Kab Ayai Ga......

by palkhi on July 03, 2009, 09:15:49 PM
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Khayalon Mein Merai Atha Hai Woh,
Mujhe Sathanai kai liye,
Neendhai Chooratha Hai Woh Meri,
Mujhe Tharpanai Kai Liye,
Kwaboon Mein Atha Hai Woh,
Mujhe Tharsanai Kai Liye,
Na Jaane Kab Ayai Ga Mera Ranja,
Mujhe Appna Baananai Kai Liye...
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2009, 09:22:17 PM »
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Bohot khoob palkhi ji, ek geet yaad aagaya

Aayegaa aayega aane waala aayega aayega..... Usual Smile

Bas ye pata nahi kab aayega. Laughing hard

Bohot achha likha hai isi tarah likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2009, 09:23:22 PM »
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InshAllah bahaut jald ayega woh...Bahaut achi tarha ek pyaari si darkhwast ko pesh kiya hai Palkhi jee...Applause

Ek purana likha hua shaer yaad agaya jo aise hi situation pe likha tha jab koi apna mehboob pane ki darkhwast kar raha tha...


Duniya ki moj main andhe hoke usse pane ki darkhwast karte rahe Rahim,
Kabhi dekha hi nahin ke woh dil ke darwaze par gutne tikae baitha tha...
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2009, 09:35:16 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on July 03, 2009, 09:23:22 PM

Duniya ki moj main andhe hoke usse pane ki darkhwast karte rahe Rahim,
Kabhi dekha hi nahin ke woh dil ke darwaze par gutne tikae baitha tha...

Waah Waah zabardast! A.rahim bhai bohot khoob...
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2009, 10:17:21 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2009, 10:30:58 PM »
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Excellent work Ms. Palkhi Bravo!
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2009, 02:58:54 AM »
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Good work Palkhi Ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2009, 05:27:04 PM »
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Areeeeee Wah Palkhi Sis.. Kya Baat hai dear.. Behad Hi Khubsoorat Alfaazon ke sath Pekh kiya hai is Rachna ko.. Lajawab Ehasaaas hain Sis.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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