Kaash ke na chup rahta mai

by bekarar on November 17, 2008, 07:37:47 AM
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«Reply #45 on: November 19, 2008, 09:50:31 PM »
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ehsaas jo jage dil me,
lab pe thartharate,
kuch tum badhete aage,
kuch hum paas aate,

rahega ab ye gila,
khud se umra bhar,
kaash teri pooja ke,
hum phool ban jaate,
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«Reply #46 on: November 19, 2008, 10:01:39 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 19, 2008, 09:50:31 PM
ehsaas jo jage dil me,
lab pe thartharate,
kuch tum badhete aage,
kuch hum paas aate,

rahega ab ye gila,
khud se umra bhar,
kaash teri pooja ke,
hum phool ban jaate,


Wah kaya baat hai... simple shabdo main bahootgahri baat kah gaye app... magar lagta hai ki apko humri last likhi dono poems pasand nahi aii... ek bhi comment nahi  Crying

Gille shikawo main ab ise nibhana hai
jo na kah sake kabhi, wo dil ki baatein dil main dabana hai
dikhte ho ajj bhi jab tum kahin achanak rasto main
hans kar unhi, apne armaano ko samjhana hai
kash kah jaate jo tum yah sab, hanste umatbhar sung sung
ab to kabhi hans kar, kabhi ro kar, is dil ko manana hai
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«Reply #47 on: November 19, 2008, 10:47:24 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 19, 2008, 08:41:18 PM
Apki baat ka ab kaya jawab du Bekarar ji, magar ajj such mai apne University ke din yaad aa gaye...

ek waqat tha jab, app jaise dosto sung mehfil sajaya karte the
baat baat per, shayri se apni baat batlaya karte the
kuch wo kahte, kuch hum kahte, mil jul kar gazal banaya karte the
shayri ki antakshari se ek duje ko rijhaya karte the


Quote from: Pooja on November 19, 2008, 09:05:14 PM
Ok ji ek try aor..shayad app sabko pasand ayye, kalam ke man ki udaan se kuch lines yaha likhne ja rahi hu..

Holi ka wo din, jab charo aor se yah tan ghir ayya tha
Bebasi ke us alam main, tumhare piche khud ko chupaya tha
Asamjhata se tumne, bheer ko samjhaya tha
Kuch bole tumhe, per jorr na kisi ka chal paaya tha

Peeth tumahri per rakh hath, munh humne chupaya tha
Tumne bhi piche kar ek hath, hume sehlaya tha
Na ho khatam wo pal, man main tab, bas yahi ayya tha
Bas hum he hai do, yah ahsaas man mai kahin ayya tha

Bin kahe bhi kah gaye tum bahoot kuch
Yah man garv se tum per bhar ayya tha
Chua tha jo tumko un dar ke palo main
Ajj bhi us ahsaas ne, armaano ko sulagaya tha



Post karne ke baad, dhayan gaya ki yah post thread ke title se hat kar likhi gai mujhse. hummm... agge se dhayan rahega Bekarar ji... yah kalam bhi na jab chalna shuru karti hai, kai baar apne raste se behak jaati hai.. DOH sone pe suahaga yah ki khumar-e-ishaq main kalam chal rahi hai...  NaNaNa
Quote from: Pooja on November 19, 2008, 10:01:39 PM
Wah kaya baat hai... simple shabdo main bahootgahri baat kah gaye app... magar lagta hai ki apko humri last likhi dono poems pasand nahi aii... ek bhi comment nahi  Crying

Gille shikawo main ab ise nibhana hai
jo na kah sake kabhi, wo dil ki baatein dil main dabana hai
dikhte ho ajj bhi jab tum kahin achanak rasto main
hans kar unhi, apne armaano ko samjhana hai
kash kah jaate jo tum yah sab, hanste umatbhar sung sung
ab to kabhi hans kar, kabhi ro kar, is dil ko manana hai



maaf kijiyega mai reply me jaakar kuch der gayab ho gaya tha....isliye jawab nahi de paya....achcha nahi bahoot achcha likha hai aapne..aur khumaar me khumaar hi to chal raha hai..kahin kuch off topic mujhe to dikhai nahi diya....
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«Reply #48 on: November 20, 2008, 02:29:49 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2008, 06:34:01 PM
AD ji,
bahoot shukriya...aapne ise padha aur pasand kiya....kai baar hum shayar log ya kahen ki shayrana mijaj ke log kisi choti si ghatna ko bhi apni kalpana ke sahare kaafi aage badha dte hain to kabhi kisi aur ke jajbaaton ko apne shabdon ka sahara de dete hain.....isliye har nazm ya kavita sachchi to ho sakti hai par likhne wale ki aap beeti ho jaroori nahi.....
baharhaal aapki dua ke liye fir se tah-e-dil se shukriya
bahot sachee baat kee apne.... as ever, i am always hear!
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«Reply #49 on: November 20, 2008, 03:01:37 PM »
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SABNE BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI

KABHI KABHI KUCH BAATEIN
DIL MEIN RAHE JATI HAI
OR LAFZ PAR AATEIN HI
DAGMAGA JATI HAI
KIS KO PATA HAI
KIS KO KHABAR HAI
KAB KYA HONA HAI
JO HOGA JAISE HOGA
ACHA HI HOGA

JO NA KAHE SAKE
USKO NOOR,USSE BHI ACHA DETA
JO DARTEIN RAHE ,USAY BHI HIMMAT DETA HAI
OR LADTEIN RAHE USAY AAGE CHALNA SIKHATA HAI
JO SAMJHTE RAHE USAY BHI AAGE PAHLOON KA NAZRANA DIKHTA HAI

JHIL SI AANKHON MEIN KUCH TOH HOTA HAI
KUCH MASUMIYAT KUCH SHARARATI SA EHSAAS HOTA HAI
BAS YOUN SAMJHON KI HAR DHARKAN MEIN USKA EK SAAZ HOTA HAI
YOUN TOH HUM KAHETE NAHI KI YE HAR KISI KI ZINDAGI MEIN HOTA HAI
MAGAR JAB KISI ZINDAGI MEIN HOTA HAI TOH BESHUMAAR HOTA HAI


ZINDAGI KO HUM DEER MEIN SAMJHTE
TAB HUM PATHAR KE DIL HOTE
JAB SAMJH PATE
TAB APNE SE DOOR PATE
KASH KE NA CHUP RAHE PATE
............................

************************************MUSKAN***********************
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«Reply #50 on: November 20, 2008, 04:27:09 PM »
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shukaria Muskaan and nice one dear!!!
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«Reply #51 on: November 20, 2008, 04:36:52 PM »
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UR WELCOME 'POOJA JI' AND THANK YOU SO MUCH

KASH AISA HOTA
KI NASEEB BHI HUMARE SATH HOTA
LOG BHI SATH DETE OR HUM BOL JATEIN
KYA KHABAR THI KYA NASEEB THA
JO HONA THA WOH HO GYA
JO NA HO SAKA WOH RAHE GAYA
KASH KE NA CHUP RAHETE
TOH LOG KISI KO PA LETE
APNA LETE ZINDAGI BANA LETE..........

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«Reply #52 on: November 23, 2008, 04:04:26 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 18, 2008, 04:40:55 PM
Lil bro apke liye yah lines likh rahi hu:

Armaano ko kalam bana kar
khwabo ko shabd de jao tum
jo bhi ayye man-tarang main
wo he likhte jao tum
kaya hai dard aor kaya hai khumar
zajbaato ko khud behkaao tum
lekhani teri per vishwaas mujhe
meri baat per kar vishwaas, khumar main likhte jao tum

Koshish,.

Khumaar Mohabbat Se Mujhe Na Milaa Kabhi,.
Is Liye Mohabbat Ka Naam Achcha Nahi Lagta,.

Mohabbat Fareb Hai, Dhoka Hai, Ghamo Ki Tasweer Hai,.
Isliye "Pooja" Mujhe Mohabbat Ka Koi Waada, Sachcha Nahi Lagta,.

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«Reply #53 on: November 24, 2008, 04:21:36 AM »
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Lil bro ji

armano se apni wafa nibhaye ja
pyar main apna dil dhadkaye ja
ho jayegi her dua tere dil ki poori
sahi raah per, suche man se kadam badaye ja
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«Reply #54 on: November 24, 2008, 01:41:08 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 24, 2008, 04:21:36 AM
Lil bro ji

armano se apni wafa nibhaye ja
pyar main apna dil dhadkaye ja
ho jayegi her dua tere dil ki poori
sahi raah per, suche man se kadam badaye ja

Nice One Sis,.

Ek Koshish Karenge Phir Se Dil Lagaane Ki,.
Apne Veeraan Ghar Mein Koi Mehfill Sajaane Ki,.

Bewafaa Mera Sanam Tha, Mohabbat Ka Koi Dosh Nahi,.
Galat Tha Main Mohabbat Ko Ilzaam De Diya,.
Maaf Kardo "Doston" Khata is Deewaane Ki,.

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«Reply #55 on: November 24, 2008, 02:52:02 PM »
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 Applause Applause
bahoot khoob muskaan,...
nice one pooja ji and good reply Azeem....
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«Reply #56 on: November 24, 2008, 08:00:12 PM »
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bahoot khoob lil bro... sahi kaha apne... dost he daga dete hai to phir ilzaam muhobat ko kyun?
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«Reply #57 on: November 25, 2008, 01:42:06 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 24, 2008, 08:00:12 PM
bahoot khoob lil bro... sahi kaha apne... dost he daga dete hai to phir ilzaam muhobat ko kyun?



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Bekaraar Bhai,.

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Khwaabon Mein Dekhoon Tujhe, Aur Samjhoon Ke Mulakhaat Hai,.

Wo Daur Hi Ajeeb Tha,.
Jab Tu Mere Kareeb Tha,.

Raat Bhi Mujhpe Nisaar Thi,.
Tu Mere Dil Ki Kali Thi Bahaar Thi,.

Ye Baat Thi Us Zamaane Ki,.
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«Reply #58 on: November 25, 2008, 04:23:32 PM »
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yah hui na baat lil bro... bahoot khoob likha apne!!!

dil mai hajaro the sawal
na jaane dekhein kitne khawab
kash kah jaate jo hum
ajj bhi hote hum sath- sath
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«Reply #59 on: November 28, 2008, 08:27:39 AM »
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unhen to milee hai kuduurat se tazgi
chup to rahe khol kar razdari ka pitara
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