Jis din se .........(Asghar)

by M.ASGHAR MIRPURI on August 16, 2011, 12:15:23 PM
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Jis din se jal gya hai aashiyaan mera
Sehra mein bhatak raha hai karvaan mera
Tere bina ab soona soona lagta hai
Yeh chota sa hai jo jahan mera
Tera pyar paane ki hasrat he rehi
Magar poora na hua armaan mera
Hum ne dil ka darvaza khula rakha hai
Shaaid kisi din too  bane mehman mera
Mujeh apne muqadar peh kyon na naz ho
Jo tujh sa haseen hai qadardaan mera
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2011, 12:19:38 PM »
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ASDHAR SAHAB,

VERY DEEP THOUGHTS..NICE POST..
JUST KEEP ON WRITING..ALL THE BEST.

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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2011, 12:37:53 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2011, 02:11:36 PM »
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Nice Thoughts. Asghar Saheb

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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2011, 06:14:52 PM »
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Jis din se jal gya hai aashiyaan mera
Sehra mein bhatak raha hai karvaan mera

Waahh...!!! Bahut Khoob.......

Tere bina ab soona soona lagta hai
Yeh chota sa hai jo jahan mera

Kya kehne ish line ke,,,

Tera pyar paane ki hasrat he rehi
Magar poora na hua armaan mera

dil soch me dooba reh gaya...

Hum ne dil ka darvaza khula rakha hai
Shaaid kisi din too  bane mehman mera

itna umda khayal.. awesome line...

Mujeh apne muqadar peh kyon na naz ho
Jo tujh sa haseen hai qadardaan mera

beshak ho naaz khud par...


Asghar Sahab.. Har ek lafz bade sambhal kar soch kar zazbaato me doobo kar likhe gaye hai...

lakhoon daad kabool kare...

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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2011, 07:12:35 PM »
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Jis din se jal gya hai aashiyaan mera
Sehra mein bhatak raha hai karvaan mera
Tere bina ab soona soona lagta hai
Yeh chota sa hai jo jahan mera
Tera pyar paane ki hasrat he rehi
Magar poora na hua armaan mera
Hum ne dil ka darvaza khula rakha hai
Shaaid kisi din too  bane mehman mera
Mujeh apne muqadar peh kyon na naz ho
Jo tujh sa haseen hai qadardaan mera

NICE..........!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2011, 07:29:45 PM »
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bht khub--

mujhe ek gaana yaad aya aapke Title ko dekh kar--
!!
jis din se nazar me aaye ho tum
koi aur nazar to aaye naa
ise pyar kahen ya pagalpann
dil chain kahin bhi paaye naa
!!

hanste rahiye Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2011, 10:59:09 PM »
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SHUKRIYA KASH SAHEB.ASGHAR
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2011, 11:04:55 PM »
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SHUKRIYA JANAB HUMAARI TARAF
SE DAAD QABOOL KIJIYE NICE
REPLY SARFIRA SAHEB.ASGHAR
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