Jo YeH shamsheer si palkeN haiN.... ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on November 16, 2012, 09:16:53 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 23, 2012, 09:20:36 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 17, 2012, 05:02:33 AM

Bahut  khoob , Parwaaz   saheb  . Bada   shokh  andaaz  hai .
Badalte  mausam  ka  poora  asar  hai . Khuda  aapke  kalaam
ki  yeh rangeeni  qayam  rakhe  .  Khair  andesh , HASAN


Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab O AS Salaam!


Jee bahut bahut shukriyaa janab, houNsle ke liye aur duaaoN ke liye...
YeH toH mousam ki tarhaa andaaz aur ahsaas badal bhi jaate haiN... Usual Smile

Aage bhi apna saath aur duaaeN banaye rakhiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: November 23, 2012, 09:23:11 AM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on November 17, 2012, 07:28:05 AM
bahut khoob bahut khoob


Anmol Jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab ... aapne apna kimti waqt is kalaam
par diyaa is liye hum aapke tah e dil se shukra guzaar haiN... Usual Smile

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: November 23, 2012, 12:03:29 PM »
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Bahut khoob perwaz saheb Umda kalam .
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«Reply #18 on: December 08, 2012, 09:57:00 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on November 17, 2012, 11:16:53 AM


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Qalb Sahaab Aadaab!


Zarra nawaazi ke liya bahut bahut shukriyaa janab.... Usual Smile
Hum aapke tah e dil se shukraguzar haiN... Usual Smile


Lagta hai janab aapko bhi dusra sher samjh meiN nahi aayaa...  icon_scratch
Chaliye aik sidhi si hint de dete haiN... Janab shayad aap kisi
khoobsuarat haseeN ke piche nahi pade...  Winking waise maiN bhi nahi
pada...  icon_geek

Par kia kaheN mere pure friends group ka love marage hua hai..
Sabne kisi na kisi ke piche pad ke shadi kar lii..  laughing4
Ab shayad aap samjh jayeN .... is sher ka mouzoo  hello


Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: December 08, 2012, 09:59:37 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 19, 2012, 06:31:53 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
wonderful

Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


bahut bahut shukriyaa is houNslaa afzai ke liye...
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...

Aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: December 08, 2012, 10:01:36 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on November 19, 2012, 07:07:42 AM
Wah Wah!!! Parwaaz jee!!! Bohat hi khubsurat ghazal!!!! Bohat hi romantic hai!!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Shireen Jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee ... aapne apna kimti waqt diyaa is kalaam
par aur hoNslaa baqsha... Usual Smile
Hum aapke tah e dil se shukra guzaar haiN..

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Ate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: December 08, 2012, 10:03:19 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 19, 2012, 08:55:48 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob parwaaz Ji..

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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... lambe arse baad aapko apni kalaam
par dekhkar behad khushi huyi... Usual Smile

Aage bhi apnaa saath banaye rakhiye... Usual Smile
Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: December 08, 2012, 10:07:32 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 19, 2012, 09:17:52 AM
Aadaab parwaaz bhai
Pichad gaya mai..is baar..
Bahut bahut accha likha hai..
ghazab... behatreen.
par 2nd sher ..kuch atakta hai..shayad mai hi nasamajh huN.
is khoobsurat kalaam par ..dil daad qubool farmaayen.




MKV Jee Aadaab!


Janab bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka aapne is kalaam par apna kimti
waqt diyaa... Usual Smile

Aray Bhai aap toH sharmiNda kar rahe hai... Ishq par aap hum se
behad jyaadaa pyaara likhte haiN... humne toH bus aise hi aik
mazahiyaa andaaz meiN kalaam pesh karne ki koshish ki thi par
kalaam ne ruqh khud hi badl liya...  icon_geek

Hmmm aapke dusre sher ke liye uthe sawaal ka jawaab humne qalb
sahaab ke reply meiN de diyaa hai... Ummid hai shayaad abhi sher
saaf ho gaya ho... Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: December 18, 2012, 06:36:47 PM »
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kya baat....kya baat...bahut hi umda likha hai jnaab....ishq ka khumaar joro par hai...par ye kya Parwaaz sahab...baniye toh payal ka ghungru nahi ,unke sar ka taaz baniye...mohabbat kadamo mein nahi palko mei basne k liye hoti hai Usual Smile
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