JUSTJOO (Ghazal)... "MohaN"

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JUSTJOO  (Inspired from ghazal by Khwaja Mir Dard)  

Main zindaa hoon jabtalak mujhe teree hee justjoo hai
Zuban khush hai jeehan teehan teree hee gufatgoo hai

Khuda raa meree dua hai tu sab ko yaksan hee kar de
Main besabar kyun hoon woh itnaa kyun tundkhoo hai

Kyaa hogaa anjaam isskaa koi fiqr hee kyun ho mujhe
Jaantaa hoon gulaab kee bhi to naa rehti khushboo hai

Chaahhat hai ek meree gar teree bhi yeh chaahhat hai
Gar teree bhi kuchh aarzoo hai to meree bhi aarzoo hai
                                                
Gulistan bahut dekhein hain jo rang dekhaa gulon mein
Jo khoobsoorti hai gul dostee mein ajab rang-o-boo hai

Khuda.raa salaamat rakhh tu har kisee kee hee dostee
Junhin band huee kisee kee aankh naa main naa tu hai

MohaN pahelee-e-zeest kaun jaaney aaj hai bhi naa hai
Magar yeh suchh hai jab tak hain hum woh roo.broo hai

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justjoo = talaash; gufatgoo = talk; aarzoo = khwaahish;
will; tund.khoo = intemperate; naa shaayastaa;
boo = smell; roo.bruoo = present; zeest = zindagi; life;
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2017, 02:54:13 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2017, 05:17:40 AM »
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Waah waah janaab surinder sir..  Bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2017, 01:57:10 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 05, 2017, 02:54:13 AM
waah waah bahut khoob
bahut shukria Saini Sahib.
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2017, 01:47:11 AM »
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Quote from: aarzoo-e-arjun on January 05, 2017, 05:17:40 AM
Waah waah janaab surinder sir..  Bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Arjun Jee.
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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JUSTJOO  (Inspired from ghazal by Khwaja Mir Dard) 

Main zindaa hoon jabtalak mujhe teree hee justjoo hai
Zuban khush hai jeehan teehan teree hee gufatgoo hai

Khuda raa meree dua hai tu sab ko yaksan hee kar de
Main besabar kyun hoon woh itnaa kyun tundkhoo hai

Kyaa hogaa anjaam isskaa koi fiqr hee kyun ho mujhe
Jaantaa hoon gulaab kee bhi to naa rehti khushboo hai

Chaahhat hai ek meree gar teree bhi yeh chaahhat hai
Gar teree bhi kuchh aarzoo hai to meree bhi aarzoo hai
                                               
Gulistan bahut dekhein hain jo rang dekhaa gulon mein
Jo khoobsoorti hai gul dostee mein ajab rang-o-boo hai

Khuda.raa salaamat rakhh tu har kisee kee hee dostee
Junhin band huee kisee kee aankh naa main naa tu hai

MohaN pahelee-e-zeest kaun jaaney aaj hai bhi naa hai
Magar yeh suchh hai jab tak hain hum woh roo.broo hai

Surindar. N                              "MohaN"

justjoo = talaash; gufatgoo = talk; aarzoo = khwaahish;
will; tund.khoo = intemperate; naa shaayastaa;
boo = smell; roo.bruoo = present; zeest = zindagi; life;

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Waaaaaaaah waaaaah aur waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: Rustum Rangila on January 08, 2017, 07:07:50 AM
Waaaaaaaah waaaaah aur waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Rangila Jee.
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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