Jine ki nayi umeed...

by brokenbyluv on August 28, 2010, 11:23:52 AM
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Terri duao ka asar merri duao mein rang laya hai,
tabhi maine tujhe itni mushkilo k baad paya hai,

maine aaj tak tujhse koi waada nhi kiya,
phir bhi maine wafa k har farz ko nibhaya hai,

terri chahto ko hamesha mehfuz rakha maine apne dil mein,
terra dard baatne k liye maine din ka chain aur raat ka sukoon gawaya hai,

har rishte mein maine sirrf mhbt hi chahhi thi,
tune di mujhe bepanah mhbt warna apno ne bhi mujhe bahut sataya hai,

dhadkane ho zindgi ho ya ho kuch hasin pal,
tu merre liye jine ki nayi ummed banke aaya hai,

dekhne mein kisi ko dikhta tou nhi hai..
per merre ajnabi merre chaaro taraf sirrf terri hi chahto ka saaya hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2010, 11:26:56 AM »
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mind blowing poem geet ji........beautiful feelings wid words.....

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kisi aise shakhs k liye likhne ka maza hi aur hai yaar....

i love this poem..will b in my collection ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2010, 11:31:45 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji...maine kuch changes kiya hai plzz look forward to them..shukriya ek baar phir...Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2010, 11:38:45 AM »
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Awesome geet di....
uss person ko life me aane se kya hota he wo bahot khub likha he.....
bahot dino baad likhha he aapne


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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2010, 11:42:54 AM »
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Thnx alot dev..sach kaha dev kisi k aane se bahut se dabe ehsas phir se jaag uthte hai...
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2010, 11:45:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Geet Ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2010, 12:16:16 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji...
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