Jis dil pai hamain naaz thaa, ab wo bhi hai wahaan!

by abdbundeli on October 18, 2008, 01:17:31 PM
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Jis dil pai hamain naaz thaa, ab wo bhi hai wahaan!
Ye dil kee daastaan hai: mat poochhiye kahaan?
Koshish hai, ki, ham jaan leyn un kaa sahee patah;
Lagtaa hai kabhi, hain, 'abd', pahloo mein woh yahaan!!

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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2008, 01:30:32 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai aapne Abd ji... Applause

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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2008, 01:56:15 PM »
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Shukriyah honeyrose ji!
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2008, 04:52:50 PM »
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Very nice Abd Ji  Applause

Jaane kahan hain wo, magar,
Mehsoos, paas, hue har pal
Ghar hai jinka, yeh dil,
Ab aur kahan dhoonde nazar
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2008, 04:58:31 PM »
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NICE LINES ABD JI AND CELMIRA
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2008, 08:51:34 PM »
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Waah abd ji & celmira ji bohot khoob!  Applause

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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2008, 04:30:15 AM »
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Shukriyah Celmira ji/Pooja ji/Sayyid Randeri ji!
Bas, justajoo ki deir hai, warnah hai woh yaheen!
Pahloo mein nazar-e-zehn key mouzood to naheen?
Waisey to justajoo mein lagey hain azal sey ham;
Lagtaa rahaa hai, jaisey nihaan ho yaheen kaheen!!

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