Jo bhi aaye..................Abhi Tamrakar

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Khoobsurat mere raston pe muqaam bahut aaye

Jo bhi aaye sanam muqammal nahi aaye~

 

Chhod aaye ham mohabbat ko usi hi ki gali

Aur wo kehete hain sanam lene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..

 

Unhe aksar hamse ye gila rahi 'Abhi'

hansi dene to aaye sanam ashq lene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..

 

Badi ajeeb he ye rasm-e-mohabbat

Lene aaye to sahi sanam dil dene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2011, 11:08:50 AM »
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Khoobsurat mere raston pe muqaam bahut aaye

Jo bhi aaye sanam muqammal nahi aaye~

 

Chhod aaye ham mohabbat ko usi hi ki gali

Aur wo kehete hain sanam lene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..

 

Unhe aksar hamse ye gila rahi 'Abhi'

hansi dene to aaye sanam ashq lene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..

 

Badi ajeeb he ye rasm-e-mohabbat

Lene aaye to sahi sanam dil dene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..

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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2011, 12:40:14 PM »
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Vaah Abhi ji
bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2011, 01:28:19 PM »
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abhi ji bahut khoobsoorat likha hai.
kamaal kar diya
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad hazir hai.
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Khoobsurat mere raston pe muqaam bahut aaye

Jo bhi aaye sanam muqammal nahi aaye~

 

Chhod aaye ham mohabbat ko usi hi ki gali

Aur wo kehete hain sanam lene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..

 

Unhe aksar hamse ye gila rahi 'Abhi'

hansi dene to aaye sanam ashq lene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 

Badi ajeeb he ye rasm-e-mohabbat

Lene aaye to sahi sanam dil dene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2011, 06:29:31 PM »
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Abhi jee Aadaab!

Kaise haiN janab.. bade dino se nazar nahi aaye?
Aur janab lagta hai aap likhane ke hunar se bahut
door ho gaye hai.. Huh? Huh? Huh?

Jo aapke khubsurat khayaal aise bikhare bikhare
andaaz meiN pesh kiye Huh?

Wel daad kabul kijiye... Likhate rahiye..
aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile     

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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2011, 07:32:44 PM »
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Khoobsurat mere raston pe muqaam bahut aaye

Jo bhi aaye sanam muqammal nahi aaye~

 

Chhod aaye ham mohabbat ko usi hi ki gali

Aur wo kehete hain sanam lene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..

 

Unhe aksar hamse ye gila rahi 'Abhi'

hansi dene to aaye sanam ashq lene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..

 

Badi ajeeb he ye rasm-e-mohabbat

Lene aaye to sahi sanam dil dene nahi aaye~Jo bhi aaye..

BAHUT KHOOB JANAB .....DAAD KABOOL KARE..
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2011, 07:01:56 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaah    Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya ji...

Vaah Abhi ji
bahut bahut khoob

shukriya mkv ji..
abhi ji bahut khoobsoorat likha hai.
kamaal kar diya
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad hazir hai.
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suresh ji shukriya ..

Abhi jee Aadaab!

Kaise haiN janab.. bade dino se nazar nahi aaye?
Aur janab lagta hai aap likhane ke hunar se bahut
door ho gaye hai.. Huh? Huh? Huh?

Jo aapke khubsurat khayaal aise bikhare bikhare
andaaz meiN pesh kiye Huh?

Wel daad kabul kijiye... Likhate rahiye..
aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile     



parwaaz sahab namaskar....

bahut sahi kaha sir g apne....
bada door ho gaya hu likhne se likhte likhte...
achha likhne ke chakkar me taraqquee anhi ho pa rahi..
ummeed he si bar maaf karege hame aap...
agli bar fir koshish karege ji ....
sath rahiye..

BAHUT KHOOB JANAB .....DAAD KABOOL KARE..
shuriya sirg..sath rahiye hamsha/..
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2011, 07:15:12 AM »
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Abhi Jee Aadaab!

Janab ab aap bhi hume Sir na kahiye yaar...
Aap humare FB ke chaNd friends ki list meiN hai
means U know me.. then  Is it SO!


Wel par agli baar aapki koshish behad kamyaab
raheNgi yehi ummid karte haiN.. Usual Smile


Khush rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2011, 06:47:34 AM »
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Abhi Jee Aadaab!

Janab ab aap bhi hume Sir na kahiye yaar...
Aap humare FB ke chaNd friends ki list meiN hai
means U know me.. then  Is it SO!


Wel par agli baar aapki koshish behad kamyaab
raheNgi yehi ummid karte haiN.. Usual Smile


Khush rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile


ji bilkul
koshish hi to hai sirg kamyab hui to khushi nhai hui to kam-s-kam seekh to degi hii...
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