kaash main vo aaftaab ban jauu...

by pallavi on May 24, 2005, 02:34:56 PM
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pallavi
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«Reply #15 on: May 27, 2005, 01:36:46 PM »
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Quote from: "Tosha"
bahut khoob pallavi
...
pilaye jao tum jaam nighao se
hum tumhare dildar bane
es dil ke lagi main e sanam
hum tumhare mahezbaan bane

 thanx tosha ji... & well written.... mujhe sharmm si aa gayii.. hehhe Usual Smile
 take care
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pallavi
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«Reply #16 on: May 27, 2005, 01:39:47 PM »
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hi pallavi ver nice wrote

i m ashish

this is for you

baat chalii terii aa.Nkho.n se jaa pahu.Nchii paimaane tak
khii.nch rahii hai terii ulfat aaj mujhe maiKhaane tak
ishq kii baate.n Gam kii baate.n duniyaa vaale karate hai.n
kis ne shammaa kaa dukh dekhaa kaun gayaa paravaane tak
ishq nahii.n hai tum ko mujh se sirf bahaane karatii ho
yuu.N hii bahaane qaayam rakhanaa tum mere mar jaane tak
itanaa hii kahanaa hai tum se mumkin ho to aa jaanaa
aa hii gaye to rukanaa hogaa aa.Nkho.n ke patharaane tak

 rthanx aashish ji... for liking  d words.. but....
 majbooriyoo per bass nahi mera... main  khuda nahi hu....
 kaash ishk ko mere ishk hi samjha hota tumne, bahana nahi,,,
 ek baar ehsaas karo dil se... aaj bhi tumse juda nahi hu...
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«Reply #17 on: May 27, 2005, 08:45:15 PM »
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Na tere anne ki khushi hoti hai
Na tere jaane ka gum hota hai
tum mere khayalo mai ho kaid
aor mai hu tere payar mai griftaar
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pallavi
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«Reply #18 on: May 29, 2005, 08:36:17 AM »
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Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
Na tere anne ki khushi hoti hai
Na tere jaane ka gum hota hai
tum mere khayalo mai ho kaid
aor mai hu tere payar mai griftaar

 bahut sahi kaha naveed ji aapne...  felings dono taraf ek jaisi ho to hi keh sakte hain usse real love.... well said....
 take care
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