kaash main vo aaftaab ban jauu...

by pallavi on May 24, 2005, 02:34:56 PM
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bass ek nazar ka paimana ho,
mohabbat ka jaam bane,
na rukh rahe deewaano ka maykhaane ki taraf,
kaash ki ek pal liye.
main vo sharab ban jau...

nazar na hatey ,
is kadar dil khoobsoorat ho,
jawaab na ho jiski dilkashi ka,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo haseen gulaab ban jau....

zindgi ko jinki phir se naya rang mil jaaye,
jala de un deewaaano ke gamo ko,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo tezaab ban jauu...

kar de roushan har gamgeen dil ko,
raah mil jaaye har bhatke musafir ko,
sukoon aa jaaye har masooom chehre pe,
murjhaaye husn me phir se noor aa jaaye,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo aaftaab ban jau...
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2005, 04:46:32 PM »
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bass ek nazar ka paimana ho,
mohabbat ka jaam bane,
na rukh rahe deewaano ka maykhaane ki taraf,
kaash ki ek pal liye.
main vo sharab ban jau...

nazar na hatey ,
is kadar dil khoobsoorat ho,
jawaab na ho jiski dilkashi ka,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo haseen gulaab ban jau....

zindgi ko jinki phir se naya rang mil jaaye,
jala de un deewaaano ke gamo ko,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo tezaab ban jauu...

kar de roushan har gamgeen dil ko,
raah mil jaaye har bhatke musafir ko,
sukoon aa jaaye har masooom chehre pe,
murjhaaye husn me phir se noor aa jaaye,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo aaftaab ban jau...


bahut aacha likha hai aap ne,......
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2005, 05:18:37 PM »
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bass ek nazar ka paimana ho,
mohabbat ka jaam bane,
na rukh rahe deewaano ka maykhaane ki taraf,
kaash ki ek pal liye.
main vo sharab ban jau...

nazar na hatey ,
is kadar dil khoobsoorat ho,
jawaab na ho jiski dilkashi ka,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo haseen gulaab ban jau....

zindgi ko jinki phir se naya rang mil jaaye,
jala de un deewaaano ke gamo ko,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo tezaab ban jauu...

kar de roushan har gamgeen dil ko,
raah mil jaaye har bhatke musafir ko,
sukoon aa jaaye har masooom chehre pe,
murjhaaye husn me phir se noor aa jaaye,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo aaftaab ban jau...


wah pallavi ji,aapki ye post bhi behad pasand aayi,keep writing. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2005, 03:06:51 PM »
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thanx nidhi & thanx tushaar ji....   abhi nayi hu yahaan.. but lag nahi raha... nice to c u ppl again...
 take care
 Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2005, 03:51:16 PM »
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bass ek nazar ka paimana ho,
mohabbat ka jaam bane,
na rukh rahe deewaano ka maykhaane ki taraf,
kaash ki ek pal liye.
main vo sharab ban jau...

nazar na hatey ,
is kadar dil khoobsoorat ho,
jawaab na ho jiski dilkashi ka,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo haseen gulaab ban jau....

zindgi ko jinki phir se naya rang mil jaaye,
jala de un deewaaano ke gamo ko,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo tezaab ban jauu...

kar de roushan har gamgeen dil ko,
raah mil jaaye har bhatke musafir ko,
sukoon aa jaaye har masooom chehre pe,
murjhaaye husn me phir se noor aa jaaye,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo aaftaab ban jau...

Bohat khoob Pallavi.....& welcome to yoindia.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2005, 09:27:58 PM »
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nice lines  Pallavi.....................keep it up dear..................................Wel come to yoindia
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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2005, 02:01:22 PM »
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thanx aaryan ji..... & thanx for welcome tooo.....
 take care
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«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2005, 02:03:34 PM »
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nice lines  Pallavi.....................keep it up dear..................................Wel come to yoindia

 thanxx a lot naveed ji...  & such a cute baby .. reallyy.. kon hai yee?
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«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2005, 03:43:12 PM »
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bass ek nazar ka paimana ho,
mohabbat ka jaam bane,
na rukh rahe deewaano ka maykhaane ki taraf,
kaash ki ek pal liye.
main vo sharab ban jau...

nazar na hatey ,
is kadar dil khoobsoorat ho,
jawaab na ho jiski dilkashi ka,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo haseen gulaab ban jau....

zindgi ko jinki phir se naya rang mil jaaye,
jala de un deewaaano ke gamo ko,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo tezaab ban jauu...

kar de roushan har gamgeen dil ko,
raah mil jaaye har bhatke musafir ko,
sukoon aa jaaye har masooom chehre pe,
murjhaaye husn me phir se noor aa jaaye,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo aaftaab ban jau...


bin dekhe teri tasveer bana sakta hu ,,..

bin soche tera haal bata sakta hu,..

meri chahat me hai itna dum,...

teri aankh ka aanso aapni aakh se gira sakta hu,...(N/M)
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«Reply #9 on: May 26, 2005, 09:49:34 PM »
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nice lines  Pallavi.....................keep it up dear..................................Wel come to yoindia

 thanxx a lot naveed ji...  & such a cute baby .. reallyy.. kon hai yee?


hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

You welcome for thanx

  and this cute baby is my beloved Erum naz....................
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2005, 06:45:08 AM »
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bass ek nazar ka paimana ho,
mohabbat ka jaam bane,
na rukh rahe deewaano ka maykhaane ki taraf,
kaash ki ek pal liye.
main vo sharab ban jau...

nazar na hatey ,
is kadar dil khoobsoorat ho,
jawaab na ho jiski dilkashi ka,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo haseen gulaab ban jau....

zindgi ko jinki phir se naya rang mil jaaye,
jala de un deewaaano ke gamo ko,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo tezaab ban jauu...

kar de roushan har gamgeen dil ko,
raah mil jaaye har bhatke musafir ko,
sukoon aa jaaye har masooom chehre pe,
murjhaaye husn me phir se noor aa jaaye,
kaash ek pal ke liye,
main vo aaftaab ban jau...


bin dekhe teri tasveer bana sakta hu ,,..

bin soche tera haal bata sakta hu,..

meri chahat me hai itna dum,...

teri aankh ka aanso aapni aakh se gira sakta hu,...(N/M)



bahut khoob tushaarr jiii .. well said... ab hum kya kahe agar aap ke ishk me itni kashish haii.. greatt...
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«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2005, 06:56:19 AM »
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hi pallavi ver nice wrote

i m ashish

this is for u

baat chalii terii aa.Nkho.n se jaa pahu.Nchii paimaane tak
khii.nch rahii hai terii ulfat aaj mujhe maiKhaane tak
ishq kii baate.n Gam kii baate.n duniyaa vaale karate hai.n
kis ne shammaa kaa dukh dekhaa kaun gayaa paravaane tak
ishq nahii.n hai tum ko mujh se sirf bahaane karatii ho
yuu.N hii bahaane qaayam rakhanaa tum mere mar jaane tak
itanaa hii kahanaa hai tum se mumkin ho to aa jaanaa
aa hii gaye to rukanaa hogaa aa.Nkho.n ke patharaane tak
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«Reply #12 on: May 27, 2005, 06:58:36 AM »
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bahut khoob pallavi
...
pilaye jao tum jaam nighao se
hum tumhare dildar bane
es dil ke lagi main e sanam
hum tumhare mahezbaan bane
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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2005, 07:05:54 AM »
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bahut khoob pallavi
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pilaye jao tum jaam nighao se
hum tumhare dildar bane
es dil ke lagi main e sanam
hum tumhare mahezbaan bane
bohat khoob ashish,tosha.
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«Reply #14 on: May 27, 2005, 07:20:51 AM »
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thanx a lot nidhi...
...
dil karta hai tujhe dekh lon ek baar
dil karta hai dil ke puri ho yeh murad
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