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«Reply #15 on: June 07, 2006, 10:36:33 AM » |
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bahut khub humtum ji.
jab dil ki baat kitaab ke panno per utaar di
hamne apni har baat sanam ke kaano mein daal di
na keh skate they jo ta-umar hum unse........
meri wah halat mere likhe lafajo ne bayaan kar di............
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«Reply #16 on: June 07, 2006, 10:40:11 AM » |
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bahut khub Nikki ........beautiful.........
hum jab se unke dil mein rehne lage hain
mere shabad kuch bejuban hone lage hain
padte hain woh mujhko ek kitaab ki tarah
hum unki aankho mein lafaj ban ke gum hone lage hain
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«Reply #17 on: June 07, 2006, 10:44:07 AM » |
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waah waah bahoot khoob Ranjana ji and Nikki ji .... ahccha kiya sadak liya !!!
Dil ki kitaab pe naam tera likh liya hai
Har lamha teri ashiqi mein jee liya hai
Ab to jo rab ko hoga manzoor wahi hoga
Humne to sara jevan tere naam kiya hai !!
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«Reply #18 on: June 07, 2006, 10:45:57 AM » |
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gr8 Ranjana ji...i must say aap bhut hi acha likhti ho...really.
apne dil ki baat mere dil pe likh kar batate hain woh
main poochti rehti hun, magar keh nahi paate hain woh
lakh kasmein do..to honth unke khulte hain
jab sunti hun yeh ki woh mere liye khoaab bunte hain
to hosh mere udd jaate hain
zindagi ki kitaab ke panne palati rehti hun
magar lafz gum ho jaate hain
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«Reply #19 on: June 07, 2006, 10:54:08 AM » |
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kya baat hai ji kya baaty dono cha gaye ..... meri Manager aa gyiii ... lekin ik sher likh ke hi jata hoon !!
Ishq ka unke mujh par hua hai kucch aisa asar
Na apna hi pta hai mujhe na duniya ki kabar
woh hi nazar aati hai har shuu har jagaah ab to
uske bina zindgi ka suna sa hai sara safar
Aaj jaye woh bahooN mein usse yeh iltejaah hai
Bna le ab muh ko woh apna humsafar !!
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«Reply #20 on: June 07, 2006, 10:59:38 AM » |
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kya baat hai.....aaj to mausam kuch badla-2 sa hai...har koi madhosh hai..hehe
sabr ka mere imtihaan na lo
main udasiyon ke andheron se nikal aayi hun
zara haath to thaam lo
chalna hai abb iss rah pe bankar humsafar
magar abhi to kahani shuru huyi hai
bahut lamba hai safar
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«Reply #21 on: June 07, 2006, 11:01:03 AM » |
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khub hum tum ji...........
ham bhi dam ab teri mohabbat ka bharte hain
apni jindagi ki kitaab ka har lafaj tere naam ab karte hain
na mitana ab mera naam inke panno se tum mera
hum toh ab bas tere liye hi jeete hain aur tere liye hi marte hain
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«Reply #22 on: June 07, 2006, 11:09:19 AM » |
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great Nikki jaan bahut khub..............
yeh hai mohabbat ka safar udasi baat mat karo
iske rango mein gum ho jaao jaane ki baat mat karo
karni hai abhi kai baate tumse.............
thaam lo mera haath abhi aur aage chalo........ :D
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«Reply #23 on: June 07, 2006, 11:10:17 AM » |
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wowww too good Ranjana ji....
kissi ko apni kismat banaya hai humne
uska naam hi apne haathon ki lakeeron mein likhwaya hai humne
koi mitana chahe bhi to nahi mit payega
apne lahoo se likhwaya hai humne
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«Reply #24 on: June 07, 2006, 11:19:19 AM » |
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nice Nikki..............
aaj hamne khuda se tumko maang liya hai
aaj fir se hamne ek bagawat ka kaam kiya hai
likha nahi thaa naam usne mera tere haato ki lakeero mein
hamne woh naam aaj teri hathali apne lahu se likh diya hai
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«Reply #25 on: June 07, 2006, 05:05:50 PM » |
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too good Ranjana ji...
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«Reply #26 on: June 07, 2006, 05:26:38 PM » |
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good work, keep it up..
socha to tha unse, baat main karungi
ankhain band kar ke, seene se lagungi
jab mili main achanak, to baat ko he bhul gye
seene ki baat chod, unke naam ko hi bhul gye
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«Reply #27 on: June 07, 2006, 05:51:40 PM » |
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wah humtum wah... bahut khoob and ranjana sizzling... jis kitaab pe tera naam likh diya woh kalam main hi tha jis lamhe mein jee rahi thi woh alam main hi tha rab toh manzoor ki hain sadiyon ke peeche isliye janme hum is asmaan ke neeche... waah waah bahoot khoob Ranjana ji and Nikki ji .... ahccha kiya sadak liya !!!
Dil ki kitaab pe naam tera likh liya hai
Har lamha teri ashiqi mein jee liya hai
Ab to jo rab ko hoga manzoor wahi hoga
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«Reply #28 on: June 08, 2006, 03:26:22 AM » |
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shukriya Nikki bahut khub STRANGE JI.......  Shukriya manjoo bahut khub.......... |
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«Reply #29 on: June 08, 2006, 03:38:49 AM » |
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aaj kuch lafaj teri mohabbat ke mere dil mein uttar gye
mere jismo jaan tere hi payar ke rang mein nikhar gye
mere dil mein thee tujhko paane ki chahat...........
tere dil mein bhi they mere liye kuch payar ke armaan
yeh dekh kar duniya walo ke dil na jaane kyu jal gye
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