Jo YeH shamsheer si palkeN haiN.... ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on November 16, 2012, 09:16:53 PM
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Aik kachchi pakki kalaam aap sab ki nazar... Usual Smile


Hai ishq gunaaH toH yeH gunaaH hone do... Qateer iske ab mujhe bus fanaaH hone do...
Unhe bhi pataa chale kis aashique ka khooN hai... Jab tak na thame tab tak tabaaH hone do





Jo YeH shamsheer si palkeN haiN karti hai hume ghayal
Humaari jaan naa le le yeH  tumhari aaNkh ka kaajal

Zarra sambhal kar chalna, badi kaafir yeH jawani hai
Pad na jaaye kahiN piche humari tarha kayiN paagal

Dupatta sar pe rakh lena, Sanam jab ghar se niklo tum
YeH jo shouq hawaaeN hai, udaa le jaati hai aaNchal

Badi ghanghor zulfeN haiN, ghatayeN chhaye khulte hi
In zulfoN ke saaye meiN, chhuppe haiN kayiN baadal

Banna le ab toH tu hum ko apni paazeb kaa guNgaroo
Tumhe hum yaad aayeNge bajeNgi jab bhi teri paayal
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«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2012, 01:24:23 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2012, 01:58:12 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2012, 04:18:18 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 16, 2012, 09:16:53 PM
Aik kachchi pakki kalaam aap sab ki nazar... Usual Smile


Hai ishq gunaaH toH yeH gunaaH hone do... Qateer iske ab mujhe bus fanaaH hone do...
Unhe bhi pataa chale kis aashique ka khooN hai... Jab tak na thame tab tak tabaaH hone do





Jo YeH shamsheer si palkeN haiN karti hai hume ghayal
Humaari jaan naa le le yeH  tumhari aaNkh ka kaajal

Zarra sambhal kar chalna, badi kaafir yeH jawani hai
Pad na jaaye kahiN piche humari tarha kayiN paagal

Dupatta sar pe rakh lena, Sanam jab ghar se niklo tum
YeH jo shouq hawaaeN hai, udaa le jaati hai aaNchal

Badi ghanghor zulfeN haiN, ghatayeN chhaye khulte hi
In zulfoN ke saaye meiN, chhuppe haiN kayiN baadal

Banna le ab toH tu hum ko apni paazeb kaa guNgaroo
Tumhe hum yaad aayeNge bajeNgi jab bhi teri paayal




[/color][/font][/size]wah wah wah wah, kya baat hai parwaaz saheb umda peshkash rahi, sabhi ashaar lajwab rahe. khas tuar se ye shair to kammal hai . dheerrrooon daaad qubool karen...
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«Reply #4 on: November 17, 2012, 05:02:33 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 16, 2012, 09:16:53 PM


Dupatta sar pe rakh lena, Sanam jab ghar se niklo tum
YeH jo shouq hawaaeN hai, udaa le jaati hai aaNchal

Bahut  khoob , Parwaaz   saheb  . Bada   shokh  andaaz  hai .
Badalte  mausam  ka  poora  asar  hai . Khuda  aapke  kalaam
ki  yeh rangeeni  qayam  rakhe  .  Khair  andesh , HASAN
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2012, 07:28:05 AM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: November 17, 2012, 11:09:45 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on November 17, 2012, 01:24:23 AM
bahut khoob


Prashad Jee Aadaab!


Aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... aage bhi apna saath banaye
rakhiye... Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2012, 11:11:22 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on November 17, 2012, 01:58:12 AM
very nice

Nand Jee Aadaab!


Thanks for appriciate my work... Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2012, 11:16:53 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 16, 2012, 09:16:53 PM
Aik kachchi pakki kalaam aap sab ki nazar... Usual Smile


Hai ishq gunaaH toH yeH gunaaH hone do... Qateer iske ab mujhe bus fanaaH hone do...
Unhe bhi pataa chale kis aashique ka khooN hai... Jab tak na thame tab tak tabaaH hone do





Jo YeH shamsheer si palkeN haiN karti hai hume ghayal
Humaari jaan naa le le yeH  tumhari aaNkh ka kaajal

Zarra sambhal kar chalna, badi kaafir yeH jawani hai icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Pad na jaaye kahiN piche humari tarha kayiN paagal

Dupatta sar pe rakh lena, Sanam jab ghar se niklo tum
YeH jo shouq hawaaeN hai, udaa le jaati hai aaNchal

Badi ghanghor zulfeN haiN, ghatayeN chhaye khulte hi
In zulfoN ke saaye meiN, chhuppe haiN kayiN baadal

Banna le ab toH tu hum ko apni paazeb kaa guNgaroo
Tumhe hum yaad aayeNge bajeNgi jab bhi teri paayal







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«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2012, 06:31:53 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2012, 07:07:42 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 16, 2012, 09:16:53 PM
Aik kachchi pakki kalaam aap sab ki nazar... Usual Smile


Hai ishq gunaaH toH yeH gunaaH hone do... Qateer iske ab mujhe bus fanaaH hone do...
Unhe bhi pataa chale kis aashique ka khooN hai... Jab tak na thame tab tak tabaaH hone do





Jo YeH shamsheer si palkeN haiN karti hai hume ghayal
Humaari jaan naa le le yeH  tumhari aaNkh ka kaajal

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Zarra sambhal kar chalna, badi kaafir yeH jawani hai
Pad na jaaye kahiN piche humari tarha kayiN paagal

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Dupatta sar pe rakh lena, Sanam jab ghar se niklo tum
YeH jo shouq hawaaeN hai, udaa le jaati hai aaNchal

Wah Wah!!!

Badi ghanghor zulfeN haiN, ghatayeN chhaye khulte hi
In zulfoN ke saaye meiN, chhuppe haiN kayiN baadal

Bohat Khub!!

Banna le ab toH tu hum ko apni paazeb kaa guNgaroo
Tumhe hum yaad aayeNge bajeNgi jab bhi teri paayal

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Wah Wah!!! Parwaaz jee!!! Bohat hi khubsurat ghazal!!!! Bohat hi romantic hai!!!!

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«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2012, 08:55:48 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 16, 2012, 09:16:53 PM
Aik kachchi pakki kalaam aap sab ki nazar... Usual Smile


Hai ishq gunaaH toH yeH gunaaH hone do... Qateer iske ab mujhe bus fanaaH hone do...
Unhe bhi pataa chale kis aashique ka khooN hai... Jab tak na thame tab tak tabaaH hone do





Jo YeH shamsheer si palkeN haiN karti hai hume ghayal
Humaari jaan naa le le yeH  tumhari aaNkh ka kaajal

Zarra sambhal kar chalna, badi kaafir yeH jawani hai
Pad na jaaye kahiN piche humari tarha kayiN paagal

Dupatta sar pe rakh lena, Sanam jab ghar se niklo tum
YeH jo shouq hawaaeN hai, udaa le jaati hai aaNchal

Badi ghanghor zulfeN haiN, ghatayeN chhaye khulte hi
In zulfoN ke saaye meiN, chhuppe haiN kayiN baadal

Banna le ab toH tu hum ko apni paazeb kaa guNgaroo
Tumhe hum yaad aayeNge bajeNgi jab bhi teri paayal






Bahut Bahut Khoob parwaaz Ji..

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«Reply #12 on: November 19, 2012, 09:17:52 AM »
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Aadaab parwaaz bhai
Pichad gaya mai..is baar..
Bahut bahut accha likha hai..
ghazab... behatreen.
par 2nd sher ..kuch atakta hai..shayad mai hi nasamajh huN.
is khoobsurat kalaam par ..dil daad qubool farmaayen.
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«Reply #13 on: November 19, 2012, 12:45:34 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 16, 2012, 09:16:53 PM
Aik kachchi pakki kalaam aap sab ki nazar... Usual Smile


Hai ishq gunaaH toH yeH gunaaH hone do... Qateer iske ab mujhe bus fanaaH hone do...
Unhe bhi pataa chale kis aashique ka khooN hai... Jab tak na thame tab tak tabaaH hone do





Jo YeH shamsheer si palkeN haiN karti hai hume ghayal
Humaari jaan naa le le yeH  tumhari aaNkh ka kaajal

Zarra sambhal kar chalna, badi kaafir yeH jawani hai
Pad na jaaye kahiN piche humari tarha kayiN paagal

Dupatta sar pe rakh lena, Sanam jab ghar se niklo tum
YeH jo shouq hawaaeN hai, udaa le jaati hai aaNchal

Badi ghanghor zulfeN haiN, ghatayeN chhaye khulte hi
In zulfoN ke saaye meiN, chhuppe haiN kayiN baadal

Banna le ab toH tu hum ko apni paazeb kaa guNgaroo
Tumhe hum yaad aayeNge bajeNgi jab bhi teri paayal




khubsurat ghazal kahee aap ne parwaz ji,....bohat c daad,.....
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«Reply #14 on: November 23, 2012, 09:17:08 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on November 17, 2012, 04:18:18 AM
[/color][/font][/size]wah wah wah wah, kya baat hai parwaaz saheb umda peshkash rahi, sabhi ashaar lajwab rahe. khas tuar se ye shair to kammal hai . dheerrrooon daaad qubool karen...


Aarish Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut bahut Shukryaa janab is khoob aur dil jeet lene wali tareef ke liye..
Hum aapke tah e dil se mashkoor O mamnoon hai... Usual Smile

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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