Kabhee aise bhee guzaaraa karte.......Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on June 10, 2011, 05:48:27 AM
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Saath hum din kabhee aise bhee guzaaraa karte
vaadee me doobatee shaamoN kaa nazaaraa kare

ik aawaaz pe aawaazeN kai aa jaateeN
in pahaadoN se jo tum mujhko pukaaraa karte

bhar ke baahoN me bhigo dete ye paagal baadal
pyaar se unko agar koi ishaaraa karte

ye nazar paar chinaaroN ke chalee jaatee thee
rooth ke tum jo kabhee mujhse kinaaraa karte

oonchee neechee see dagar aur lachaktaa saa badan
kabhee shaakhoN kaa kabhee teraa sahaaraa karte

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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2011, 06:33:31 AM »
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waah ..bahut khoob, aisi soch aur likhawat ..subhaan-allah!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2011, 06:37:32 AM »
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Mamta Ji,

Bahut khoob.. kya ghazal kahee hai
maza aa gaya..aur beete din bhi..

Pichhle 25-30 saalon se pahaadon men
hee raha hoon. Woh guzare huye din
yaad aa gaye aapki ghazal padhkar.
 
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2011, 08:08:55 AM »
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Shukriyaa Annu jee!
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2011, 08:12:50 AM »
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Satish jee!
Khushi hui jaan kar keh aap pahaadoN me rahe .....pahaadoN par sirf ghoomane hee gayee hooN ........par lagtaa hai jaise unse koi  gaharaa naataa hai.......pahaad kyaa rahasya kaa khazaanaa hai jo apne andar tamaam khoobsoorat qisooN ko chupaaye hue hai....
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2011, 08:49:55 AM »
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Kya khoob likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2011, 09:06:54 AM »
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Shukriyaa Raajaindra jee!
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2011, 10:58:35 AM »
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Mamta ji,Achhi ghazal hai.Thodi der ko, June ke mahine mei.n,pahaad ki sair ho gaii.
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2011, 11:41:52 AM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!


Waah waah waah Mamtaa Jee kia khubsurat manzar
BayaaN kiya hai aapne... Ashaar ba ashaar aapne
behad pur asar aur dilkash bayaaN kiye hai...
Waqai hum bhi un lahlhaate hare bhare pahaadoN
meiN taazi hawaa ke jhokoN ke lutf lete gaye...

Aapka ahsaas E manzar bayaaN karne ka andaaz aur
gehre khayaaloN ne un haseen pahaadoN ka tasavuri
nazaara kara diya... Usual Smile

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Aise hi umdaa aur dilkash kalaamoN ke saath aate
rahiye..... Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2011, 12:25:00 PM »
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bht khoob mamta di...
sply last one....
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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2011, 12:48:17 PM »
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Shukriyaa Siddiqui jee!
Sach kahaa aap ne.....mid june kee umas bhari garmee se khayaalon me hee sahee chhutkaaraa to mile.......to sochaa chalo pahaadoN par hee chalte haiN or khayaal kee vaadee ko rangeen banaate haiN.........
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2011, 01:46:57 PM »
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ye nazar paar chinaaroN ke chalee jaatee thee
rooth ke tum jo kabhee mujhse kinaaraa karte

Good One ... Mamta Ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2011, 04:12:53 PM »
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shukriyaa Naresh jee!
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«Reply #13 on: June 11, 2011, 04:21:24 AM »
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bahut khub
Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 10, 2011, 05:48:27 AM
Saath hum din kabhee aise bhee guzaaraa karte
vaadee me doobatee shaamoN kaa nazaaraa kare

ik aawaaz pe aawaazeN kai aa jaateeN
in pahaadoN se jo tum mujhko pukaaraa karte

bhar ke baahoN me bhigo dete ye paagal baadal
pyaar se unko agar koi ishaaraa karte

ye nazar paar chinaaroN ke chalee jaatee thee
rooth ke tum jo kabhee mujhse kinaaraa karte

oonchee neechee see dagar aur lachaktaa saa badan
kabhee shaakhoN kaa kabhee teraa sahaaraa karte

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2011, 10:55:55 AM »
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ahaaaa kya kehene mamta diii..

ek ek ashar kayamat...isi bat par aaj hi likha ek sher pesh hai...


badi ankhen sharbati honth or adaaye meetha zeher he uski
mere khuda kaise apne sanam ko kayamat ka naam dun~
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