!jindagi ki kitaab!

by ranjana on June 07, 2006, 09:05:37 AM
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jindagi ki kitaab mein hamne kuch ruswiyaan rakh di
jo nahi puri ho sakati thee woh kahaaniya likh di
 
kabhi milagi tanahi , toh fursat se tumhe sunayange,
phoolo ke shouk mein hamne kaanto per rubiyaan likh di

 bana sakte ho toh bana lo mere haatho mein apni lakeere.n
lo aaj hamne tumhre samane apni haathliyaan rakh di

udas tanha raato ka safar kata hai hamne saye ke saath
aaj hamne aapke saamne wahi parchhiyaan rakh di

 jindagi ki raha le jaaye na jaane kahan........
aa sako mujh tak isliye hamne rahoo.n  per kuch nishaniyaan rakh di.
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2006, 09:16:41 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Ranjana ji .....  Usual Smile

agar teesra sher kuch yun hota to:

"Bna lo mere hathooN mein apne naam ki lakireiN
Aap ke samne humne apni hatheliyaaN rakh di "

it looks more nice now ....  gustakhi ke liye muafi chahunga ....  Usual Smile



Kitaab-e-zindgi ka jab ik safha utha kar dekha
Apni ruuh ko teri ruuh se humne mila kar dekha

Yaad aaye bethey zamanooN le hazaroN afsane
Har ik alfaaz ko jab phir  humne dohra kar dekha

Puri si lagne lagi jo adhuri thi kab se bikhri hui
Jab tera naam iss kitab mein humne mila kar dekha !!!



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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2006, 09:20:58 AM »
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Bna lo mere hathooN mein apne naam ki lakireiN
Aap ke samne humne apni hatheliyaaN rakh di "

shukriya Hum tum ji  bahut hi accha laga yeh.............thanks...

aapki likhi lines bahut pasand aayi............bahut khub...........
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2006, 09:27:30 AM »
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woh meri nazaro mein basa hai is kadar
ki ab kisi aur ka en nighao.n mein basar nahi hota

mil jata hai mere dil ko sakun .......
uske khawabo ke siva ab meri neend mein kisi ka dakhal nahi hota

milne lage hain ab uske lafajo  se mere lafaj kuch aise
ki meri nazmo ka silsila uske shabado ke bina pura nahi hota
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2006, 09:48:11 AM »
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Bahot Achche Ranjana ji ....  Usual Smile


Har rang meri chahatooN ka khilne lga hai
woh aaj kal be-parda hum se milne lga hai

diye lahooN jal uthey ishq ki raahooN mein
uski roshini mein har lamha guzarne lga hai

mehkne lagi hai saansien uski meri kushbu se
uska jism meri bahooN mein piglane lga hai !!
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2006, 09:54:40 AM »
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Ranju and HumTum

Wah ! wah ! wah !

Superb !

HumTum

Dekhna kuch jyada na jism pighal jaye bahoon mein... :D
Phir kuch nahin rahna bahoon mein  :wink:
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2006, 10:03:31 AM »
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mere jismo-jaan ab teri bahaan mein pighalne laga
haan sach hai yeh ki mera dil bhi tujhi per marne  laga

kuch thi teri baato ki kashish ,kuch thaa masom ka asar
mera husan bhi ab teri saanso mein mehkane laga........

dur ho gaye sab andhare meri jindagi  ki raaho ke
jab se tu mere saath ujala ban ke chalne laga.......

parda karte bhi toh kis se karte hum sanam
ki ab toh meri mohabbat se khuda bhi  payar karne laga
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2006, 10:04:06 AM »
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jindagi ki kitaab mein hamne kuch ruswiyaan rakh di
jo nahi puri ho sakati thee woh kahaaniya likh di
 
kabhi milagi tanahi , toh fursat se tumhe sunayange,
phoolo ke shouk mein hamne kaanto per rubiyaan likh di

 bana sakte ho toh bana lo mere haatho mein apni lakeere.n
lo aaj hamne tumhre samane apni haathliyaan rakh di

udas tanha raato ka safar kata hai hamne saye ke saath
aaj hamne aapke saamne wahi parchhiyaan rakh di

 jindagi ki raha le jaaye na jaane kahan........
aa sako mujh tak isliye hamne rahoo.n  per kuch nishaniyaan rakh di.


simply gr8 Rajana ji...bahut hi acha likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2006, 10:05:32 AM »
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dhanyewaad Rajbir ji....................... :oops:  :D
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2006, 10:07:54 AM »
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shukriya Nikki ........  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2006, 10:15:40 AM »
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sadke jaon Humtum ji...kya likha hai aapne....

zindagi ki kitaab ke kuch panne khali the
uspe humne mohabbat likh diya hai

khud ki halat bayan kiya karte the kabhi iss kitaab mein
abb to har panne pe uska naam likh diya hai
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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2006, 10:18:12 AM »
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Wah buddy !

Aate he chaa gaye  :D
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2006, 10:21:06 AM »
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Shukriya ranjbir veer ji and  Ranjana ji .. bahut khoob ... Usual Smile  ....  Nikki ji ... sadak lo ... bhaut khoob !!


Kitaab ke har safhe pe tera naam likh diya
Hai pyar tum se dilbhar yeh paigam likh diya
khi batien thi jo ankhai mere dil mein kab se
un batoooN ko sanam aaj sar-e-aam likh diya !!
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2006, 10:26:56 AM »
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sadke jaon Humtum ji...kya likha hai aapne....

zindagi ki kitaab ke kuch panne khali the
uspe humne mohabbat likh diya hai

khud ki halat bayan kiya karte the kabhi iss kitaab mein
abb to har panne pe uska naam likh diya hai


Wah !!!! superb.........bahut hi accha ...........

uska naam mohabbat ki kitab mein likhti hun muskarti hun
us kitaab ki har line mein ab naam uska hi paati hun......

uske payar ki sayahi bikhri hai har panne mein
uske lafajo mein ab main akas apna  hi paati hun............
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«Reply #14 on: June 07, 2006, 10:34:37 AM »
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sadak liya....too good again Humtum ji n Ranjana ji...

bhari mehfil mein woh mujhse izhaar-e-pyar kar gaya
main kitabon ke panne ulat_tii reh gayi
woh meri kismat badal gaya
nahi jaanti yeh sab kaya
dil ki lagi hai..ya rab ka likha hai
khair jo bhi ho....woh hamare dil mein utarne laga hai
mujhe ...mujh hi se door karne laga hai
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