Jis din se woh sajan rootha ..

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Jis din se woh sajan rootha, rootha mujh se din ka aalam
Shamein roothi, sub_hein roothi, roothi mujh se raat suhani

Guzre maah-o-saal aankhon ke dar par is soorat aate hai
Lagur, andhe, goonge, behre, par kashkool sabhi ke khali

Har daur raha hai us par har daur me uska charcha tha
Har daur ne apne hathon se aashiq ko banaya laafani


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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2010, 08:26:07 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Saba ji.very touching and lovely creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP

WOH AISE ROOT KAR DUR HUA HUMSE
KI JAISE MAINE BAHUT BADI GUNAAH KAR DI.
MANATE MANATE THAK GAYI PAR
USKA PATHAR DIL PIGALTA HI NAHI HAI.

Ek koshish ki maine.
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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2010, 08:38:28 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saba ji... bahut khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Quote from: Saba_Saba is back on April 01, 2010, 08:11:49 PM
Jis din se woh sajan rootha, rootha mujh se din ka aalam
Shamein roothi, sub_hein roothi, roothi mujh se raat suhani

Guzre maah-o-saal aankhon ke dar par is soorat aate hai
Lagur, andhe, goonge, behre, par kashkool sabhi ke khali

Har daur raha hai us par har daur me uska charcha tha
Har daur ne apne hathon se aashiq ko banaya laafani


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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2010, 08:44:32 PM »
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Bahut khoob Madhu ji...!!! It's really sweet....!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut hi khoobsurat koshish ki hai aapne,
Lajawab aur kamayab koshish ki hai aapne,
Kya tarif karen hum aapki is kavita ki,
Dil jeet lene ki koshish ki hai aapne...!!!

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WOH AISE ROOT KAR DUR HUA HUMSE
KI JAISE MAINE BAHUT BADI GUNAAH KAR DI.
MANATE MANATE THAK GAYI PAR
USKA PATHAR DIL PIGALTA HI NAHI HAI.

Ek koshish ki maine.
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2010, 08:54:13 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji hausla badane ke liye. Thankyou !
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2010, 09:52:39 PM »
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Bhout khoob
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2010, 10:50:55 PM »
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 Welcome Banner Madhu ji...!!!

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Bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji hausla badane ke liye. Thankyou !
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 01, 2010, 08:26:07 PM
Wah bahut khoob Saba ji.very touching and lovely creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP

WOH AISE ROOT KAR DUR HUA HUMSE
KI JAISE MAINE BAHUT BADI GUNAAH KAR DI.
MANATE MANATE THAK GAYI PAR
USKA PATHAR DIL PIGALTA HI NAHI HAI.

Ek koshish ki maine.


Thank u Madhu  drunken_smilie love4

aap ne bohat achhi koshish ki  Thumbs UP Applause Applause

Baaraha us ko manaya hum ne
Phir bhi na pyar jataya hum ne
Us ki galiyo me huye ruswa to Saba
Tha ek wada jo har pal nibhaya hum ne

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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2010, 05:51:43 AM »
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Thank U Kapil Ji ... and Neel Ji

Hausla afzayi ka shukriya

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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2010, 06:14:06 AM »
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Wah wah Śaba ji bahut hi behtreen aur gahraai liye hue likha hai. Well done.
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 02, 2010, 06:14:06 AM
Wah wah Śaba ji bahut hi behtreen aur gahraai liye hue likha hai. Well done.



Shukriya Riyaz Ji ... Koshish pasand aayi ...
Thankyou !
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«Reply #11 on: April 02, 2010, 08:21:48 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saba ji...!!!

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Baaraha us ko manaya hum ne
Phir bhi na pyar jataya hum ne
Us ki galiyo me huye ruswa to Saba
Tha ek wada jo har pal nibhaya hum ne
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«Reply #12 on: April 02, 2010, 10:25:50 AM »
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bahut khoob saba ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
zazbaaton ko khoob farmaya hai.
Quote from: Saba_Saba is back on April 01, 2010, 08:11:49 PM
Jis din se woh sajan rootha, rootha mujh se din ka aalam
Shamein roothi, sub_hein roothi, roothi mujh se raat suhani

Guzre maah-o-saal aankhon ke dar par is soorat aate hai
Lagur, andhe, goonge, behre, par kashkool sabhi ke khali

Har daur raha hai us par har daur me uska charcha tha
Har daur ne apne hathon se aashiq ko banaya laafani


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«Reply #13 on: April 02, 2010, 07:30:41 PM »
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Shukriya Suresh Ji ... thanx a lot


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bahut khoob saba ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
zazbaaton ko khoob farmaya hai.
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«Reply #14 on: April 02, 2010, 08:13:22 PM »
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Quote from: Saba_Saba is back on April 01, 2010, 08:11:49 PM
Jis din se woh sajan rootha, rootha mujh se din ka aalam
Shamein roothi, sub_hein roothi, roothi mujh se raat suhani

Guzre maah-o-saal aankhon ke dar par is soorat aate hai
Lagur, andhe, goonge, behre, par kashkool sabhi ke khali

Har daur raha hai us par har daur me uska charcha tha
Har daur ne apne hathon se aashiq ko banaya laafani


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Good one Saba JI
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