Jo dur jana hi tha.....

by Rosh on May 28, 2015, 02:27:51 PM
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Jo dur jana hi tha to kareeb aaye hi kyun the...
Jo apki zindagi mein hamara wajood hi nahi to hamein zindagi batate hi kyun the....
Jo sath na dena tha to hamara hath thame hi kyun the...
Jo aasun hi dena tha to khushi ki aas jagaye hi kyun the....
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2015, 02:37:20 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2015, 07:25:36 PM »
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Jo dur jana hi tha to kareeb aaye hi kyun the...
Jo apki zindagi mein hamara wajood hi nahi to hamein zindagi batate hi kyun the....
Jo sath na dena tha to hamara hath thame hi kyun the...
Jo aasun hi dena tha to khushi ki aas jagaye hi kyun the....

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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2015, 07:44:13 PM »
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Jo dur jana hi tha to kareeb aaye hi kyun the...
Jo apki zindagi mein hamara wajood hi nahi to hamein zindagi bataye hi kyun the....
Jo sath na dena tha to hamara hath thame hi kyun the...
Jo aasun hi dena tha to khushi ki aas jagaye hi kyun the....

bahut khoob. Doosri line mein main ne ek lafz change kiya hai jo red color mein hai.
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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2015, 12:52:41 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2015, 05:00:57 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob.....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2015, 12:50:29 PM »
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