Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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Uthaayaa jab naqaab un ne, huyee mismaar taareekee;

Hataa abron ko jaise maah ne roshan kiyaa paikar!

Aham qismat hai us kee, ab 'abd' bhee kyaa kahe aakhir;

Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

اُٹھایا جب نقاب اُن نے، حُیی مِیسمار تاریکی،

حٹا ابروں کو جیسے ماح نے روشن کِیا پیکر۔

اھم قِسمت ھے اسکی، اب 'ابد' بھی کیا کھے آخر،

جسے بھی ملے حو تم، رح گیا حے تمحارا حوکر۔

- abd bundeli / ابد بندےلی


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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2014, 10:54:35 AM »

kya baat hai abdji....


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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2014, 12:55:47 PM »


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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2014, 01:30:23 PM »

Quote from: mann.mann on September 19, 2014, 10:54:35 AM

kya baat hai abdji....

Shukriyah, Maan ji!


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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2014, 01:31:08 PM »

Quote from: Rajigujral on September 19, 2014, 12:55:47 PM

Shukriyah, Gujral ji!


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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2014, 02:02:38 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on September 19, 2014, 10:44:10 AM

waah waah bahut khoob meri shaan mein qaseede padh rahe ho per ye to batanaa janaab mujhe aakhir dekha kahaan hai jo aaj kal likhne ka andaaz judaa-judaa sa ho gayaa hai janaab kaa !

aur ek baat ye Urdu mein bhi likha jaa raha hai baat aakhir kyaa hai mere huzoor !


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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2014, 02:35:22 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on September 19, 2014, 02:02:38 PM

Sheba ji, mere liye to aap qudrat ke eik nayaab dil-o-dimaag kee maalkin hain, aur main to use hee dekhtaa huun! Aur jab, di-o-aag naayaab hain, to, maashaallah, Khuda buree nazar se bachaaye, husn to aankhon aur dekhnewale kaa numaaindah hotaa hai! Urdu likhnaa bhuul na jaauun, isliye hee! Urdu mein main ne koyi schooly ilm haasil naheen kiyaa hai! Sirf, chaar maheene hee do ustaadon se Urdu seekhee thee! Haan, mujhe khaase Urdu alfaaz aate hain! Khaskar main ne Hindi aur English mein hee likhaa hai; par Urdu mein bhee to kayi hazaar gazlaat, rubaaiyaat, qitye aur asha'ar likhe hain! Meri schooly padhaayi Hindi, English, Sanskrit, Pali wa Praakrut mein hee huyee hai!
- abd bundeli


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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2014, 09:00:01 PM »

bahut khoobsurat qalaam hai janaab. Yeh aapkee taalim jo Hindi Sanskrit Aur Paali kee hai, to aapne Urdu kee kaise Urdu lagaa dee. Urdu kee Urdu lagaane kaa matlab hotaa hai, Urdu kee Bauhtaat lagaa dee. Main to itnaa gehraa Urdu nahin likh paataataa, haalanke Urdu mein aath jamaat pass hoon.
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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2014, 01:36:39 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2014, 04:33:00 AM »

वाह.....वाह.....


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Re: Jise bhee mile ho tum, rah gayaa hai tumhaaraa hokar!!

«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2014, 08:14:15 AM »

Quote from: surindarn on September 19, 2014, 09:00:01 PM

Koshish karne se koyi bhee zubaan seekhee jaa saktee hai! Urdu wa Hindi mein bahut farq nahin hai; Hindi mein Sanskrit ke alfaaz bhutaayat se stemaal hote hain, Urdu mein Arabic wa Persian ke! Urdu, basically, Delhi ki upaj hai! Donon kee grammar lagbhag aik-see hee hai! Urdu mein 'metaphor' wa 'suggestive imagery' kaa bahut hee umdah stemaal hotaa hai, aur isee ne mujhe Urdu shayar ban ne kaa mouqaa diyaa hai!


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