-----/// Kaafi hogaa ///----- Hriday

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samajhte  hain  woh  hamaaraa  dil unke shringaar pe aayaa hai
kyaa bataayen unki saadgi ne humein deewaanaa banaayaa hai


paas  aane  ke  liye  har  bahaanaa  kaafi hogaa
dil  lubhaane  ke  liye  sharmaanaa  kaafi hogaa

dhadkanein  tez  karne  ke  liye  kyaa  chaahiye
aa  ke  baahon  mein  simat jaanaa kaafi hogaa

baarish  ke   liye   baadal  ki   kyaa  zarurat  hai
aankhon  mein  kaajal  lagaa  lenaa kaafi hogaa

parchhaai  khud  hi  apnaa  raastaa dhund legi
sirf  tumhaaraa  saath  nibhaanaa  kaafi hogaa

qatl  karne  ke  liye   khanjar   ki  kyaa  zarurat
tumhaari  nazar  ko  jhukaa  lenaa  kaafi hogaa

tasveer  khoobsurat  koi  ban  jaaye  apne aap
tumhaaraa saamne  baith  jaanaa  kaafi hogaa

kisi ko  shaayar banaa  de   aankhein tumhaari
sirf  tumhaaraa  nazar  aa  jaanaa  kaafi hogaa

nashey ke liye ab sharaab  ki  kyaa  zarurat hai
bas  tumhaaraa kareeb  aa jaanaa  kaafi hogaa

mohabbat  kisi  saadhu ko bhi  ho jaaye tumse
pyaar se tumhaaraa  muskuraanaa kaafi hogaa


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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2013, 07:20:35 PM »
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Waah bahut khoob bro! Khush rahen!
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2013, 07:28:45 PM »
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kya baat hai kya baat hai, bas tareef hi tareef aur waaah hi waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Uffffff Hriday ji ab itni tareef meri karoge toh phir mai kuch likhe bina kaise rah sakti hoon.. isiliye aapko chota sa jawab de hi deti hoon.. Usual Smile

Tareef karni hai toh thoda aur paas aa jaao
Labon ko bolne na do aankhon se suna jaao

Raat ki syaahi bhi mit jaaye jiski roshni se
Mere chehre ko apne labon se chamka jaao

Parchaai bankar hum rahenge sang tumhare
Gar tum apna kiya har wada aaj nibha jaao

Kya kehti hai dhadkane zara sun toh lo jaana
Taras rahi hai baanhein tum aakar sama jaao

Doob kar meri in aankhon ki masti mein tum
Apni koi achchi si ghazal humko suna jaao
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2013, 07:46:03 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Hriday ji,,,,,,, Bahut hi heart touching hai....behtareen peshkash.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2013, 07:50:38 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Uffffff Hriday ji ab itni tareef meri karoge toh phir mai kuch likhe bina kaise rah sakti hoon.. isiliye aapko chota sa jawab de hi deti hoon.. Usual Smile

Tareef karni hai toh thoda aur paas aa jaao
Labon ko bolne na do aankhon se suna jaao

Raat ki syaahi bhi mit jaaye jiski roshni se
Mere chehre ko apne labon se chamka jaao

Parchaai bankar hum rahenge sang tumhare
Gar tum apna kiya har wada aaj nibha jaao

Kya kehti hai dhadkane zara sun toh lo jaana
Taras rahi hai baanhein tum aakar sama jaao

Doob kar meri in aankhon ki masti mein tum
Apni koi achchi si ghazal humko suna jaao



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haaye ! maar daalaa aapne to apne is jawaab se, aur bahut bahut shukriyaa aapkaa jo aapne mere is rachnaa ko waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaa, aur aapkaa jawaab to sone pe suhaagaa hai... bahut bahut khoob hai ji.. dil khush kar diyaa aapne...  bas fir kuch lines aur likh hi diyaa maine...!!!



aao    kareeb   to   fir  duur  jaa   jaanaa tum
apne  kiye  har   waade   ko   nibhaanaa  tum

badh    jaaye  kabhi  beqaraari   is  dil   ki  to
baahon  mein bharke seene se lagaanaa tum

pyaas   kabhi   badh  jaaye  jo  mere  is  dil ki
apne labon se pyaas  ko  bujhaa  jaanaa tum

jaltaa  ho  jism  jab  jaade  ke   mahino mein
aa ke use thandak  pahuchaa ke  jaanaa tum

geet likhun kabhi  naam  se  tumhaare  main
apne  hi  hothon se us ko gungunaanaa tum

roke  yeh  duniyaa, bandhan ho zamaane kaa
apne kadam ko bas pichhe naa hataanaa tum

de ke thodi si  mohabbat  apne deewaane ko
dil  ki  deewaangi  ko  aur badhaa jaanaa tum


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haaye ! maar daalaa aapne to apne is jawaab se, aur bahut bahut shukriyaa aapkaa jo aapne mere is rachnaa ko waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaa, aur aapkaa jawaab to sone pe suhaagaa hai... bahut bahut khoob hai ji.. dil khush kar diyaa aapne...  bas fir kuch lines aur likh hi diyaa maine...!!!



aao    kareeb   to   fir  duur  jaa   jaanaa tum
apne  kiye  har   waade   ko   nibhaanaa  tum

badh    jaaye  kabhi  beqaraari   is  dil   ki  to
baahon  mein bharke seene se lagaanaa tum

pyaas   kabhi   badh  jaaye  jo  mere  is  dil ki
apne labon se pyaas  ko  bujhaa  jaanaa tum

jaltaa  ho  jism  jab  jaade  ke   mahino mein
aa ke use thandak  pahuchaa ke  jaanaa tum

geet likhun kabhi  naam  se  tumhaare  main
apne  hi  hothon se us ko gungunaanaa tum

roke  yeh  duniyaa, bandhan ho zamaane kaa
apne kadam ko bas pichhe naa hataanaa tum

de ke thodi si  mohabbat  apne deewaane ko
dil  ki  deewaangi  ko  aur badhaa jaanaa tum


*****HRIDAY*****

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  Waah hriday ji jawab nahi aapke bhi jawab.. superbbbbbbbb tha.. chaliye ek aur romantic koshish meri bhi

Lo aa gaye hum qareeb phir na door jaane ke liye
Tumse kiya hua har ek waada aaj nibhaane ke liye

Badhti hai beqarari is dil ki toh aur badhne do zara
Raat ka aana abhi baaki is dil ko behlaane ke liye

Hai tapish muhabbat ki dono taraf kuch is tarah
Betaab hai badal bhi aaj paani barsaane ke liye

Lag jaaye aag phir is barsaat ke mausam mein
Kah rahi saansein muhabbat ko aazmane ke liye

Tumhare har geet ko apne labon par sajaon mai
Bikheron apni har ada deewangi badhaane ke liye
 
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2013, 08:27:31 PM »
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बहुत बहुत खूब....ह्रदय जी....ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद......
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2013, 08:33:36 PM »
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Nice chemistry Hriday and Aqsh bahut achi tukbandi ka muzayra aap dono dwara,mubarakbaad aur daad! Pls continue the rythm! God Bless!
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2013, 08:43:07 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  Waah hriday ji jawab nahi aapke bhi jawab.. superbbbbbbbb tha.. chaliye ek aur romantic koshish meri bhi

Lo aa gaye hum qareeb phir na door jaane ke liye
Tumse kiya hua har ek waada aaj nibhaane ke liye

Badhti hai beqarari is dil ki toh aur badhne do zara
Raat ka aana abhi baaki is dil ko behlaane ke liye

Hai tapish muhabbat ki dono taraf kuch is tarah
Betaab hai badal bhi aaj paani barsaane ke liye

Lag jaaye aag phir is barsaat ke mausam mein
Kah rahi saansein muhabbat ko aazmane ke liye

Tumhare har geet ko apne labon par sajaon mai
Bikheron apni har ada deewangi badhaane ke liye
 



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masssttt, zabardasssttt, raapchik, jhakkaas, mazaa aa gayaa, kyaa kehne ji kyaa kehne, bahut bahut khoob...!!! lijiye meraa jawaab bhi haazir hai....!!!


dene  ke  liye  tumhein  main  gulaab  laal  laayaa hoon
rang  dun  tumhein is  liye  thodaa  gulaal laayaa hoon

kab  se  chal  rahaa  thaa main  akele  is zamaane mein
ab  karne  ishq  main  aashiquon  ki chaal  laayaa hoon

jo  tumhaare  khoobsoorat  se  dil  ko pasand aa jaaye
mohabbat kare  tum se  woh  dil bemisaal laayaa hoon

paagal  saa  ho  gayaa thaa, tumhaari  tasveer dekh ke
usko  tumhaare  deedaar  ke liye sambhaal laayaa hoon

kyaa laayaa hoon  tumhaare liye, ab kyaa kahun tumse
kyaa rahoge umra  bhar saath, yeh sawaal laayaa hoon

naa rahe koi shikaayat  tumhe main karun ishq der tak
fursat  ke  kuch lamhein apne  main filhaal laayaa hoon


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masssttt, zabardasssttt, raapchik, jhakkaas, mazaa aa gayaa, kyaa kehne ji kyaa kehne, bahut bahut khoob...!!! lijiye meraa jawaab bhi haazir hai....!!!


dene  ke  liye  tumhein  main  gulaab  laal  laayaa hoon
rang  dun  tumhein is  liye  thodaa  gulaal laayaa hoon

kab  se  chal  rahaa  thaa main  akele  is zamaane mein
ab  karne  ishq  main  aashiquon  ki chaal  laayaa hoon

jo  tumhaare  khoobsoorat  se  dil  ko pasand aa jaaye
mohabbat kare  tum se  woh  dil bemisaal laayaa hoon

paagal  saa  ho  gayaa thaa, tumhaari  tasveer dekh ke
usko  tumhaare  deedaar  ke liye sambhaal laayaa hoon

kyaa laayaa hoon  tumhaare liye, ab kyaa kahun tumse
kyaa rahoge umra  bhar saath, yeh sawaal laayaa hoon

naa rahe koi shikaayat  tumhe main karun ishq der tak
fursat  ke  kuch lamhein apne  main filhaal laayaa hoon


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Bahut khooooooooooooob hridayji.. beautiful reply.. mai aapko jawaab darr darr ke de rahi hoon..

Na mujhe gulaal do na hi gulaab do
Meri aankhon ko bas apne khwaab do

Rang jaaon mai bas tumhare rang mein
Pyaar apna mujhe tum ab behisaab do

Math karo sawaal umr bhar ke saath ka
Meri wafa ka kaise doge sila jawaab do

Fursat ke lamhon mein lutakar apna pyaar
Mere labon ko apne labon se sharaab do

Mehek jaaye fiza bhi pyaar ki kushboo se
Subah aisi tum mujhe ek lajawaab do

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«Reply #13 on: August 29, 2013, 10:49:39 PM »
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Main samajh saktaa hoon Aqsh ji aapki problem, magar humein darnaa nahi chahiye, hamaari life hai, aur humein poori chhoot hai use apne andaaz mein jeene ki, kisi aur ko rights q den ise dictate karne ka... ummeed kartaa hoon aap meri baat samajh rahe hain...!!!

baaki aapkaa jawaab to hameshaa ki tarhaa lajawaab hi hai... koi doubt nahi... bahut pyaaraa jawaab diyaa hai aapne...

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teri  hi  khushboo  se hum sanwar jaayenge
hum mohabbat me toot ke bikhar jaayenge

jab  bhi  aankh  band kar humein dhundegi
hum tere  har  khwaab mein nazar aayenge

roshan  kar  mohabbat se teri duniyaa hum
har  andhere  ko  tujh  se  dur kar jaayenge

cheen ke aansuon  ko  teri aankhon se hum
zindagi  teri   khushiyon   se  bhar jaayenge

kabhi  qaraar  mile  to  kabhi  beqaraari  ho
kuch  is   tarhaa  tujhpe  asar  kar jaayenge

zarurat  pade  agar  kabhi  jaan  dene  ki to
waadaa hai tujhse  pehle  hi  mar  jaayenge


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«Reply #14 on: August 30, 2013, 12:30:27 AM »
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Kya Baat Hai Hridayji Bahut Khoobsurat Kalaam Pesh Kiya Hai Aap Ne.


samajhte  hain  woh  hamaaraa  dil unke shringaar pe aayaa hai
kyaa bataayen unki saadgi ne humein deewaanaa banaayaa hai


paas  aane  ke  liye  har  bahaanaa  kaafi hogaa
dil  lubhaane  ke  liye  sharmaanaa  kaafi hogaa

dhadkanein  tez  karne  ke  liye  kyaa  chaahiye
aa  ke  baahon  mein  simat jaanaa kaafi hogaa

baarish  ke   liye   baadal  ki   kyaa  zarurat  hai
aankhon  mein  kaajal  lagaa  lenaa kaafi hogaa

parchhaai  khud  hi  apnaa  raastaa dhund legi
sirf  tumhaaraa  saath  nibhaanaa  kaafi hogaa

qatl  karne  ke  liye   khanjar   ki  kyaa  zarurat
tumhaari  nazar  ko  jhukaa  lenaa  kaafi hogaa

tasveer  khoobsurat  koi  ban  jaaye  apne aap
tumhaaraa saamne  baith  jaanaa  kaafi hogaa

kisi ko  shaayar banaa  de   aankhein tumhaari
sirf  tumhaaraa  nazar  aa  jaanaa  kaafi hogaa

nashey ke liye ab sharaab  ki  kyaa  zarurat hai
bas  tumhaaraa kareeb  aa jaanaa  kaafi hogaa

mohabbat  kisi  saadhu ko bhi  ho jaaye tumse
pyaar se tumhaaraa  muskuraanaa kaafi hogaa


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