jindagi ko dekh jaty dur se

by Rahi2001 on July 10, 2010, 05:45:22 AM
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jindagi ko dekh jaty dur khud se
hamen to jine ki tammanna na rahiiiiii

mar mar ke bahut ham jite rahe
saja jine ki hamne hans kar sahiiiiiiiii

kya bataen kisi ko haal apna
hamne to jindagi ko khoya hai
har din ek hi gam tha mujhe
har pal ek hi yaad rahiiiiiiiiii

kitne tukde hue hai is dil ke
jinhen jod kar maine saheja hai
kisi ki yaad me duba hai har pal mera
magar us katil ne ek uff na kahiiiiiiiiiiiii

tadpata raha mai kabhi jiske liye
wo aaj mujhse dur hokar bhi khush hai
khuda kare rahe barkarar uski ye khushi
har gam mile mujhe , use mile har khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

mai to "Rahi" hnu chalna hi mera kaam hai
jis din ruk jaonga mout mera hi naam hai
na thakunga mai gamon ko jhel kar
na hansunga na rounga mai kabhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

na jane haal ye kaisa kisi ne mera bana diya
ek insaan ko rasty ka patthar bana diya
jo aata hai wahi ek thokar laga deta hai
koi aayega ek din mandir me poojega kahinnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2010, 07:45:51 AM »
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jindagi ko dekh jaty dur khud se
hamen to jine ki tammanna na rahiiiiii

mar mar ke bahut ham jite rahe
saja jine ki hamne hans kar sahiiiiiiiii

kya bataen kisi ko haal apna
hamne to jindagi ko khoya hai
har din ek hi gam tha mujhe
har pal ek hi yaad rahiiiiiiiiii

kitne tukde hue hai is dil ke
jinhen jod kar maine saheja hai
kisi ki yaad me duba hai har pal mera
magar us katil ne ek uff na kahiiiiiiiiiiiii

tadpata raha mai kabhi jiske liye
wo aaj mujhse dur hokar bhi khush hai
khuda kare rahe barkarar uski ye khushi
har gam mile mujhe , use mile har khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

mai to "Rahi" hnu chalna hi mera kaam hai
jis din ruk jaonga mout mera hi naam hai
na thakunga mai gamon ko jhel kar
na hansunga na rounga mai kabhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

na jane haal ye kaisa kisi ne mera bana diya
ek insaan ko rasty ka patthar bana diya
jo aata hai wahi ek thokar laga deta hai
koi aayega ek din mandir me poojega kahinnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Nazm ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe....Rahi JI....dil se daad hazir hai...yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2010, 06:21:46 PM »
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hmm achchi nazm hai dard se bhari hui.....
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