Kaash, mein gaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!!

by abdbundeli on April 14, 2009, 01:11:04 PM
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Kaash, mein paaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!
Kaash, mein gaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!!

Rawaan hain dil mein teyrey, laakh pharhakteen gazaleyn;
Kahan chhupaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Bol mat, sirf idhar deykh! Nigah mein padhh kar,
Tujhey sunaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Jigar mein jhaank, jhaankney dey jigar mein apney;
Tujhey dikhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Padhhey hain Momin-o-Gaalib, saheeh hai; aa ab,
Tujhey padhhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Maantaa hoon, ki, sur-o-saaz hain gunaah wahaan!
Mein gungunaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Hijaab teyraa, chhupaaye hai na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Kahaan chhupaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Deykh to, gaa rahey tamaam parindey kyaa-kyaa?
Unhain sujhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Sajey hain laakh raag-o-taal teyree saansoun mein;
Kahaan sajaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Zindagee muskuraa key jii: yeh karam hai us kaa!
‘Abd’, churaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2009, 01:41:41 PM »
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Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah,
Abd Bhaiya, Kya Khioob Likha Hai Aapne,.
Dil se Nikli Hui Daad Kabool Karein,.
Allah Kareem Aur Bhi Barkath De Aapke Kalaamon Mein, Aapke Lafzon Mien,.
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2009, 01:52:20 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 14, 2009, 01:11:04 PM


Kaash, mein paaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!
Kaash, mein gaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!!

Rawaan hain dil mein teyrey, laakh pharhakteen gazaleyn;
Kahan chhupaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Bol mat, sirf idhar deykh! Nigah mein padhh kar,
Tujhey sunaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Jigar mein jhaank, jhaankney dey jigar mein apney;
Tujhey dikhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Padhhey hain Momin-o-Gaalib, saheeh hai; aa ab,
Tujhey padhhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Maantaa hoon, ki, sur-o-saaz hain gunaah wahaan!
Mein gungunaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Hijaab teyraa, chhupaaye hai na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Kahaan chhupaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Deykh to, gaa rahey tamaam parindey kyaa-kyaa?
Unhain sujhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Sajey hain laakh raag-o-taal teyree saansoun mein;
Kahaan sajaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Zindagee muskuraa key jii: yeh karam hai us kaa!
‘Abd’, churaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

- abd bundeli



kya baat hai abd sahab bhut khoob janab bhut badiya....................
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2009, 01:58:06 PM »
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Madhosh kar gayee ABD, yeh teri bey-zubaan ghazal

Mera hosh meri jaan le gayee, yeh teri be-zubaan ghazal

Kal tune kaha bohat kuch, aur humne suna kuch bhi nahi

Aur aaj GHAYEL ko lajawab kar gayee, yeh teri be-zubaan ghazal
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2009, 02:10:31 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 14, 2009, 01:41:41 PM
Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah,
Abd Bhaiya, Kya Khioob Likha Hai Aapne,.
Dil se Nikli Hui Daad Kabool Karein,.
Allah Kareem Aur Bhi Barkath De Aapke Kalaamon Mein, Aapke Lafzon Mien,.
Bohat Achche,.
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Jaanasheen bhai!Aapki nazar-e-inaayat hai janaab! Aur kyaa kahoon?
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2009, 02:12:10 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 14, 2009, 01:52:20 PM
kya baat hai abd sahab bhut khoob janab bhut badiya....................
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, aaina ji!
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2009, 02:28:09 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 14, 2009, 01:58:06 PM
Madhosh kar gayee ABD, yeh teri bey-zubaan ghazal

Mera hosh meri jaan le gayee, yeh teri be-zubaan ghazal

Kal tune kaha bohat kuch, aur humne suna kuch bhi nahi

Aur aaj GHAYEL ko lajawab kar gayee, yeh teri be-zubaan ghazal

Bahut-bahut shukriyah sajid_ghayel ji!

Kuchh kabhi kahtaa hoon; to, kahtaa kabhi kuchh bhi naheen:
Jab nidaa-ae-sanam aatee hai, lahar uthhtaa hoon!
Bahr-e-jazbaat mein, lagtaa hai, doob jaaungaa;
Par safeeney pai nishaan ban key fahar uthhtaa hoon!!

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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2009, 04:15:45 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 14, 2009, 01:11:04 PM


Kaash, mein paaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!
Kaash, mein gaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!!

Rawaan hain dil mein teyrey, laakh pharhakteen gazaleyn;
Kahan chhupaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Bol mat, sirf idhar deykh! Nigah mein padhh kar,
Tujhey sunaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Jigar mein jhaank, jhaankney dey jigar mein apney;
Tujhey dikhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Padhhey hain Momin-o-Gaalib, saheeh hai; aa ab,
Tujhey padhhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Maantaa hoon, ki, sur-o-saaz hain gunaah wahaan!
Mein gungunaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Hijaab teyraa, chhupaaye hai na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Kahaan chhupaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Deykh to, gaa rahey tamaam parindey kyaa-kyaa?
Unhain sujhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Sajey hain laakh raag-o-taal teyree saansoun mein;
Kahaan sajaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Zindagee muskuraa key jii: yeh karam hai us kaa!
‘Abd’, churaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

- abd bundeli



Waah Bundeli jee
kya baat hai jee..........
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2009, 04:22:04 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 14, 2009, 01:11:04 PM


Kaash, mein paaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!
Kaash, mein gaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!!

Rawaan hain dil mein teyrey, laakh pharhakteen gazaleyn;
Kahan chhupaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Bol mat, sirf idhar deykh! Nigah mein padhh kar,
Tujhey sunaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Jigar mein jhaank, jhaankney dey jigar mein apney;
Tujhey dikhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Padhhey hain Momin-o-Gaalib, saheeh hai; aa ab,
Tujhey padhhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal!

Maantaa hoon, ki, sur-o-saaz hain gunaah wahaan!
Mein gungunaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Hijaab teyraa, chhupaaye hai na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Kahaan chhupaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Deykh to, gaa rahey tamaam parindey kyaa-kyaa?
Unhain sujhaaun, teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Sajey hain laakh raag-o-taal teyree saansoun mein;
Kahaan sajaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

Zindagee muskuraa key jii: yeh karam hai us kaa!
‘Abd’, churaaun teyree eik bey-zabaan gazal?

- abd bundeli



Too GOOD ABD Ji.. mere paas tho alfaaz hi nahi hai.. bahoo thi khusbsurat kalaam paish kiya hai aapne. superb ABD JI
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2009, 04:53:54 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 14, 2009, 04:15:45 PM
Waah Bundeli jee
kya baat hai jee..........
Thanks pandit ji!
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2009, 04:55:33 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 14, 2009, 04:22:04 PM
Too GOOD ABD Ji.. mere paas tho alfaaz hi nahi hai.. bahoo thi khusbsurat kalaam paish kiya hai aapne. superb ABD JI
Bahut-bahut shukriyah sophi ji!
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«Reply #11 on: April 15, 2009, 05:19:53 AM »
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  u know how to promote things....gud one
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2009, 05:29:00 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 15, 2009, 05:19:53 AM
  u know how to promote things....gud one
Thanks khamosh_aawaaz ji!
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«Reply #13 on: April 15, 2009, 07:46:16 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Bahut Umda likha hai aapne Abd Ji,
Really touching lines...

Kaise samjhega tu use jo mein tere liye likhta hoon,
Wo to ek bejubaan ghazal hai...

Shally.
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«Reply #14 on: April 15, 2009, 08:22:53 AM »
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Bahut Badhiya Abd Ji !!!!
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