari jaan aaj,
Tum par mar mitne ko ji chahta hai.

Kar sako to karlo kaid hame apni ankho mein,
Gahre sagar mein dub jane ko ji chahta hai,

Ruthna chaho to ruth jao aaj hamse,
Baar baar tumhe manane ko ji chahta hai.

Tamanna karna hi chahte ho to hamari karo,
Tumhari duaon mein samane ko ji chahta hai.

Ye sham jab bhi aye hamare jivan mein,
Use jivan ki aakhiri shaam banane ko ji chahta hai.
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Very Impressive creation....kasak JI......dil se daad !
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«Reply #8 on: July 20, 2010, 02:58:48 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Anamika Ji.. ek ek Lafz Mohabbat ke Sath kaagaz Par utaara Hai aapne.. Bahut Pyaari hai Aapki Yeh Rachna.. Applause Applause



Apne Haathon Ki Laqeeron Me Tera Naam Saja Kar,
Har Lamha Ishq Me Tere Lut Jane Ko Jee Chaahta Hai...

Baahon Me Qait Karke, Tujhe Aankhon Me Basa Kar,
Bassssss..!! Apna Hi Bana Jaane Ko Jee Chaahta Hai....!!




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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2010, 04:55:06 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Anamika Ji.. ek ek Lafz Mohabbat ke Sath kaagaz Par utaara Hai aapne.. Bahut Pyaari hai Aapki Yeh Rachna.. Applause Applause



Apne Haathon Ki Laqeeron Me Tera Naam Saja Kar,
Har Lamha Ishq Me Tere Lut Jane Ko Jee Chaahta Hai...

Baahon Me Qait Karke, Tujhe Aankhon Me Basa Kar,
Bassssss..!! Apna Hi Bana Jaane Ko Jee Chaahta Hai....!!




**~** Mann **~**

shukriya Mann ji meri kavita ko pasand karne k liye.... aapki 4 lines dil ko chhu gai ji...
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«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2010, 05:10:20 PM »
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wah wah wah, kasak ji, wah... bahut bahut hi khoob, really wonderful

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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2010, 10:01:41 AM »
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<>*JII chahta hai*<>

Aaj karna chaho to kar lo hame ji bhar ke pyar,
Tumhare hunar ko azmane ko ji chahta hai.

Kas sako to kas lo hame bazuon me apne,
Tumhari bahon mein sama jane ko ji chahta hai.

Maangna chaho to maanglo hamari jaan aaj,
Tum par mar mitne ko ji chahta hai.

Kar sako to karlo kaid hame apni ankho mein,
Gahre sagar mein dub jane ko ji chahta hai,

Ruthna chaho to ruth jao aaj hamse,
Baar baar tumhe manane ko ji chahta hai.

Tamanna karna hi chahte ho to hamari karo,
Tumhari duaon mein samane ko ji chahta hai.

Ye sham jab bhi aye hamare jivan mein,
Use jivan ki aakhiri shaam banane ko ji chahta hai.
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Good one Anamika Ji
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