-----/// Jo subah tera nazar aanaa huwaa /// ------ Hriday

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jo aaj baazaar me subah teraa nazar aanaa huwaa,
in sukhe huye hothon ka firse muskuraanaa huwaa,

dekh mujhe jo tere aankhon ka sharmaanaa huwaa,
mere is dil pe kisi chhuri ka chal jaanaa huwaa,

bheege hothon se tere jo kuch badbaraanaa huwaa,
haaye, bas pal bhar me hi mera mar jaanaa huwaa,

tere zulfon ka apne chehre par se hataanaa huwaa,
bhari dopahari me chaand ka nazar aajaana huwaa,

angdaai leke jo pichhe mud ke tune dekha mujhe,
khade khade mera ladkhadaa ke gir jaanaa huwaa,

uffff, ye husn tera aur ye qaatil adaayen teri,
kitne aashiqon ka tujhe dekh jaan se jaanaa huwaa,

sharmaa jaaye gulaab bhi tere gaalo ki laali dekh,
jo sajdhaj ke tera kisi bagiyaa se hoke jaanaa huwaa,

kya bataaun aaj tujhe dekh mera kaisa haal huwaa,
bin chooye kisi jaam ko mera behek jaanaa huwaa,

guzri jo tu mere kareeb se jaanaa aaj subah,
teri khooshboo me mera aaj mehek jaanaa huwaa,

jo aaj baazaar me subah teraa nazar aanaa huwaa,
in sukhe huye hothon ka firse muskuraanaa huwaa...

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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2012, 11:33:40 AM »
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bahut sunder bahut sunder waah janaab qaabile daad fasaanaa hua
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2012, 11:41:03 AM »
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just mind blowing.. Applause Applause

tareef karte karte na kabhi thakenge hum...
hriday ji lajawab ghazal jo aapka banana huwaa... Usual Smile

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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2012, 12:01:18 PM »
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Speechless.......... Tareef nahi kar pa rahe hain aapke is romantic qalaam ki hriday ji..... Aapke liye ek rau aur 2 cadbury.......just awesome creation........
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Hriday ji lajwab aapka yeh afsanna hua
jaise noujawan dil ka tarana hua
lafzo mein byan kar sake tareef itni nahi
aapke is qalaam ke aage hamara sar jhukana hua...
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2012, 12:09:26 PM »
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waah hridhay ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2012, 12:39:41 PM »
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Bohat hi khubsurat!!! Loved it!!!! Wah! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2012, 01:54:34 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Hriday jee

Applause Applause Applause

Jaadoogar ..maine galat nahee kaha tha.
sharma jaaye gulaab...Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 13, 2012, 08:56:01 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 13, 2012, 11:06:58 AM
jo aaj baazaar me subah teraa nazar aanaa huwaa,
in sukhe huye hothon ka firse muskuraanaa huwaa,

dekh mujhe jo tere aankhon ka sharmaanaa huwaa,
mere is dil pe kisi chhuri ka chal jaanaa huwaa,

bheege hothon se tere jo kuch badbaraanaa huwaa,
haaye, bas pal bhar me hi mera mar jaanaa huwaa,

tere zulfon ka apne chehre par se hataanaa huwaa,
bhari dopahari me chaand ka nazar aajaana huwaa,

angdaai leke jo pichhe mud ke tune dekha mujhe,
khade khade mera ladkhadaa ke gir jaanaa huwaa,

uffff, ye husn tera aur ye qaatil adaayen teri,
kitne aashiqon ka tujhe dekh jaan se jaanaa huwaa,

sharmaa jaaye gulaab bhi tere gaalo ki laali dekh,
jo sajdhaj ke tera kisi bagiyaa se hoke jaanaa huwaa,

kya bataaun aaj tujhe dekh mera kaisa haal huwaa,
bin chooye kisi jaam ko mera behek jaanaa huwaa,

guzri jo tu mere kareeb se jaanaa aaj subah,
teri khooshboo me mera aaj mehek jaanaa huwaa,

jo aaj baazaar me subah teraa nazar aanaa huwaa,
in sukhe huye hothon ka firse muskuraanaa huwaa...

*****HRIDAY*****

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             hain udaas abb bhii dur-o-diwaar ashiyaane ke merey.!
              bichdey huey  tujh se inhein ek zamaanaa huaa.!!
              
                    
                    
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2012, 09:21:13 PM »
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bahut khoob khumar bara yeh kalam mujhe bahut pasand aaya  Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2012, 05:05:00 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 13, 2012, 11:06:58 AM
jo aaj baazaar me subah teraa nazar aanaa huwaa,
in sukhe huye hothon ka firse muskuraanaa huwaa,

dekh mujhe jo tere aankhon ka sharmaanaa huwaa,
mere is dil pe kisi chhuri ka chal jaanaa huwaa,

bheege hothon se tere jo kuch badbaraanaa huwaa,
haaye, bas pal bhar me hi mera mar jaanaa huwaa,

tere zulfon ka apne chehre par se hataanaa huwaa,
bhari dopahari me chaand ka nazar aajaana huwaa,

angdaai leke jo pichhe mud ke tune dekha mujhe,
khade khade mera ladkhadaa ke gir jaanaa huwaa,

uffff, ye husn tera aur ye qaatil adaayen teri,
kitne aashiqon ka tujhe dekh jaan se jaanaa huwaa,

sharmaa jaaye gulaab bhi tere gaalo ki laali dekh,
jo sajdhaj ke tera kisi bagiyaa se hoke jaanaa huwaa,

kya bataaun aaj tujhe dekh mera kaisa haal huwaa,
bin chooye kisi jaam ko mera behek jaanaa huwaa,

guzri jo tu mere kareeb se jaanaa aaj subah,
teri khooshboo me mera aaj mehek jaanaa huwaa,

jo aaj baazaar me subah teraa nazar aanaa huwaa,
in sukhe huye hothon ka firse muskuraanaa huwaa...

*****HRIDAY*****
Waah Hriday ji waah kya khumar bhar bhar ke likha hai aapne is gazal me...bahut umda bahut behtrien peskash par dheron daad aur mubarakbaad qabool kariye....Applause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2012, 12:54:43 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on August 13, 2012, 11:33:40 AM
bahut sunder bahut sunder waah janaab qaabile daad fasaanaa hua
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«Reply #11 on: August 21, 2012, 06:54:18 PM »
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thank you sooooo much Touhid ji... aap jaise pyaare pyaare dosto kaa sath hi hai  jiske kaaran thoda b ahut likh lete hain aur aap sab mere har koshish ko apne khoobsurat comments se saja dete hain....!!!

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 13, 2012, 11:41:03 AM
just mind blowing.. Applause Applause

tareef karte karte na kabhi thakenge hum...
hriday ji lajawab ghazal jo aapka banana huwaa... Usual Smile

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Soudagar ji... aapkaa taarif ka andaaz bahut bahut pasand aaayaa humein... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

Quote from: soudagar on August 13, 2012, 12:01:18 PM
Speechless.......... Tareef nahi kar pa rahe hain aapke is romantic qalaam ki hriday ji..... Aapke liye ek rau aur 2 cadbury.......just awesome creation........
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Hriday ji lajwab aapka yeh afsanna hua
jaise noujawan dil ka tarana hua
lafzo mein byan kar sake tareef itni nahi
aapke is qalaam ke aage hamara sar jhukana hua...
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saahill ji....!!!

Quote from: saahill on August 13, 2012, 12:09:26 PM
waah hridhay ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2012, 02:25:17 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shireen ji....!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on August 13, 2012, 12:39:41 PM
Bohat hi khubsurat!!! Loved it!!!! Wah! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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