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JO TUM CHAHO - GHAZAL - SARVESH RASTOGI

by SARVESH RASTOGI on April 19, 2009, 11:45:31 AM

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waquif ansari

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«Reply #30 on: September 23, 2009, 10:35:57 AM »

My Dear Rastogi Ji: Aap ne jo ghazal post ki hai, is ghazal ke do ashaar to ghazal ke qaayede se theek haiN magar baaqi ashaar ghazal ke qawaafi se mel nahiN khaate. Chod, mod, tod ke baad soch, saunp, chhed, jhool waghaira qafiye ghazal ki sinf ke hawaale se theek nahin haiN. Aap ise chaaheiN to theek kar sakte hain kyon ki aap mein wo tamaam khubiyaN haiN jo aik ghazal-go shaayar meiN honi chahiye. Baharhaal aap ise zaroor dekhiye. Ye ghazal ki zameen bahut achchhi hai (mafayeelun-mafayeelun-mafayeelun-mafayeelun). Lijiye aapki is zameen par aik sher aapki pesh-e-nazar rakhta hoon:

DiloN ke saare rishte joD sakta hooN jo tum chaaho
Hawa ka rukh yaqeenan moD sakta hooN jo tum chaaho


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: JO TUM CHAHO - GHAZAL - SARVESH RASTOGI

«Reply #31 on: September 24, 2009, 06:50:24 AM »

Hello Ansari Saheb
Bahut bahut shukriya for your valuable suggestions and comments.
Aapke ye bol mujhe prerana dete rahange. Aapke do misre bhi bahut khoob hain. Thanks again.
SARVESH RASTOGI