Kabhi Geet, To Kabhi Ghazal Si Hai...(Shihab)

by majid on October 29, 2011, 07:00:46 AM
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                        Jheel  Mein  Khilte , Kanwal  Si Hai
                        Aabsharon  Mein Behte , Jal Si Hai.

                        Phool Sa Chehra , Mom  Hai Badan
                        Sar Se Paanw Tak, Chanchal Si Hai.

                        Is Qadar  Aata  Hai Sunke Lutf Use
                        Baat Mein Uski Mitthas, Phal Si Hai

                        Jitna Dekho Bas Utna Hi Khote Jao
                        Aankhon Men Ek Aisi, Jungel Si Hai.

                        Aate Hi Jaise , Khil  Sa  Jaata Hoon
                        Yad Men Uski Mehak, Sandal Si Hai.

                        Kal Rat Khwab Me Chhua Tha Usne
                        Ab Talak Seene Men, Hulchal Si Hai

                        Karun Bhi To Or Kis Tarah Pesh Use
                        Wo Kbhi Geet To Kbhi,Ghazal Si Hai



                                        ~Shihab~
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2011, 07:05:39 AM »
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                        Jheel Mein Khilte Kanwal Si Hai
                        Aabsharon Mein Behte Jal Si Hai. Applause Applause

                        Phool Sa Chehra , Mom Hai Badan
                        Sar Se Panw Tak,Chanchal Si Hai. Applause Applause

                        Is Qadar Aata  Hai Sunke Lutf Use
                        Baat Mein Uski Mitthas, Phal Si Hai Applause Applause

                        Jitna Dekho Bas Utna Hi Khote Jao
                        Aankhon Men Ek Aisi Jungel Si Hai. Applause Applause

                        Aate Hi Jaise , Khil Sa  Jaata Hoon
                        Yaad Men Uski Mehak Sandal Si Hai. Applause Applause

                        Kal Rat Khwab Me Chhua Tha Usne
                        Ab Talak Seene Men Hulchal Si Hai Applause Applause

                        Karun Bhi To Or Kis Tarah Pesh Use
                        Wo Kbhi Geet To Kbhi,Ghazal Si Hai Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause





                                        ~Shihab~



BAhut Hi Umda Gazal Kahi Hai Shihab ji

Dil Se Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2011, 07:07:06 AM »
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                       Jheel Mein Khilte Kanwal Si Hai
                        Aabsharon Mein Behte Jal Si Hai.

                        Phool Sa Chehra , Mom Hai Badan
                        Sar Se Panw Tak,Chanchal Si Hai.

                        Is Qadar Aata  Hai Sunke Lutf Use
                        Baat Mein Uski Mitthas, Phal Si Hai

                        Jitna Dekho Bas Utna Hi Khote Jao
                        Aankhon Men Ek Aisi Jungel Si Hai.

                        Aate Hi Jaise , Khil Sa  Jaata Hoon
                        Yaad Men Uski Mehak Sandal Si Hai.

                        Kal Rat Khwab Me Chhua Tha Usne
                        Ab Talak Seene Men Hulchal Si Hai

                        Karun Bhi To Or Kis Tarah Pesh Use
                        Wo Kbhi Geet To Kbhi,Ghazal Si Hai



                                        ~Shihab~

Respected Shihab sahab
Apki post par pahla reply post krte hue dar sa lag raha hai. mujhme itni samajh to nahi par apke shabd vakai jadu bhare hai..sabhi ashaar ek se badhkar ek hai..last 2 to..vaah vaah , hajaro baar padhne vale hai aur dil me ek gudgudi si paida karte hai.. Laajavab.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2011, 07:09:58 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shihab ji bahut khoob ghazal hai yaaaaaaaaaaaaa geet hai.
jo bhi hai bahut khoob hai.
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2011, 09:19:02 AM »
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Azizam,bahut khoob likha hai.Yeh sher khususi taur per bahut bahut pasand aaya.Likhte rahiye.Hasan

                        Kal Rat Khwab Me Chhua Tha Usne
                        Ab Talak Seene Men, Hulchal Si Hai


                                       
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2011, 09:46:39 AM »
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Waah bahut hi umda ehsas shihab ji bahut khoob...
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2011, 10:54:57 AM »
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Shihab Sahaab Aadaab!


Bade Dino Bad aap koi kalaam lekar hazir huye hai..
Badi khub kalaam kahi hai aapne... Behad khub lafzoN meiN
mehboob ke husn ko bayaaN kiya hai janab... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe .. humari dili daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Aur in ashaaroN par anginat daad janab.. waqai shayari ke
johar dikhaye hai aapne.. Usual Smile

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



                       

                        Aate Hi Jaise , Khil  Sa  Jaata Hoon
                        Yad Men Uski Mehak, Sandal Si Hai..

                        Kal Rat Khwab Me Chhua Tha Usne
                        Ab Talak Seene Men, Hulchal Si Hai




                                        ~Shihab~


Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2011, 11:40:55 AM »
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"Ab talak seene main, hulchul si hai"
Wah Wah Wah aur Wah..
Shihab bhai, kayi dino kay baad apko parra..
Dil ko bahaut khushi hui..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Likte rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2011, 04:09:28 PM »
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                        Jheel  Mein  Khilte , Kanwal  Si Hai
                        Aabsharon  Mein Behte , Jal Si Hai.

                        Phool Sa Chehra , Mom  Hai Badan
                        Sar Se Paanw Tak, Chanchal Si Hai.

                        Is Qadar  Aata  Hai Sunke Lutf Use
                        Baat Mein Uski Mitthas, Phal Si Hai

                        Jitna Dekho Bas Utna Hi Khote Jao
                        Aankhon Men Ek Aisi, Jungel Si Hai.

                        Aate Hi Jaise , Khil  Sa  Jaata Hoon
                        Yad Men Uski Mehak, Sandal Si Hai.

                        Kal Rat Khwab Me Chhua Tha Usne
                        Ab Talak Seene Men, Hulchal Si Hai

                        Karun Bhi To Or Kis Tarah Pesh Use
                        Wo Kbhi Geet To Kbhi,Ghazal Si Hai



                                        ~Shihab~


Shihabji,
Bahut hi khubsurat kalam hai.Wah! Kya kahne.
Bahut khoob.
Daad kubul kijiye.

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2011, 04:15:52 PM »
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nice work......shihab ji
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«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2011, 05:00:58 AM »
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bht hi khoobsurat peshkash shihab ji....
Bht dino baad aapka likha hua kuch padha.....
Excellent lines....
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2011, 05:13:58 AM »
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Shihab Ji,

Waah waah bahut hi khoobsoorat
ghazal pesh kee hai aapne
tabeeyat khush ho gayee.

Jheel  Mein  Khilte , Kanwal  Si Hai
Aabsharon  Mein Behte , Jal Si Hai.

Is Qadar  Aata  Hai Sunke Lutf Use
Baat Mein Uski Mitthas, Phal Si Hai

Aate Hi Jaise , Khil  Sa  Jaata Hoon
Yad Men Uski Mehak, Sandal Si Hai.

Kal Rat Khwab Me Chhua Tha Usne
Ab Talak Seene Men, Hulchal Si Hai

Karun Bhi To Or Kis Tarah Pesh Use
Wo Kbhi Geet To Kbhi,Ghazal Si Hai

Yeh ashaar bahut bahut khoobsoorat lage.

Dheron daad aur hazaaron shubhkaamnaayen.

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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2011, 06:16:14 AM »
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behad haseen Peshkash Shihaab ji--

iss khubsurat post ko dher saari daad aur aapko mubarakbaad.

muskurate rahie
khus rahie
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«Reply #13 on: October 31, 2011, 04:00:54 AM »
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 Applause Applause jitni daad dee jaaye kam hai shihab ji
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«Reply #14 on: November 04, 2011, 07:06:59 PM »
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bohat khoob shihab ji
Mahboob ki tahsin se labrez
Aapki ye post mast mast hai ji
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