Junune ishq

by Rajiv'sshayri on August 19, 2007, 09:42:57 PM
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Faza main itar ghula hai tumhare Aane se
Main ji raha hoon jamane main is bahane se
Junune Ishq ki garmi hai tassuwar tera
Khalayain dehak uthangi tumhare jane se
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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2007, 05:25:56 AM »
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Fiza main itrr ghula hai tumhare Aane se
Main ji raha hoon jamane main isi bahane se
Junune Ishq ki garmi hai tassuwar tera
Khalayain dehak uthangi tumhare jane se



Hi.. its really sweet poety.. thodi si spelling mistake thi.. i ty to correct it...

But above of all. Its really sweet one by u.

Divya
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2007, 05:36:33 AM »
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wonderful thoughts...........keep it up
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Rajiv'sshayri
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2007, 09:44:23 AM »
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Fiza main itrr ghula hai tumhare Aane se
Main ji raha hoon jamane main isi bahane se
Junune Ishq ki garmi hai tassuwar tera
Khalayain dehak uthangi tumhare jane se



Hi.. its really sweet poety.. thodi si spelling mistake thi.. i ty to correct it...

But above of all. Its really sweet one by u.

Divya
Thanks divya for spellings. Faza and Fiza both right words Faza jyada khubsoorat lagta hai. Itrr or Itra we both wrong actually this is urdu word and should be spelt Itar and I mended that. Thanks once again and glad u liked it.
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2007, 09:48:58 AM »
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wonderful thoughts...........keep it up
Thanks for reading.
Rajni
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2007, 12:24:31 PM »
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oops...

ya both are urdu words..
sayad meri urdu week hai...

anyways good work
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2007, 02:02:41 AM »
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Nice One Rajiv...
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Rajiv'sshayri
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2007, 05:20:11 PM »
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Nice One Rajiv...


Thanks Aryaan.
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angel4u
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2007, 08:15:13 PM »
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Very beautiful Usual Smile
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snehaa
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2007, 08:06:24 AM »
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Nice one Rajiv.

Fiza rangeen hogay tumhare aane se
be rang tha ye zindagi tumhare jaane se
aankhon me aansoo kal the aaj bhi hai
kal the judai ke aaj chalak rahe tere aane se..
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2007, 10:20:43 PM »
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Nice one Rajiv.

Fiza rangeen hogay tumhare aane se
be rang tha ye zindagi tumhare jaane se
aankhon me aansoo kal the aaj bhi hai
kal the judai ke aaj chalak rahe tere aane se..


Wow beautiful snehaa ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2007, 10:39:31 PM »
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good job Rajni and Snehaa!!
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Rajiv'sshayri
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«Reply #12 on: September 08, 2007, 06:01:39 AM »
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good job Rajni and Snehaa!!


Thanks pooja.
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2011, 12:57:09 AM »
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I read it again and liked it, kya baat hai..........Rajni
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